Kuch adhure khawab part 4 posted 20-4-2016

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello friends
Actually i am a new cum silent member to DEK forum
I read almost all the stories and they r way tooo good
But as many writers left the forum and many of them left their amazing stories incomplete i was very sad
But then i thought to give my self a try
So i am going to post one story

It is the same as DEK with my own twist and masala 😉
I will try to finish the unfinished tracks in the show
I know their r not many readers and writer very active here sooo my request to all those who r active is plzzz respond and give me ur comment +ve or -ve that will only help me improve 😳

The first part will be posted shortly 😃



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1
This story starts from the point where uday and jay leave hand in hand out of the palace manyata faints and breaks down before vijay and unnati goes to tell the truth to uday

In manyatas room

Vijay makes manyata lie on the bed and asks seemaji to get her some juce

Vijay - manyata bhai app ayse kaise himath har sakthi ho app tho hamare strong bhai ho naaa agar app hi ayse toot javogi tho kaise chalega baki sab ko kon sambalega dadi sab ne jo itne bharose ke sath app ko devgad soupa hai us bharose ka kya hoga aur rahi bath uday ki tho vo app se payar karthey hai manyatha bhai payar sacha payar aur iss vakth thoda naraz hai par hum un ko jald se jald mana lenge plzz app himath math haro

(Manyatha -nahi vijay bhai iss bar nahi bhoth ho gaya hai yeh khel thak chuki hun mai nahi samaj athi muje yeh raj neethi nahi samaj athi muje yeh jhoot aur chalo bhari app logo ki duniya mai ne har mumkin koshis kar li abb bus aur nahi agar uday muj se payar kartha tho vo muje samajtha

Vijay - (laughs)...

Manyatha-vijay bhai app has rahay ho

Vijay - haaa manyatha bhai hum has rahay hai yeh soch ke nahi ki thum har gaye par yeh soch ke ki thum itni jaldi har gaye

Manyata -vijay bhai bus kijeaaa app janthay hai ki hum ne har mumkin koshis kar li abb agar uday ne man bana liya hai ki vo jay se shadiii...(gulps) shaii..karega tho hum kya kar sakthay hai

Vijay - sahi kha manyatha bhai bilkul sahi kha app ne app kar bhi kya sakthi hai ooo hold it manyatha bhai hold it hmmm app ki halat bhi tho ekdum uday ki halt ki thara hai naaa

Manyatha - kya matlab hai app ka

Vijay - are jub uday ko pata chala hoga ki vo app se payar kartha hai aur app akash se payar karthi hai us ki halat bhi tho ayse hi hogi naaa par muje ek bath samaj nahi aye uday ne app ko sirf ek bar kha ki vo jay se shadi karega par app tho use roz roz ho apne aur apne us majnu ka prem jap sunathi thi tho fir kyu uday ne app ko nahi chod diya thab hi jha tak devgad ki bath hai vo tho un ko mil hi jata agar app akash se shadi kar lethi to jay yuvrani ban jathi aur yuvraj aur yuvrani ki shadi tho hone hi thi naaa
App ke itna un ko tokne un ko sab ke samne zaleel karne ke bavajooth vo app ko har bar har mushki se bachane aaa jathay they app ni bhi parva kiye bina un hone tho khabi himath nahi hari

Saying this vijay banna walks out of the room

And with this manyatha goes into flash backs of how uday was always by her side always ready to help her no matter what
She feels really guilty and just shuts the room door and crys her heart out

Meanwhile in jaygad palace
Jay was very happy that finally she got what she wanted finally she defeated manyatha finally she won and on the othe hand uday was geting more and more angry with every passing second it is true that he said that he will marry jay but atleast manyatha should have stopped him if not convince him to stay back but she should hai tried harder atleast he deserved that much

Meanwhile unnati enters udays room and starts shouting

DADA !!!! DADA KHA HAI APP DADA !!

Uday - kya hua choti kyu chilla rahi ho hum yaha hai

Unnati - sach dada kya sach mai yeh app ho hum ko tho yeh koi aur hi lagtha hai

Uday - yeh thum kya khe rahi ho choti

Unnati - sach dada sach khe rahay hai hum vo sach jis se app milo dur hai

Uday - bas choti abb hamare pass in fezool ki bato ke liye ko vakth nahi hai

And that was it for unnati she caught uday by his arm and dragged him out of the room along with her to the hall where jay was happly enjoying her victory

Jay - unnati yeh thum kya...

