ff:Woh Miley Tey Par Bicchandne Keh Liye (BOOK1) *Chapter 9* (22/3/16)

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice update

Thanx Dear... 😊

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Ana..
Great update!!

Thanx Dear...😊 Waiting For That Day That U Will Write A Big Comment... 😊 Hihihihihihi... 😆 Joking... 😃 😆 U Read Comment And Like It Its Enough For Me... 😊

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Maham

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

wow superb

such a long and

awesome update and

continue thanks 4 the pm

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Maha-Srk
wow superb Thank You...😊 Such a long Thank You...😊 and awesome update Thank You ... 😊 and Continue thanks 4 the pm Sure Will Update Soon ... 😊

Thank You Dear For The Comment ... 😊 And Will Post The Next Chapter Soon.. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

really loved the update it was awesome... loved the convo between uday and giriraj its was the best...haha i loved at the line when maria said world war hand ended but the piece is still here that made me crack up...what is ruhina up to i wonder why she didnt got with maria and others... haha she has been getting a strange feeling probably because of daniel... y does it feel like ruhina is none other piya ...ohhh that bit was awesome when ruhina drops her bracelet and when daniel tried to pick it up his hands burned... i loved how he was determined to pick up the bracelet and he did by wrapping it in a cloth but the his sister came and even i was shocked when she said she was going to india... daniel got shocked seeing ruhina as she looked like piya now im still wondering iif she is actually piya ... i really loved flashback scene between daniel and piya how they first met...even i have the same question as daniel and hope they all are answered soon...i wonder y ruhina mom doesnt want manayta to be back... manyata didnt want to read the book but she finally ended up after all its her story...oops daneil kissed ruhina when she was sleeping... even like maria i wondering what is ruhina mission...omg khushi had a dream of childhood manyata and uday really loved that bit...i wonder who khushi called and who was the person that told her real identity was it daniels sister really curious to know please do update soon and thanks for the pm

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: preya_radev
really loved the update it was awesome... Thank You...😊 loved the convo between uday and giriraj its was the best... Thank You... 😊 haha i loved at the line when maria said world war hand ended but the piece is still here that made me crack up... Yeahhh I Smiled At That Maria's Statement... What is ruhina up to i wonder why she didnt got with maria and others... I Myself Don't Know About It... 😊 haha she has been getting a strange feeling probably because of daniel... Yeahh All Thanks To Him... 😊 y does it feel like ruhina is none other piya ... Piya... 😲 Vampire. 😲 Nopee She Isn't Piya ... How Could It Be Possible.. She's Human.. 😊 ohhh that bit was awesome when ruhina drops her bracelet and when daniel tried to pick it up his hands burned... Thank You.. 😊 i loved how he was determined to pick up the bracelet and he did by wrapping it in a cloth but the his sister came and even i was shocked when she said she was going to india... Maybe Alvina Is In Some Kinda Of Mission... Daniel got shocked seeing ruhina as she looked like piya now im still wondering iif she is actually piya ... Yeahhh He Would Be... 😊 i really loved flashback scene between daniel and piya how they first met... Thank You... 😊 ...even i have the same question as daniel and hope they all are answered soon... Okayyy.. 😊 And I Hope They Would Be Answered Soon...Doesn't Take Much Time... 😊 i wonder y ruhina mom doesnt want manayta to be back... Menka Doesn't Want That Manyata Should Come.. As $he Hates Her Family Of Doing Unfair With Her... manyata didnt want to read the book but she finally ended up after all its her story... Manyata Finally Made Up Her Mind To Read It As Her Brain Was In Against And Her Heart Was In Favour Of It... It Wasn't Her Story.. But As She Read It She Was Getting Flashbacks Of Her Childhood ... 😊 oops daneil kissed ruhina when she was sleeping... Yesss He Did... 😳 even like maria i wondering what is ruhina mission.. Soon U Will Find It Out Whyy And What She Came To California. omg khushi had a dream of childhood manyata and uday really loved that bit... Yesss And Thank You... 😊 wonder who khushi called and who was the person that told her real identity was it daniels sister really curious to know please do update soon and thanks for the pm Who Was That Person You Will Know It In Next Chapter... 😊

Thank You Diii For Long Comment... 😊 And Will Update It Soon... 😊

Edited by alisha_ashiyal - 10 years ago

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

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Edited by alisha_ashiyal - 10 years ago

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Will Be Updated Soon Stay Tuned... 😊

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Humairaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Hey di, how you? 😊
So sorry for the late reply
Let's see...
The updated was superb, fantastic and mind blowing 👏
Loved the convo between Uday and Giriraj, can see the love and concern for his son as well as could see that he wants his son to live a nice life and focus on finding and then he will
Ruhina seemed a bit fishy when she didn't go with the others but anyway, loved how Daniel found her
Is she a look a like of Piya? Very curious as to what going to happen with them
Loved how Daniel picked up Ruhina's bracelet
Does Daniel's sister inform the jaigar and Devgarh families?
Loved Daniel's flashback but if she didn't want to be friends with him, how did they fall in love with each other? Very curious to know
Ruhina's mom sounds like a horrible person, what did Manyata ever do to her that she doesn't want her to come back? Or is it because she wants her son to be the next king?
Loved Khusi and Maria's convo, it was so cute
Loved Khusi's dreams, they were adorably cute
Really want to know who told Manyata the truth, was it Daniel's sister or one of the Devgarh/Jaigarh family members?
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

hey alisha superb update loved it to the core but sorry for the late reply
so that voice in khushi's dream was of daneils sis. I have really started to like her now
looking forward to seeing the manveer meeting
do continue soon n don't forget to pm me😊

Edited by simi.k. - 10 years ago