MAI HU VO AASMAN ..❤️ :* (hokar bhi hum juda hote juda nhi) CH 1

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

very well writen👏 but bit long as now i m very tired 😆 but its ok so coming to ur update manya and abhi together ... this is really shocking for me 😲 well in this story we also have a majnu but this time not akash verma ... well done 👏 now my fav sceen is when strange lady came n try to realised her that this majnu its not her true love... and her true love is none other than our handsome hunk yuvraaj udayveer singh 😳😳 ... n story line is really intresting c told you na i don't need to look you can handle it ... 😉 and you very well did ... i love this chapter 👏 hats off

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

WOW!! superb update dear...loved it

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Zuriah

@Zuriah

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Loved it drill here..

Man n abhi are cute but maanveer rocks..looking forward for nxt update. .

Loved it..

P.s. apologies for delay..mera hectic schedule hain😕

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Interesting!

Thank You... 😊

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Mind blowing update Thank You... 😊

Loved it Thank You... 😊

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: JADEKKD
Good keep it up... Thanks... 😊
continue soon Yeah I Will... 😊

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: maryam_ashiyal
Awesome buddy i love the story Thank You Buddy... 😊
and its excellent Thank You Buddy... 😊

i liked it a lot Thank You Buddy... 😊

and loved the twist scene Thank You Buddy... 😊

much more to come Yesss Much More Coming... 😊

waiting for next part tganks a lot 😉Okayzzz... 😊

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: ekra101
awsum appi. Thank You... 😊

bohot accha chappy hai. Thank You... 😊

haye mera manyata and abhi,so much luv between them😉😃😳. Yesss Muuccchhh Muccchhh Love ... 😳

bt uday ayega tou woh sad tod dega, bechara abhi. Haannn... Hosakhta Hai Pehle Abhi Smje Phr Manya... 😊😳

i hope manyata will b found soon in her own palace. Yeahhh Hope So... If Now Manya Is Orphan And Innocent... And As She Becomes Princess So She Would Leave No Stone Behind To Take Her Revenge From Those Who Get Her Insult Every Time... 😃

waithing 4 next chappy eagerly. Thanks Would Be Posted Soon... 😊

komal's family is very sad. Yesss Until Manyata Is Not Found Out... 😊

glad tht my manyata is so talented😃 Yeahhh... 😃 Thanks For The Long Comment Sis... 😊