OS: 'MERI TAQDEER..MERA HALKAT'

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am really sorry for posting late but guests came at my home so didn't have the opportunity ;(


Guyzz my real OS which I had written in my diary got juice all over it so can't post that one but am posting an OS with the same concept,it won't be as good as the previous one and is very short and in my opinion is not actually my favourite one so as I said before,Sorry if you expected better and sorry if it sucks :(

Well..here it goes..


"MERI TAQEER..MERA HALKAT"

"You know Manyata,kehte hain ke jo bhi Jaigadh ki hone wali Maharani ye joda pahenti hai,sirf aur sirf apne hone wale pati ke liye pahenti hai.Manyata hum jante hain ke tumhe dada se affection nahi hai,par please,tum ek baar apni aankhein band karke us insan ke bare mein socho jiss ne har lamhe,har pal,har mushkil mein tuhari madad ki aur hir jo bhi tumhare zahen mein aaye,tum yeh joda sirf aur sirf us ke liye pahenna.Think about it,okay?"Unnati gave her the traditional dress and excused herself after telling her to decide who she was going to wear this dress for."Who am I wearing this dress for???"She asked herself completely puzzled.
"Manyata hum jante hain ke tumhe dada se affection nah hai,par please,tum ek baar apni aankhein band karke us insan ke bare mein socho jiss ne har lamhe,har pal,har mushkil mein tuhari madad ki aur hir jo bhi tumhare zahen mein aaye,tum yeh joda sirf aur sirf us ke liye pahenna."Unnati's words roamed aroun in her presence.She closed her eyes and began to think what she should have thought earlier..

**Manyata's POV**

"Jab bhi mujhe ek dost ki zarurat thi,wo halkat tha mere paas..."A picture of a guy,with hair that reached his neck and chocolaty brown eyes and a girl with brown hair laughing in the night eating pizza in a camp in the yard came in her mind.Woh tha mere pas mujhe meri her problem se nikalne ke liye,mujhe rote hue hansane ke liye...".She began to remember the guy who was the solution to all her complications,who stood with her no matter what the times were,who was always there to hug her..console her and most of all that mattered,He loved her,and that too unconditionally..he didn't stop loving her even if she disowned him."Umr ko kaise parhte hain,us se le kar dance tak us ne mujhe samjhaya.Usi ne mujhe DadiSaheb ke khilaf jane mein meri madad ki.Usi ne mujhe ek yuvrani banaya,uss din agr woh nahi aata toh tu mar jati,magr tujh par toh jaise Akash ka bhoot sawar tha..Wohi tha jis ne har lamhe..har pal..halaat ki parwa kiye baghair hummeisha mera sath dia.Udayveer!Meri taqdeer..mera halkat."

NORMAL POV

"Haan Uday,aaj main ne yeh joda sirf aur sirf apne Halkat Vadey ke liye pehna hai!"She turned around and looked at herself in the mirror and smiled at herself as she thought..

Sorry again for the short OS but I didn't have time to amend,It isn't even proofread,so you can just imagine how quickly I wrote and ten posted it :(

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey dear the os is amazing... 😃
loved the way you described how manyata realises her feelings for Uday 😳
You are really an amazing writer dear.. I love the way you describe something 😊
do write more stories dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely OS
awe unnati word work on manyata 😃
finally manyata realize her feeling for uday 🤗
but plz let us know uday reaction after seeing manyata in thos joda
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi.k.

hey dear the os is amazing... 😃
loved the way you described how manyata realises her feelings for Uday 😳
You are really an amazing writer dear.. I love the way you describe something 😊
do write more stories dear 😊


Thank you very much,I am amazed😲 that you liked it and I was on 7th heaven😃 by all your compliments,thanxx 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

lovely OS
awe unnati word work on manyata 😃
finally manyata realize her feeling for uday 🤗
but plz let us know uday reaction after seeing manyata in thos joda


Thanxx alot for your precious compliment 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed



Thank you very much,I am amazed😲that you liked it and I was on 7th heaven😃by all your compliments,thanxx😊



you do deserve it...
keep writing such beautiful stories.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnxx alot Simi and you too,CUTEARIYA :)Thnx for all the like also !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyy How's U... 😊 Well I'm Really Sorry For Being Sooo Much Late... 😔 Do Forgive Me... 😔 First I Was Again Busy In My University Then My Relatives Had Came From Another City.. So I Hardly Open India Forums And Hardly Study My Course... 😔

Anywaysss Leave It Now Coming To My Comment... 😊 I Had Already Waste Enough Time So Without Wasting My Further Time I'm Going To Post My Comment... So Here It Goes... 😊

IT WAS LOVELY OS.. A VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WITH CONTAINING MANY EMOTIONS IN IT THAT HOW MANYATA REMEBERED AND COMPARED AND DESCRIBED HER FEELINGS FOR UDAY... 😊 😃
IT IS INDEED ANOTHER AWESOME OS OF URS... 😊 😃
I WISHED I COULD READ AND WISHED IT WAS NOT AN OS BUT A LONG STORY...😔 BUT IT AS WE SAYS A BEAUTIFUL THINGS HAD TO END SO IT DO END TOO... 😔
ANYWAYS I REALLY LOVED ENJOYING UR OS...😊 😃

THANKS FOR PM AND BEAUTIFUL OS AND PLZZZ DO POST UR ANOTHER OSSS... 😊 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

Heyyy How's U... 😊 Well I'm Really Sorry For Being Sooo Much Late...It's kay 😔 Do Forgive Me... 😔 First I Was Again Busy In My University Then My Relatives Had Came From Another City.. So I Hardly Open India Forums And Hardly Study My Course...Plus u wre busy 😔

Anywaysss Leave It Now Coming To My Comment... 😊 I Had Already Waste Enough Time So Without Wasting My Further Time I'm Going To Post My Comment... So Here It Goes... 😊

IT WAS LOVELY OS..Aww..So sweet! A VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WITH CONTAINING MANY EMOTIONS IN IT THAT HOW MANYATA REMEBERED AND COMPARED AND DESCRIBED HER FEELINGS FOR UDAY...Thanxx alot 😃
IT IS INDEED ANOTHER AWESOME OS OF URS...Thanxx again 😊 😃
I WISHED I COULD READ AND WISHED IT WAS NOT AN OS BUT A LONG STORY...😔 BUT IT AS WE SAYS A BEAUTIFUL THINGS HAD TO END SO IT DO END TOO... 😔
ANYWAYS I REALLY LOVED ENJOYING UR OS...THANXX SO MUCH FOR UR COMPLIMENTS AND PRECIOUS COMMENT😊 😃

THANKS FOR PM AND BEAUTIFUL OS AND PLZZZ DO POST UR ANOTHER OSSS... 😊 😃


My pleasure!











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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey,🤗 Awesomee!!!❤️
No words you wrote her POV amazingly!!👏
Lovely OS here! If u had continued it would have been so much better😳
Oh well, it was good though i loved it. 👏
Keep up the good work please do continue writing!😉
Tc dear!xx

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