OS- Waiting for the Swayamwar

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Quick imaginative means to make Sati yogya ;) as we have no time


Sati asks Revathi to leave her and stays in front of Mahadev's murti, staring at him... Why did he do it? He came himself, making so many useless murti?


She remembered everything that happened at Shagun. Falling gifts, trembling fingers. Sathbish breaking his murti. Strange boy was so courageous, and he became nicer with this scar, with some freedom glimpsing in his eyes. He became free and stronger ... What about her? As Revathi reverberated her fathers words, she's also free from her sankalp, but why she's not happy. How has it turned out she has lost her freedom?

Or did she have any?

She had only listened to what other said and tried to follow it.. Only once, her dance evoke something mysterious within her... That was not by someone's orders... But that was a moment, and it went away... Trying following the orders... she got lost in strict prescriptions. And what did it bring to her, she has only insulted the one who cared for her, who protected her from anything, who hold her tenderly when she was falling...

But..

He teased her by the means of terrible boy, who called her Naughty and Arrogant

And then Nandi...trying to convince her that he didn't mean her but some other girl'. But in the end it comes as it is...

He, as Jataa, freed her from marriage by making everything for this marriage to happen and telling nothing to her...

And He smiled cheerfully while saying, that like her father, he doesn't justify this rule-breaker Shiv... And then stared at her, following her sorrow and anger...

A wave of anger started rising in her heart, she felt that she would love to break something, or kill somebody... Oh, if she could follow him... She ran out of the palace and suddenly stopped. The sun was going down, the calm wind was blowing, and whole the Universe was resting...Her growing anger just burst in this harmony... reached it peak and broke into million peaces, disappearing in full party of joy and happiness. Suddenly her inner emotional volcano has burst out and left, leaving her empty amd peaceful. And she strarted hearing the sounds, the birds were humming, somewhere her servants were laughing, the wind was blowing gently. And she felt that whole the world was near her, for her amd within her, she felt the bond with every tree in the garden, with simple flower and calm wind, she was complete and relaxed. She laughed happily and heard how her laughter reverberated in every rock, in the stream, and even sleepy fish in the pond made some happily bubble

And she remembered, how Shiv had been saying:" I love you... as the whole Universe". These words had hurt her in the beginning, but now she realised what he meant.

Standing there, in the garden, she smiled calmly and said:" And the whole Universe, each and every part of it, is Me, you won't be able to escape me!"

That was the momend of Devi Shakti herself.

She stood in the garden for some hours, feelin everything inside and outside of her, filled with love and happiness. When the sun set down, she stayed for a while, meeting the night, full of whispers, fragnances and freedom. When the moon went up, she turned and went slowly to the palace.

Going to sleep in the night she suddenly heard His tender voice: "What a relief. I started thinking that you completely don't have sense of humour."

She smiled and murmured: "If you won't come to swayamvar, I'll garland your murti and will end up marrying a door keeper, I promice"

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice dear, its really good. I want to see more of ur work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing is the word...seriously just luved it...👏👍🏼

"And she remembered, how Shiv had been saying:" I love you... as the whole Universe"

Standing there, in the garden, she smiled calmly and said:" And the whole Universe, each and every part of it, is Me, you won't be able to escape me!"👏

just luved this part...u have indeed interpreted it so beautifully...m simply at loss of words...i feel so blessed to be a part of this forum...having so many talented people around...m not very gud at expressin my views...wud just say dat...u are an amazin writer...just luved ur OS...n do keep writin plzzz...😊😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Reshama.

Nice dear, its really good. I want to see more of ur work...

Oh thank you very mich that's my first experience like this :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rythmdivine

amazing is the word...seriously just luved it...👏👍🏼

"And she remembered, how Shiv had been saying:" I love you... as the whole Universe"

Standing there, in the garden, she smiled calmly and said:" And the whole Universe, each and every part of it, is Me, you won't be able to escape me!"👏

just luved this part...u have indeed interpreted it so beautifully...m simply at loss of words...i feel so blessed to be a part of this forum...having so many talented people around...m not very gud at expressin my views...wud just say dat...u are an amazin writer...just luved ur OS...n do keep writin plzzz...😊😊

Oh, thank you dear 😳
I had my brains boiling when I thougt about these Jataa words :) Just needed explanation badly, so, these words are just the essense of the OS, glad you liked it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW..🥳looks like there is a storm of love in the forum since 2 days.😛.What posts & OS's we are getting to read first Meenu & now YOU..class..yaar Class..specially loved the way you have explained her remembering Mahadevtelling her I love you..aw 😍cho chweet..🤗
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Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

WOW..🥳looks like there is a storm of love in the forum since 2 days.😛.What posts & OS's we are getting to read first Meenu & now YOU..class..yaar Class..specially loved the way you have explained her remembering Mahadevtelling her I love you..aw 😍cho chweet..🤗

Thanks! You and Minakshi are inspiration for me 🤗
and it's difficult to stay silent )
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely OS dear...loved it...do write more!
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Originally posted by: NST1983

whole Universe". These words had hurt her in the beginning, but now she realised what he meant.

Standing there, in the garden, she smiled calmly and said:" And the whole Universe, each and every part of it, is Me, you won't be able to escape me!"

That was the momend of Devi Shakti herself.

i loved this part ...i didnt even think of it this way . i wish sati too realizes the same way ...i cant see another 7 episodes showing only nanda vrat ...and you are a genius ...this is beautiful

Going to sleep in the night she suddenly heard His tender voice: "What a relief. I started thinking that you completely don't have sense of humour."

She smiled and murmured: "If you won't come to swayamvar, I'll garland your murti and will end marrying a door keeper, I promice"

this is so natural she has no hesitation in her voice here she is speaking clearly not like when she is normal sati ..(sati is kind of shy ..remember the episode when she calls shiv to meet her she goes on and on "main wo main wo " )...it really looks like devi shakti telling shiv ...i loved this lines ...
wow our forum is filled with geniuses i wish you were one of the cv's of the show ...loved your post cant wait to read some more of your os's ...pls continue writing more
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ya i follow neha (rythmdivine)and hema ...such a classic ...
i feeled like hearing my fovourite ragas in veena ...
simply super ...
and the last part marrying the door keeper 😆 it cracked me ...
now now only she hear shiv 's heart beat ...
but in the form of whole universe👍🏼

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