OS: Kanya Kumari [The Virgin Goddess] - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
Each update is fantastic. The last one is a masterpiece. Thanks Jay. 😊
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IMMORTAL ?

Evil stood with an air of amused expression.

Shakthi was going to be united with Shiva.

His left eye twitched, he was not sure if it was anger or euphoria?

Only a Virgin can bring you to your end!!!!! He remembered the boon he was granted by Brahma!!

He threw back his head and laughed,

I am IMMORTAL

I AM IMMORTAL. he addressed the devatas, his voice chortling, Swarglok will be mine, this Earth will be mine, he took a swing of Wine

Shakthi…. He addressed Mahakali herself.. …. Become one with your Mahamayya.

I AM WAITING FOR YOUR UNION

…AND THEN YOU WILL BE BHANASUR'S

The wine dribble down his chin as sniggered.

Narda, Indradev, and other Devtas stood with their Palms in supplication.

Shriranga reclined with an Innocent smile.

Mahadev.. Shakthi..…… Indra dev trailed off as Vishnu's look pierced him.

My apologies he murmured, his eyes downcast.

Jagannatha's eyes spoke to Narda.

With a bow Narda returned to Nanjil Nadu.

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Posted: 12 years ago
PREPARATION FOR THE DIVINE UNION

Suchindram and Nanjil Nadu wore a look of festivity.

Every street, Every house was decorated.

Fragrant flower garlands embellished the homes

Roses, Jasmine, Lotus, Lillies filled the air with their intoxicating aroma,

Kollam made out of white rice powder meticulously drawn by the young girls adorned all the streets and roads,

Large OttuVellakku, [BRASS LAMPS] filled with til oil lit up every door and window.

The Two temples were a sight to behold.

Every nook and corner had a small lamp glimmering.

A Maha Kumbabishekam [ POOJA OF THE KALASHA ON THE TOP OF THE TEMPLE] was in progress.

Puja and homam for the 'Vastu purusha' was being conducted, in Suchindram for Shiva and in Nanjil Nadu for Shakthi. Vedic mantras were chanted and homam performed in the several homa kund that was built around the temples. A large number of pots (kalasha) was placed in front of the vatgasalasm. The pots contained holy water covered with mango leaves with a coconut kept in the centre entwined on the outside with a piece of thread. The water in these pots were brought from the holy rivers of Ganga, Yamuna and Saraswati.

The water was thus sanctified and poured on the Kalasham on the top of the gopuram of the temples amidst chantings that vibrated and purified every living soul on earth.

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CAN HER BEAUTY BE DESCRIBED?

Shakthi sat her head demurely bent, as Jaya and Vijaya braided her long hair.

Roses deep red in colour was attached the braid. The Rakodi had small jasmine flowers arranged around it.

The Netti Chutti lay on her forehead; the rubies twinkled every time she moved

Deep Vermillion color kumkumam in a perfect round sat in-between her black feather like eyebrows.

Chandanam paste was applied on her blushing cheeks.

Her eyes large, doe shaped, more enhanced with black Khol, were luminous.

Her mookuthi, An emerald on one side and diamonds on the other glinted in the sunlight.

The bullakku nested shyly on her lips.

Kasu Malai around her neck, and Vanki around her upper arm. Jhumki with beautiful pearls twirled from her ears,

Her lips turned up making a dimple appear on her cheeks. Vijaya placed a small black Khol dot on her chin and stood back to look at Pure exquisiteness.

Shakthi's Pavadi was replaced with Nine Yards Podavai [ 9 yards saree], a deep maroon, around her small waist was a gold Odyanam.

Green, gold, and red bangles tinkled around her delicate wrists.

The golussu [anklets] sang in happiness.

Her palms were decorated with Marudani [mehendi] which she looked at every now and then. She saw her Shiva through the bright red spot in the center.

Her beauty was sublime, those who saw her felt themselves awakened from within, they were enlightened just by being in her presence.

Shiva was mesmerized with his bride.

You are not supposed to look swami, she blushed.

Lalataksha was unperturbed, his gaze transfixed on her eyes, her eyelashes long and black covered its coyness.

My eyes are unable to look elsewhere parvathi and unabashed Shiva continued to adore his Parashakthi.

Before the Cock Crows swami, she lifted her eyes to meet his, before the first ray of sun, she reminded him.


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
Karunima thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow the last update so romantic.
The detailed description of the ultimate union wonderful.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Wow! Wow! I am reading something MINDBLOWING!!! Keep up the the fantastic work...
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Posted: 12 years ago

KASU MALAI

VANKI [ UPPER ARM BAND]

BULLAKKU [ CENTER NOSE PIN]

JHUMKI

9 YARDS SOUTH INDIAN STYLE
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Posted: 12 years ago
KHUMBABISHEKAM - PURIFICATION OF THE TEMPLE BY DOING POOJA TO THE KHUMBAM ON TOP OF THE TEMPLE.

KOLLAM MADE FROM RICE FLOUR

OTTA VILLAKKU [ BRASS LAMP]

Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super duper romantic update I can actually imagine my moharika in this scenario blush blush 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late reply catched multiple updates at once whenever i read this OS i feel like "i want to watch this in DKDM no matter what"this beautyful piece of work needs to come alive onscreen i cant tell how desperate i am to watch this beautyful story in DKDM god please listen us please Jay you need to put all the chapters of this OS into a blog whichi will be easy for DKDM cvs to read we surely need to do sumthing what say guys😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful screenplay indeed Jay should be adapted in DKDM. I really hope they take notice of this. Even UT will be shocked. Loved the update and thanks for all the pics..👏

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