New update Chapter 9 three cheers for revenge 23/9/2015

Name.Not.Important

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed

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Okay but 4 that u will have to un-naaraaz with me or I'll really Die as I told u,I know u have read my last PM!

❤️ Love u ❤️

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Kulsoom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: simi.k.

❤️ Love u ❤️

God,main ne yeh pehle kyun dekha😳

I love you too,Simran!<3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Hey, just read the character sketch and the prologue. It's good so far, the dark concept consisting of Udayveer who seems to be obsessed with Manyata is intriguing. I will try to read the rest as soon as i can. Thank you for the PM :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Hey, just read the character sketch and the prologue. It's good so far, the dark concept consisting of Udayveer who seems to be obsessed with Manyata is intriguing. I will try to read the rest as soon as i can. Thank you for the PM :)[/QUOTE

Thank you I m glad u like it

I m waiting for u to read the ff

Welcom😊😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Dimple.K
An amazing banner!And a great name,suits your FF,so a thumbs up to both the *title suggester* and the banner maker,<3 Simi <3!And to the FF writer ⭐️Ritu⭐️ too!👏👏👏
PS.Sorry for the late comment,actually I saw your post,but then got busy and didn't remember to comment thinking I already had!😳

Thank you sweetheart😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Karkit
nice banner ...
n title thre
e cheers for revenge perfect

Thanks I hope u like it

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wqadf

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Sorry guys I know I m late but here is the update

Three cheers for sweet revenge

Manyata was pinned between uday and door she could feel uday hot breathe on her which were giving shivering in her own bodychapter 7😛😊😉

u - vasa baby en saab mai hum yeh toh bhul hie gaya aaj humare first night hai after marriage , kya bolta hai suhaag raat

manyata was very scared of his talk but she get all her courage and said

m - don't you dare humare kareeb aana kie jaarure bhe mat karna varna and it was cut off by uday

U - varna kya karunge tum he was giving extreme pain her forearm it was hurting so badly she want to cry but she dont want to show tears in front of him

And he continues kuch nahe , kuch nahe kar sakte samjhe tum Aur vasa bhe tum et nae khaas bhe nahe hoo kae udayveer singh tumhae hath Lagaya tum is layak hie nahe ho . Tumhae kya laga kie hum tumhae chooyange hum jinake peechae lakiya pagal hai humare bhaaho mai aana ka mouka dhoond thee relate hai vo tumhae hath laagaya so dream on Aur sabse important baat agar humae kuch cheej chaiya toh hum usae has eel karaka rahete uska liya humae tumhare permission kie jarurt nahe hai

and shrugged off her shoulder

and went to his king size bed and was reany to sleep when he said

Aur haa yeh bed Humara hai , toh apne liya koe jagah dhoond laena now geet lost and let me sleep and he turn off the lamp

manyata goes outside the room and started walking without thinkhing where is she going and she went to poolside and Finaaly she looses all her strength and collapse on floor tears were coming continuously she was totally broken not understanding kie eek paar mai uskae jinda get kae sath kya ho gaya

kyu bhagavanjee kyu kiya mera sath asa , kyu Maere jindage ka ta mash a bana kae rakh diya . Shadhi har ladke kie life mai itna important hota hai par mare life mai badla laena ka ek Sahara ban gaye. Kyu Maere jindage mai etna Dhuk likha kyu , kya Mao khusiya deserve nahe karte , maina toh kabhe kissae kae sath kuch bura nahe kiya toh mera sath kyu . Kya etna bura hu mai kya mai sirf logo kie na raat deserve karte ho on and finally she scattered on floor

back ground music

Maina nahe jaana

tunae nahe jaana

jaana anjaane jo hua

galte nahe hai taere

Galte nahe hai Maere

pair bhe yeh dil kyu hai

Tere aahatein kyu hai...

And finally she went to sleep

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Name.Not.Important

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

superb update...
loved it completely.. but uday he is soo evil
poor manyata.. why is Uday like this...
pls update soon as I can't wait to know what happens next...
thanks for pm 😊

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wqadf

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: simi.k.
superb update...
Thank you
loved it completely.. but uday he is soo evil
I know he is too much
poor manyata.. why is Uday like this
I also feel pity for manyata. ... Uday past I can't reveal now
pls update soon as I can't wait to know what happens next...
yes I will
thanks for pm 😊

ur most welcome😛

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