But unnati showed jay her palm asking her to stop at that very instent

Unnati - driver gadi ki chabi do

And she litterally stuffed uday and jay into the car and drove of she had a range in her eyes a fire whic could burn some one alive uday had never seen this side of unnati she was always the calm and composed one

The car just stopped before the chaudri nivis where akash lived now

Jay - unnati yeh app hume yaha kyu le ke aye hai

And before she could talk any further she got a smack on her face

Unnati - CHUP ! EK DUM CHUP !! Abb ek aur shab nahi abb app bus dhekengay aur baki sab hum bolengay
And with this she dragged them to the back gate of the house from where thay could see aryan and his father and tara laughing and talking

Aryan - congo dad ajj hamari sahi mayne mai jeeth hui hai

Aryan father (AF) - sahi kha app ke beta ajj hum ne finally un rajwado se apna purana badla chuka hi diya

Tara - par aryan kya thume sach mai lagtha hai ki yeh sab kam karega i mean agar uday ne jay se shadi nahi ki tho

Aryan - karega tara uday jay se shadi zaroor karega akhir use manyatha se apna soo called badla jo kena hai

Tara -hmmm so tho hai par thum ne kitne samartly jay ko apna target bana kar us se sara kam nikalva liya use apni hi bhen ke khilaf khada kar diya phele tho jay ko kidnap kar ke us ko daraya aur fir manyatha ko uday ke samne nicha girathay chale gaye thum bechari jay vo soch rahi hogi ki uss ko us ka uday mil gaya par use kya patha ki ek bar uday manyatha se alag ho jaye tho thum use bhi iss duniya se alvida kar dogay
Aryan - vo khethay hai na tara ghar ka bhedi lankha dhaye
Jay ka bhi kuch vaisa hi hai bechari jay na use vo uday mila aur na hi devgad aur tho aur vo tho apni hi mauth ko niyotha de ke gaye aur manyatha bechari bhoth yakeen tha naaa use us ki bhen par aur us ke udayveer par abb sari zindegi ise gum mai dubi rahegi ki uski apni bhen ne us ko dhoka diya poor girl aur jaha tak hum use janthay hai vo is vakth harman chuki hogi toot chuki hogi aur bus apni zindegi khatam karna cha rahi hogi bechari monya

And that was it uday completely lost his cool how dare he tried to hurt his princess
He just punched akash black and blue all tried to stop him but he was simply unstoppable
Finally the police came and took akash with them
While going he said
Tooo late udayveer bhoth der ho chuki hai abb tak tho thumari princess thum se bhoth dur jaaa chuki hogi rok sako tho rok lo
And he goes off

Precab

Kha gaye princess manyatha





Edited by 12Singmeenu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi...awesome part and welcome to dek this forum badly needs superb writers tnx 4 posting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetmishthi

Hi...awesome part and welcome to dek this forum badly needs superb writers tnx 4 posting


Well actually thanks for reading 😳
I always had this story in my mind soo thought y not shair it with u all 😳
Thanks for commenting it means a lot 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi
I am Nitya
Welcome to the forum
And this story is amazing
I really wanted to see what happens next and there you are with it
Please continue soon
And please add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
Udays heart almost stops as he heard what akash said

Uday (pov)

Nahi nahi aysa nahi ho saktha manyatha hum ko... nahi
( unknown to him tears were flowing through his eyes a fear shook him to the core yes fear fear of losing the most precious thing in his life again!!! Who said that love makes a person strong it also made the person equally weak )
End of uday pov

He ran to his car not caring about the surroundings he was running as if his life is moving away from him every min every second

Back in chaudry nivas

Jay falls back on the floor

Jau (st) vo hum ko marne vala tha vo humara istamal kar raha tha manyatha se badla lene ke liye us ne yeh sab plan kiya tha aur manyatha jis ko hum jan se marna chate the vo vo hum ko us se bacha rahi thi

Her chain of thoughts were broken by unnati who stood in froungth of her and said

Unnati - shame on u jay shame on u dheko apne app ko jay kitna gir gaye ho ki apne hi jiji ke sath thum ne yeh sab ...u know what hum tho bhagwan ko thank karthay hai ki thumari shadi humare dada se nahi hui kyu ki thum un ke layak hi nahi thi jo ladki apne parivar ki na ho saki vo kya meri dada ki hothi
Agar thodi si bhi sharm bach hai na j tho javo jake manyatha se mafi mago kam se kam apne app ko aur math giravo ki phir khabi utt na pavo

With that unnati left the place

In devgad palace

Uday came running in the palace shouting for manyatha

Uday - MANYATHA !!!MANYATHA !!!

