poem based on shiv's emotions - pls see

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Posted: 13 years ago
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poem based on shiv's emotions
how do i look into you eyes
how do i tell you that when ever i said that your love for me was illusion they were just lies
i know your love is true
even i feel the same love as much as you
we are separated by circumstance
and also your father's arrogance
i don't want to bear another separation
this is the reason for my hesitation
without you i am incomplete and alone
i know it hurts when i speak to you in a heartless tone ..
we are so far even after being so near
its breaks me to know that i am the cause of your every tear
for me you are so dear
i will always save you from every time of fear
one day when you leave your human essence and are free
that day you will unite with me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully written diya...👏👏
u have summed up the entire SHIV SATI situation perfectly...😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very Well Written, dear u have the sense of writing .

Did u have any interest in music, if yes then u can became great pop-star.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rythmdivine

beautifully written diya...👏👏
u have summed up the entire SHIV SATI situation perfectly...😊😊

thankyou so much i feel so appreciated...made my day 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweet24

Very Well Written, dear u have the sense of writing .


Did u have any interest in music, if yes then u can became great pop-star.


thankyou so much and yes i write songs as well as sing them ...thankyou again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏its breaks me to know that i am the cause of your every tear
for me you are so dear 👏👍🏼👏

Totally super i can say keep it up koyal ...i loved it👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vanadhi

👏its breaks me to know that i am the cause of your every tear
for me you are so dear 👏👍🏼👏

Totally super i can say keep it up koyal ...i loved it👍🏼

thankyou so much vanidhi ...you make me feel so proud

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