Kumara Sambhavam- Completed- Updates on Pg 13

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sia221

@sia221

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Sorry to just jump in like this.. but the moment I saw this post was by U...I knew I had to read this one...😆

Read all the chap... back to back...

And simply amazing.. Varaali...!!

From the initial chapters I thought it was going to be a serious.. romantic story..but its not.. esp the last 3 ones... !! ROFLing...!! 😆

Poor Bhole-nath...!! 😆

waiting for the next part.. Do continue...!!

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Vrish

@Vr15h

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Varaali

What're you trying to do, kill us w/ laughter? I just choked reading this 🤣

The snake whispered into his ears " Forget all that. Tell her I love you'."

Shiva cleared his throat again and began "Er'Parvati'.Nagaraja would like me to tell you that' he loves me"

Parvati gave him a look of total incredulity.

"No'no" winced Nagaraja "Say.. you love her"

"Oh" comprehension dawned on Shiva's face. He began once again "Er'Parvati'Nagaraja tells me I should tell you that I love you."

Maybe Naagraj & Chandra-dev need to hire Saraswati to teach him first person and second person grammatical differences 🤣

Edited by .Vrish. - 12 years ago

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hemavidz

@hemavidz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

so the mission accomplished😉waiting for next chapter😳

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varaali

@varaali

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Thank you Tarakari, Kadamvari, Sia, Vrish and Hema.

Kadamvari- I am planning to have one more chapter- the actual birth of Skanda.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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+ 32

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

wow that was one superb upd.

just fab.loved it.

waiting for more.👏

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Diala

@Diala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Varaali,

I am truly amazed by your style and depth of content. Each word you have chosen and each dialog seems so apt for the situation and the humor made me revisit some of the chapters again and again ! Many of the facts are new and interesting to me. Hats off 👏 !

Speedgal

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I told varu even before reading it will be fantastic.
Superb suupeeerb,, loved the great humour in a well a serious situation. muuuah waiting for next update..

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Vanadhirayarservai

@vanadhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Shiva began "Parvati...I have not wanted you the way you want me to want ...No no...wait... You want me to want you but I have not wanted...Wait...not that..." Mahadev's voice trailed away as he racked his memory furiously to recollect what Chandra and Nagaraja had said.

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤢oh Bhole nath u need complan memory plus to voo her

u are always outstanding vaarali akka thanks for the pm 😆