Mahadev: you live inside Me..Sati..!! (an OS )

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A.hemalatha.kini

@TOTAL-ROMANTIC

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Posted: 13 years ago

Swayamwar ..was DONE..!! All chaos got silenced..!! she ..Sati ..had garlanded whom she wanted..!! Her parents had to bow to their words..it was their turn to remain silent..!!

Sati is in her palatial room..There is hustle & bustle all around..but there was silence in her room..no one was with her as the marriage had to take place soon ..so everyone was busy..& Sati was left alone to relish & sink into the moment ...!! ..that ..she had just sometime ago garlanded her Dream Man.😍.A person who happened to be the Lord of all the lords in this universe.😳.😆😛Wooo..!! Can there be anyone more luckier..??? NO WAYZZ...NEVER..!!🤗

She is Ecstatic..she is numb ..but it is numbness because of happines..she is not able to beleive what just happened..so she sits near her Lord Vishnu Idol..and smiles at God with all her beauty & happiness..which had no bounds..!! Is this really happening or am I still dreaming Bhagwan & if its a dream..Please dont wake me up..never ever..!! she says..She gets scard that she might just die of over dose of happiness..her heart was not able to bear this happiness..she feels..& She gets up onto her feet & swirls around her room ...crying out the name..".Shiv""..meine aapko paaliya shiv..meine aapko paaliya..abb mein mar bhi jaavon isii kshan toh ..uski chinta nahin hai mujhe..!! Yeh ek kshan mere 100 jeevan ke barabar hai..!!"...saying that she finally ends up near to that window which overlooked the HImalayas..& again she blushes..Mera naya Ghar..hai woh..!!😳Abb se mein wahin rehenewaali hoon she thinks & that mere thought also brings shudder into her body..imagining her Lord..next to her..!! And she turns back to run away in shyness..& when she is about to turn & run ..she is held back with a solid masculine hand..holding her back near her waist..when she turns her head in shock..to see HIM..her MAHADEV..HER SHIV..was standing next to her ..hovering on her body...(he was there without his Trishul.& his Nagdev slowly slides down from his neck to move away in wilderness & Let Mahadev have his intimate moment with Sati ..) & slowly but steadily..he pulls Sati..closer & closer...and Sati just slides into his pull towards his DIVINE BODY..as she is locked in his gaze..Both are not existing to the outside world..they were enclosed in each others eyes..!! But Sati will be the first one to get out from that deep deep meditation kind of eye stare..because she feels his other hand also hold her close to his chest..There was that faint smile of..see I GOT YOU..like how you wanted ,,now there is no escape from me ..kind of sweet & naughty expression.. on Mahadevs face & eyes..makes..Sati..go red like a cherry..and she tries to wriggle loose from his sweet clutchs..!! only to get imprinted closer to him..& feel that radiating energy of his cosmic power of the whole Universe running inside him..!! She ..goes to a trance..almsot similar to Yognidhra..with him..but consious..ofcourse..and Mahadev then breaks that passionate silence..saying.."Priye..mien yahan sirf tumhe yeh kehene aaya hun..ki..chahe mein aage yeh kabhi kahun ya nahin..magar aapko yeh maloom hona chahiye ki aap meri hi ek Ansh hai..aap mere andar hi reheti hain..Mein aapke bina adhura hoon..Sirf aur sirf aap humein poorna karti hain..Sara sansar ka pyaar ek hojaaye phir bhi woh mere pyaar ki tulna mein ...tucch hai..Jaise meine uss din aapko bataya tha..mera pyaar Aseem hai..jiski koi seema nahin..!! Mere Jeevan mein aapka sthan aajeevan..aadi anant kaal tak aur uske baad ya uske aage bhi rahega..Aap Devi hai meri Adi Shakti,hain..aap mujhe..meri shaktiyonko poorna karti hai..aap mein hi mein hoon..mujh mein aap hai..aur Humara yeh sangam..jag kalyaan hetu horaha hai..aur isske liye..aapko mera yogya banna hoga..! Nanda vrat ka punah prarambh kijiye taaki mein aapko..sampoornataha ..varan karsakoon...!! " he says..& during which..he still holds her enclosed in his arms..caressing her chin & cupping her delciate soft face in his masculine hands..& Sati is resting her hands on his chest & her chin on those hands..& looking up on him..leaning on his Body..which is such a Divine..electrifying site to watch..!!😍❤️

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Sati wishes that ..if at all I have to die..I can die right now..in his presence..in hsi arms..I dont ask for anything..& Mahadev listens to it with his powers..(he ofcourse can read her thoughts if he wants..)😳and gets totally upset & warns her never again she will think such horrible thoughts..in remotest corner of her mind..!! I am marrying you..to live with you forever..!!To love you ..eternally..!!awww..🤗

And the song I want to dedicate for that moment will be..From Sati to Mahadev...!!& Mahadev to sati..(I am talking about their soul singing to each other..awww..😳)😍

Sati ..."Ye aankhen Dekh Kar Ham Saari Duniyaa Bhuul Jaate hain
Inhein Paane Ki Dhun Mein Har Tamannaa Bhuul Jaate hain
Yeh aankhen

Mahadev .."Tum Apani Mahaki Mahaki Zulf Ke Pechon Ko Kam Kar Do
Musaafir InaMein Girakar Apanaa Rastaa Bhuul Jaate hain

Yeh aankhen...!!"

