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This is the kind of writing that needs to reach out to maximum audience. Have u thought about forwarding this to the makers Arunita. They should know how brilliant this and it can be a superhit story onscreen. 👏

The argument is very valid. Thanks for presenting it in such a beautiful manner. I wait eagerly for next update aru. 👏😃

Thanks Rosefairy I enjoyed reading it.

Fantastic update. Waiting for the next update.

Nice update

You are a master story teller. I love this update very much. How will Mahadev get Annapoorna and his beloved wife back. Will wait for the nxt update.

aru superb update. Please update next soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Oonagh

This is the kind of writing that needs to reach out to maximum audience. Have u thought about forwarding this to the makers Arunita. They should know how brilliant this and it can be a superhit story onscreen. 👏

wow indu thanks for such a suggestion but i don't think anyone from makers will have any interest in reading my version i can ask utkarshji but m sure he won't even read my tweet

Diyadi thanks dear but i don't have money to publish or i won't waste coz who will read it buying??

Jaya mam at last u read am so glad u liked it

everyone thanks for ur kind comments 1st time tried re writing already existing story and from ur comments looked like my attempt is partially successful

thanks again

Oye Tune naam change kar dia 😲

BTW finally read many of the updates.. bas.. left with 2 or three..
chal do update soon..
awesome updates 👏

read it at one go and your imaginative writing has stunned me to silence..really awaiting the next update