He ran into her room but it was empty then he ran in to the dining area then the garden and all possible places where manyatha could be but alas she was no where he then asked the servents but no one knew where she was

Uday (angry) had hothi hai la parvahi ki kya app sab itne log mil ke meri princess ka khayal nahi rak sakthay

And he was acting like a mannic shouting on each and every guard and serven when he heard

Chillana band kijeaaa yuvraj udayveer singh ( came a boming voice )

As uday turned around he could not beleave what he saw it was dadi sab standing on the staircase with the support of vijay

Dadi sab - in sab pe chillane se app ko kuch hasil nahi hone wala agar vo sach mai app ki princess hai tho un ka khayal rakhna bhi app ka bhi farzz hai

Uday - dadi sab !! Dadi sab app yeh kya !!dadi sab plzz bataeyeh kha hai princess plzzz bolo na kuch dadi sab ( he said catching dadi sabs hands hand pleading her his eyes were watery )

Dadi sab - ( melted a bit seeing his condition ) hum nahi janthay ki vo kha hai ( saying this she turned her face )

And tears made their way through her eyes




Edited by 12Singmeenu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey
Oh my god
The 2nd part was eve more shocking
Please dont do this
Please reunite Manyata and Uday
I want to see them together
Update soon
And please add me to your PM list
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey

Oh my god
The 2nd part was eve more shocking
Please dont do this
Please reunite Manyata and Uday
I want to see them together
Update soon
And please add me to your PM list


Ops
Sry but actually the part is incomplete
I planed to write more tho u will have to wait 😉
It will be posted at 8 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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haye sweetiee first of all welcome to india forums secondly very nice start i want to read further ... 😳😳😳 so do pm me as well
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Part 3
Uday felt as if some one has ripped his heart off his chest and crushed it into a million pices
He ran towards manyathas room again

Uday (st) no princess is bar nahi app iss bar itni asani se hum ko chod kar nahi jaa sakthi hum app ko jane nahi denge ek chance do princess sirf ek chance mana hum ne galthi ki tum par vishwas na kar ke apne payar par bharosa na kar ke par hum janthay hai ki app hum ko itni badi saza tho nahi dogi naaa

As he entered manyathas room he saw the window was open and a rope was hanging down it no wonder the guards have not seen manyatha going out he thought and also mentally made a note of scolding her for her stunts later

Uday (st) kha ja sakthi ho tum princess

And as if a thumder bolt hit him he froze to a spot as he went into a flash back

Flashback

As uday and manyatha were hedding to devgad for manyathas crown ceremony

And uday stopped at the cliff to show manyatha devgad estate

(Manyatha after getting the childhood flashbacks)

Manyatha - patha hai uday ajj pheli bar lag raha hi ki mai ghar par hun yaha itni shanti hai itna sukoon hai yaha ki hawa mai ek ajeeb sa apna pan hai mana ki muje zayada tho kuch yad nahi hai yaha ke bare mai par ek ajeeb si kushi ho rahi hai yaha aaa kar ajj pheli bar lag raha hai ki mai sach mai manyatha hun

Uday - hum ne kha tha na princess devgad ki miti ki khusboo ko apne app tak phounchne do thum ko sab yaad aa jayega patha hai princess hum yaha pheli bar app ke 1 st bday pe aye the jan uncle brij hum ko devgad dhikane laye the par hum app ko chod kar ana hi nahi cha rahay they is liye un hone hum dono ko ek sath yaha le kar aye hum ko ajj bhi yad hai app kayse dar ke hamara hath zoor se pakad liya tha aur tab hi se hum best friends ban gaye the aur shayad iss liye app ke kho jane ke bad hum itne buri tarike se toot gaye hasna aur khelna hi bhool gaye hume bus yehi lagtha tha ki kise ko apne itne pass khabi nahi ane dena chayeaa ki uske dur jane par hum bardash na kar sake

And he looked at manyatha and smiled

Manyatha (in a trace ) aur patha nahi kyu par muje abb bhi lagtha hai ki mai vahi ek sal ki bachi hun jis ne dar ke tumara hath thama tha and ajj bhi man mai ek vishwas hai ki jab tak tum mere sath ho muje kuch nahi hoga par agar tum se bichad gaye tho shayad jeene ke koi vajha hi na bacaaa

