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Posted: 13 years ago
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walking in the corridor
waiting for the maha sabha to start
sati came to the door
and saw sumthing that pierced her heart

standing there with a smile on his face
was shiv along with his trishul
his heart beat increased its pace
but he kept his face calm and cool

he walked up to her as he had to enter the place
sati wondered what to do, where to look
but couldent get her eyes of him and watched him walk in grace
finally back to senses from the attendent had the plate she took

she took the crimson from the plate
and moved forward to put the tika for shiv
her heart was beating so fast
that the heartbeat could be herd by shiv

as she touched his forhead
he got a shvier up his spine
even though his face dint have a smile
his heart had a beaming shine

they both felt they had sumthing
a strong connction
that bounded them so strongly
which was the result of thier attraction

as they both got back their senses
shiv realised he had to go inside
he walked adhead and she behind him
though they wished they could walk side by side...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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my forst poem on sati and shiv
hope u liked it!!!!!
pls do comment!!!
:)

it is also posted in dkdm editorial
Edited by kajen_9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well done! 👏
very nice work.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like it !!!
You write well

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG a poem on Shiva and Shakti...umm 😕,..aw..ex... I;m short of words😆

Most Lovely ❤️poem i have read till date..Loved it so much⭐️

👏Good work pal👏

Keep up the good work!!
Edited by Killer_Shark - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dint expect such a creation for myhto show its really awesome keep doing such creations in future too yaar👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Btw did all this happen in real (i.e; in the show) or its ua idea

If this happens naa tere muh main ghee shakaar..alll rich chocolates
Edited by Killer_Shark - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tnx sooo much guys!!!!!
im sooo glad u guys liked my first poem
will keep writting
:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it Really good!!!!write an FF na plzzz

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