Sati.."Ye aankhenJab HaMein Apani Panaaho Mein Bulaati hain
Hame Apani Qasam Ham Har Saharaa Bhuul Jaate hain"❤️

Tumhaare Narm-O-Naazuk Honth Jis Dam Muskaraate hain
Bahaaren Jhenpati.N Phuul Khilanaa Bhuul Jaate hain😍

Sati..." Bahut Kuchh Tum Se Kahane Ki Tamannaa Dil Mein Rakhate hain
Magar Jab Saamane Aate Ho To Kahanaa Bhuul Jaate hain"

Yeh aankhen...!!!❤️

This is part of my MOTW task requested by Meenu aka mnx1 ..of our forum..My dearest friend..!! Meenu I hope I have at least got pass marks in this assignment..🤗

GOd Bless ALL..LOve you..Love Mahadev Sati..Love Mohit Mouni..!!Love DKDM...!!😍

Edited by TOTAL-ROMANTIC - 13 years ago

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pooji2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hema🤗 I have no words to describe your writing

I surely can say, "ONLY YOU CAN DO IT" yaar👍🏼

Oh I am desperately waiting for it to happen!!!

Its true the love story of our Shiva- Shakthi is overtly immense, the most passionate, excess,electrfying,earth shaking, boundless, immeasurable...

We viewers are the chosen fortunate ones to able to view such a story through DKDM!!!!!

God Bless!!!!🤗

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Asmita

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Posted: 13 years ago

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AWW I just love it di

esp the last paras where Sati thinks she is willing to die and mahadev stops her to think so

I just love this OS

thank you for such a wonderful gift 😳

Edited by --asmita-- - 13 years ago

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A.hemalatha.kini

@TOTAL-ROMANTIC

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pooji2012
Hema🤗 I have no words to describe your writing

I surely can say, "ONLY YOU CAN DO IT" yaar👍🏼

Oh I am desperately waiting for it to happen!!!

Its true the love story of our Shiva- Shakthi is overtly immense, the most passionate, excess,electrfying,earth shaking, boundless, immeasurable...

We viewers are the chosen fortunate ones to able to view such a story through DKDM!!!!!

God Bless!!!!🤗

Thank you Thank you..Thank you..Pooji..you always give me that BOOST to do more & more with your kidn sweet words..after all friends issiliye hote hai..hai na..Love you..& thank you again..It means a lot..if you are happy ..I get the reward of being double happy..🤗Mahadev & Sati love is so pasionate that U write anything it seems awesome..!!😍

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A.hemalatha.kini

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mia.spark17
Wow!! Itz so beautiful! Loved it!

Awww..Thank you so much..dear..😳🤗

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pooji2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

Thank you Thank you..Thank you..Pooji..you always give me that BOOST to do more & more with your kidn sweet words..after all friends issiliye hote hai..hai na..Love you..& thank you again..It means a lot..if you are happy ..I get the reward of being double happy..🤗Mahadev & Sati love is so pasionate that U write anything it seems awesome..!!😍

You're right pal, that's what friends are for !!!!🤗

Love you too pal🤗

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sia

@Sia889

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Posted: 13 years ago

WOW thatz a great start!!👏
aahh how i wish this happens..they show Sati in her room living the best moments of her life n NOt regretting or feeling Guilty for her act-after the Warmaala session

near to that window which overlooked the HImalayas..& again she blushes..Mera naya Ghar..hai woh..!!😳Abb se mein wahin rehenewaali
hoon

aww thats very well written/...i just can envision Sati(Mouni) Doing that👏 haha like the details of Nagadev😉
OOo.. BErry berry Romantic-wa 😉

kind of eye stare..because she feels his other hand also hold her close to his chest..There was that faint smile of..see I GOT YOU..like how you wanted ,,now there is no escape from me ..kind of sweet & naughty expression..

OMG that was killer Totally!!☺️
Beautifully written...the deepth the pureness in their feelings ahhh loved it..at some point tryin myself in writing, i feel this very part is written with innocence in heart and inexplicable love for the word 'LOVE'.❤️

Wohoaoo that was supeb👏👏👏...very decent-pure-ROMANTIC OS.😍
Keep it up pal..write MORE😉

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Neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

superb hema ji...just luved it...it was so sweet and romantic...amazing simply amazing...👏👍🏼
i cud actually picture MOUNI and MOHIT in the entire scene while reading it...u have written it so beautifully...wat i liked the most was the MAHADEV SATI convo...our MAHADEV desperately wants SATI ji to start the NANDA vrath so that she becums yogya and he can have her completely...awww...sooo cute...😍😳

"his Nagdev slowly slides down from his neck to move away in wilderness & Let Mahadev have his intimate moment with Sati"

just luved this part...hema ji...only u can cum up wid sumthin so beautiful and divine...😊😊

thanku sooo much for the weekend treat...🤗me thoroughly njoyed readin it...😊😊

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A.hemalatha.kini

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rythmdivine
superb hema ji...just luved it...it was so sweet and romantic...amazing simply amazing...👏👍🏼
i cud actually picture MOUNI and MOHIT in the entire scene while reading it...u have written it so beautifully...wat i liked the most was the MAHADEV SATI convo...our MAHADEV desperately wants SATI ji to start the NANDA vrath so that she becums yogya and he can have her completely...awww...sooo cute...😍😳

"his Nagdev slowly slides down from his neck to move away in wilderness & Let Mahadev have his intimate moment with Sati"

just luved this part...hema ji...only u can cum up wid sumthin so beautiful and divine...😊😊
thanku sooo much for the weekend treat...🤗me thoroughly njoyed readin it...😊😊

Awww..Thank you so much Neha..I cannot explain the happiness & deep satisfaction I get when I read such sweet words from all of you.!! woh bolte hain na..Sarthak lagta hai..!! what else.. Mere madness..sarthak lagta hai..ofcourse..🤗

All credit to DKDM makers..Mohit Mouni & first , foremost & above all..Lord Mahadev & maa Shakti ..to have given me teh inspiration & buddhi to do so..!!😍🤗