Kuch adhure khawab part 4 posted 20-4-2016

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Okay this was another fantastic update

Uday's dialouges were amazing

And even the cliff scene between Manyata and Uday is so nice

You know what is the best part of your story writing? The dialouges

I loved the end

The precap looks very interesting 😉

Update soon

And thanks for the PM

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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LIKES DONE DEAR WILL COMMENT SOON AS SOON AS I READ IT... 😊 AND PLZ TELL ME IT IS SS OR FF

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 4

They were just hugging eachother it felt sooo good it felt heven to them it was as if they were in some other world were only the two of them were there and no one else

At last uday slowly broke the hug and looked at manyatas face her eyes were shut her cheeks were pink and her lips were trembling she was just too shy to even look at him she felt his gazes burning her she was feeling as though he could scan her and that made her all the more shy

Uday - ankhe kholo princess hamari taraf dheko

He slowly hissed in her ear and as tho hypnotised by him she slowly opened her eyes and looked into his brown eyes which felt as deep as a ocean in which she could just drown

He slowly left her waist and his hands reached to her sholder slowly travelling to cheeks and je traced his fingure on her lips and she shut her eyes feeling his thumb moving on her lip as he bent down sightly they were just an inch away when

Buzzz...buzzz...buzzz...

Went of manyatas phone and uday just cursed the caller for spoiling the perfect moment and manyata giggled at it

As she took the call

Manyata : hello

Driver : rajkumari sa bhoth der ho chuki hai app bole tho gadi le avu

Manyata ;( was above to say yes but abruptly stoped and looked at uday who was now busy looking at his phone )

Manyata (st) meri vajha se bhoth chot ponchi na thuje bhoth sataya na mai ne thuje uday aj tak har bar tu muj par tera payar barsata gaya par mai ne har bar tera dil dhukaya naa par iss bar mai sirf tere muskurahat ki vajha banungi tumaray dard ki nahi khushi ki hasi ki vajha banungi abb to thum bus dekte javo yuvraj udayveer sing ki yuvrani manyata kumari bhi kise se kamnahi ha nai tho

And she smiled

Driver : rajkumarisa.. rajkumari sa..

Manyata :ji ..ji vo hum bol rahay thay ki app mat avo hum khud aa rahay hai uday ke sath

And she cut the call and walked to uday with a smile on her face

As she ended the call uday asked

Kon tha

Manyata : shook her head and said driver tha puch raha tha ki gadi le aye

Uday : hmm tho chale

Manyata : chalengay naa itni bhi kya jaldi hai she said winking at him

Uday ( stunned )( st ) what the ... chal kya raha hai tumare dimag mai princess

Manyata : snapped her fingers in froungth of him

Kha ko gaye yuvraj sa

She said as she put her hands around his neck

She came a little more close and went near his ear and told

Mera mood nahi hai calne ka koi aur tarika hai tho bolo

Uday ( smarking ) not bad princess hum se flirting

And he pulled manyata even closer by her waist

Tho batavo kis tarike se jana pasand karengi app

Manyata : app batavo app kis tareke se lejana pasand karengay apni princess ko

And the next instent she was up in air as uday picked her up in one swift move and took her to the car placing her gently in the car he went on to start the car

The whole time their eyes never left each other

Edited by 12Singmeenu - 9 years ago

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arshiforever217

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Beautiful part.. Next part plzz.. 😊

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Heyy Siss How R U.. 😊

I Know I Know I Had Said To Post My Comment At Ur Story But Sorry For Delay... 😔

And Yes I Have Suggested Ur Story To My Some Facebook Friends.. 😊

And I'm Seeing My One Facebook Friend Nujhat (munia.ash2015) ID... Her Comment And Her Like On Ur Story. 😊

Well Sis I Know U R Waiting For More Likes And Comments And Sis Trust Me If U Wait So There Is No Use. Until And Unless U Won't PM I Mean U Won't MSG So U Won't Have Likes And Comments.. So To Get It U Have To PM... Or U Want Me To PM To My Friends Who Read My Story.. If U Want So Okayyy When I Pay Visit To Forum Through My Laptop I Would PM Them... 😊

And Sorry Again I'm Not Commenting. I Promise I Will Soon As Many Of My Comments R Pending. 😊

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Heyy Sis How's U... 😊

Here I'm With My Comment.. 😊

I Really Liked Ur Story From Where It Begins..

Ohhh Uday And Jay.. 😔

Then ThankFully Vijay Convo With Manyata Giving Her Some Sense And Made Her Realize That How Much She Is Wrong And Giving Up So Soon For Her Love For Uday When Daily Uday Was In Pain Seeing His Love With Majnu.. And Now When Uday Is Giving Her Pain And What Manyata Is Doing..

Ohhh Uday Thought And Was More Angry That He Thought Manyata Would Try But No.. Then Unnati Taking Uday And Jay To Majnu's House Where They Heard Him...

Ohh Hell That Majnu I Wish I Could Tear Him Into Pieces... 😡

But Thankfully Uday Realized And As Well Jay Too.. Then Uday Went To Devgarh Only To See Manyata Missing And Realizing That She Must Have Gone To Cliff...

Ohh Hell Manyata What Was She Trying To Do Taking Her Life. 😡

But Thankfully Uday Came On Time And Saved Her.. And I Really Liked Manyata Confessing Her Love.. Then Manyata's Romance... Woahhh Manyata Naughty Manyata. 😳

Heyyy Sis Plzzz Update Part 5 Soon... 😊

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha
Heyy Sis How's U... 😊
Here I'm With My Comment.. 😊

I Really Liked Ur Story From Where It Begins..
Ohhh Uday And Jay.. 😔
Then ThankFully Vijay Convo With Manyata Giving Her Some Sense And Made Her Realize That How Much She Is Wrong And Giving Up So Soon For Her Love For Uday When Daily Uday Was In Pain Seeing His Love With Majnu.. And Now When Uday Is Giving Her Pain And What Manyata Is Doing..

Ohhh Uday Thought And Was More Angry That He Thought Manyata Would Try But No.. Then Unnati Taking Uday And Jay To Majnu's House Where They Heard Him...
Ohh Hell That Majnu I Wish I Could Tear Him Into Pieces... 😡
But Thankfully Uday Realized And As Well Jay Too.. Then Uday Went To Devgarh Only To See Manyata Missing And Realizing That She Must Have Gone To Cliff...

Ohh Hell Manyata What Was She Trying To Do Taking Her Life. 😡
But Thankfully Uday Came On Time And Saved Her.. And I Really Liked Manyata Confessing Her Love.. Then Manyata's Romance... Woahhh Manyata Naughty Manyata. 😳

Heyyy Sis Plzzz Update Part 5 Soon... 😊

Wha ji wha dil kush kar dita yeh comment de ke 😆😉

Abb is ka revord bhi milna banta hai naaa 😉 what do u say abb kuch spicy ho jaye 😉

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Wha ji wha dil kush kar dita yeh comment de ke 😆😉
Abb is ka revord bhi milna banta hai naaa 😉 what do u say abb kuch spicy ho jaye 😉

Yeahhh Sureee But That Should Be Long.. Minute Bhii Nae Lagta Chatam Hojata Hai.. 😛

Highly Waiting For Part 5... 😊