Flashback ends

As it hit him that his princess life was in danger he simply ran out of the raj mahal on the way to the cliff all he could think off was all his sweet moments with manyatha how they used to fight their nok joke ther cair for one another and finally the time when hurt each other tho unintentionally but they did

Uday (st) ajj tak maa ke jane ke bad hum ne app se kuch nahi banga hai bhagwan jii plzzz is bar hum se hamari zindagi math chidna ek bar phele bhi app ne unhe hum se alag kar diya tha is bar nahi plzzz

On the otjer hand on the cliff

Manyatha was standing at the edge of the cliff looking at the devgad estate tears were flowing through her eyes endlessly

Manyatha(st) muje maff karna dadi sab mai fail ho gaye nahi khari utar paye app sab ki umeedo par apni us andhe payar mai aa kar sab kharab kar diya mai ne kitni zindagi thabha kar di kitne rishtey toot gaye na mai ek achi yuvrani ban paye na beti na bhen aur apne payar ko tho apne hi hatho se thabha kar diya mai ne abb aur app sab ki zindagi ko nahi bigadna chathi tho app sab se door jaa rahi hun kam se kam ek tasali rahegi ki mere jane ke bad jay aur uday ek nayeshuruvath kar sake muje shayad ana hi nahi chayeaa tha vapas tho shayad ajj sab ki yeh halat nahi hothi

And she was above to take a step ahead when

RUK JAYEAA YUVRANI MANYATHA came a loud voice from behind which froze her

And he came and pulled her by her arm towards him and then

SMACK!!!!!!!!

Went a slap across her face she could not beleave what just happned she just blinked her eyes held her burning cheek and looked towards him

And he heled her by her sholde and shook her

Yeh kya karne jaa rahi thi thum

And not getting any responce from her her shook her more hard

Jawab do hum ko princess kya karne jaa rahi thi ,,,

And sje stared at him blankly she just uttered in a weak voice uday vo mai ...

Vo mai kya ,,vo mai kya princess apni zinmedariyo se bhag rahi thi apni kartavy se mu mod rahi thi ya let me guess hum se aur dur jane ka koi bhana dhund rahi thi hai naa

Nahi vo mai tho

Kya hua us vade ka princess us shapat ka vo thum ne ise devgad ki yuvrani bankar li thi bhool gaye ki us din rajpurohit jii ne kya kha tha bhool gaye vo sare vade jo thum ne apni praja se kiye the

At this manyatha pushed udays hands off her sholders

Manyatha - nahi kuch nahi bhooli mai sab kuch ache se yad hai muje par mai iske kabil nahi

Uday - (laughed and clapped his hands ) wow princess really good bhoth jaldi realise kar liya nahi thum ne tab yeh kyu nahi socha jab j se lad rahi thi yeh riyasat pane ke liye tab yeh kyu nahi socha jab din rath ek kar ke puri ji jan se mehenathkar rahi thi dadi sab ko yeh dikane ke liye ki tum ek achi rajkumari ho vo sab tho thum ne akash ke liye kiya tha na tho lo mil gaya tum ko tumara akash javo na us ke pass yeh sab karne ka kya matlab hai abb

Manyatha-(in full anger ) vo mera nahi samje tum vo mera nahi na na tha na ho saktha hai kyu ki us ke liye mere dil mai koi jagha nahi hai mai ne jo kuch bhi kiya sirf is liye kiya kyu ki...


And she stoped in middle and looked away

Uday - turned her to himself

Kyu ki...kya princess

He looked into her eyes and moved close to her she kept backing off and finally she hit the car door which was behind her and he leaned in more on her

Kyu ki kya princess he whispered into her ear and she closed her eyes in reflex

And just morned out his name which was as light as a whisper

Her heart was thundering in her chest his breath was fanning her face there was just an inch gap between their lips and she gulped she was feeling all kinds of different feelings happyness nervousness exitement joy tension she felt like she would just explode and fall off any moment

And he slipped his hand around her waist and pulled her even closer if possible putting a little presure on her waist
And squeezing it a bit manyatha helled his shirt in reflex as he asked a bit louder

Kyu ki kya princess

And that was it for her she could take it no more and she shouted out loud

KYU KI MAI TUM SE PAYAR KARTHI HUN !!

I love u , i just love u halkat vede

And tightly hugged him to herself

Her voice was just ecoing in his ears ooo how much he had died to hear this this felt as a best gift of his life he pressed her more to himself and said

I love u too princess i really really do

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Precab - journy back to mumbai jay says sorry to manyatha family time and manveer romance 😉





Edited by 12Singmeenu - 9 years ago

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