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Hey guys. Im really sorry for the delay but I was busy with exams and other stuff. The update isnt long enough, although I tried but I didnt get time. Without wastimg more time. Here you go with:

Chapter 13

Manyata in her mind: I know i hurt you alot Uday. You wanted me to confess na i will today. Now i'll see how you remain angry with me.

Manyata reached Uday Niwas and straightly rushed to Uday's suite. She entered his room. He was standing facing the other way, wearing a black vest. Manyata saw him and took a deep breath. She closed her eyes and smiled as she remembered all the loving moments that they had spent together and his hot face that always reflected how deeply he loved her. She opened her eyes and moved towrds him. Uday felt a soft kiss on the back of his neck. He felt a head rest on his back, and a pair of beautiful hands crawl onto his chest as their owner hugged him from behind. He felt shocked and a genuine smile played on his face as he recognized the touch of his lady love.

Uday: Manyata...

Manyata: How'd you know its me?

Uday: You're my other half so how wouldn't I know?

Manyata lets go of him and turns him around.

Uday: anyways your highness, what brings you here. I thought you'd be dancing happily now that you're free from my clutches.

Manyata: Uday please..

Uday: what happened sweetheart? You felt bad? Im soo sorry. Humne toh her highness ki shaan main ghustakhi krdi. I always do. Dont I? I mean who other than me would dare to love your body.

Manyata felt shocked and hurt hearing such words coming from Uday. She moved away only to get pulled back. She started to struggle but instead of letting her go Uday tightened his hold on her. Manyata saw a spark of fire in his eyes. She looked away from him. The second she did, she felt Uday's fingers travel to her chin and made her look into his eyes forcefully. As soon as she looked in his eyes, she could see throygh him. Manyata could feel the roller coaster of emotions within him which he hid. She could feel the anger, the hurt and the betrayal and she knew she was losing herself in his glare. Her eyes softened down and stared at him in awe and admiration.It was a moment where she was at a loss of words, frozen in her spot, looking in those eyes. Manyata felt an urge to give herself away in his love. She loved him enough to burn away in the fire coming out of his eyes.Manyata continued to stare at Uday and this time her eyes reflected love. Uday was her Prince and she couldn't get enough of him Looking into his eyes she wondered how hot he was and how delicious his lips looked. His persona and aura was out of the world. He was perfect. He always knew what to do, how to act. He was a sexy, cunning, and calculative Prince who had looks one could die for. He was born with an attitude that made people go weak in their knees. But above all he was just a man who loved deeply, her Uday who had a heart of gold who loved his princess soo much that its depth was impossible to measure. Manyata knew she loved all his sides. Be it the cunning yuvraj or the hard core lover. She felt like she could never get tired of looking at him.It seemed as if Uday knew what was going on in Manyata's mind. He could sense her emotions and he felt something prick his heart looking at her face. She looked sooo in love with him.

Manyata decided it was high time.he knows how she feels about him.

Manyata: Uday I love you. I love you alot. Please dont hurt me like this. I know I was wrong. I always have been. I belong to you. My heart, my soul everything is yours. Please dont push me away. I really do love you. I'll die if you continue to ignore me. Your silence is killing me.

Uday was sure his princess meant every word she said and he knew what to do next.

Without wasting any time he claimed her lips. He slowly nibbled on her upper lip and then her lower lip. He sucked her lips lightly. She moaned abit which made uday pull her closer. He bit Manyata's lips for an entrance. He savoured every part of her mouth. Both were lost in the moment. No one was ready to stop. On sensing Manyata going out of breath, he pulled away. He placed his forehead against hers. Manveer had a small smile playing on their lips. Manyata closed her eyes on feeling wet kisses on her neck. In between the kiss

Uday: I love you sooo much Manyata. You gave me everything I ever wished for. I've been dying to hear these words. I love you.

Manyata: I love you 2.

Uday gets busy once again in kissing manyata. He places wet kisses on her jawline and nuzzles her cheeks with his nose.

Uday: so akhir tumne wohi kiya na jo hum chahte thy.

Manyata: I couldnt lose such a hot prince who loves me unconditionally so krna prna.

She pecks his lips. They hug each other tightly.

He feels his shirt getting soaked. He pulls away and sees Manyata's weeping.

Uday: baby what's wrong?

Manyata: Uday I used to hate you before. I wasnt able to accept the fact that our roka happened. On top of that I was hurt that you hid this from me. I was angry, not at you, but at myself for forgetting such an important part of my life. I cursed you and behaved rudely with you but due to your immense love I had to bow down. Na na krte hum tumse pyaar kr bethe aur humein is baat ka ehsaas hi nhi hua. I made a mistake that I realized late that I love you but what about you? Tum toh humse pyaar krte thy na. Toh kya yehi tha tumhara pyaar? Humari ek galti ki tum humein itni bari saza de rhe thy. How could you even think of leaving me. Was your love for me sooo weak? Was this the amount of trust you had in me? You always said that you can see love in my eyes for you then how could you. How could you break ties with me. Ek baar bhi mere barey main nhi socha? Did you not once think that I never stop you when you come close to me. I always stay near you. I never hesitate sharing sweet moments with you. Did you not realize how much I love you? Then why Uday, why did you hurt me so much and leave me without letting me explain why? WHY? (she cries bitterly and sits on the floor. Uday gets tears in his eyes seeing his princess)

Manyata continues: I thought you knew me Uday. Ek baar humne tumse kehdia k tum humse nhi humare jism se pyaar krte aur tumne us baat ko sach maan lia.Kyun? Im your fiance god dammit.I have the rights. I have the right to fight with you, right to kiss you, right to lose myself to you and the right to say whatever I like to you. Phir kyun kiya aisa? You did not once think abt the love I had fr you instead you just left me for that one thing I said for you. You knew how much I love you and still you did. How could you. I hate you Uday. You always make me cry. I hate you I really do.

Uday goes to manyata and hugs her tightly.

Uday: Im sorry princess. I promise I'll never do this again. I know I was wrong but my anger overpowered my love. Pleaae forgive me baby. I love you and I won't do anything like this. Apni jaan ko maaf krdo.

She tightly hugs him and places her head on his chest.

Manyata: If you ever do this again I swear hum apni jaan dedein ge

Uday: just shutup manyata 😡 you've said this once now dont ever say it again.

Manyata knew Uday got upset with her sentence. She snaked her arms around his neck and pulled him closer. She locked her lips with his. Uday's anger vanished and both got lost in the moment.

Manyata broke of the kiss and looked into Uday's eyes deeply.

Manyata: you know you look sexier when you're angry. 😉

Uday: everyone says that.

Manyata: everyone?

Uday: all my girl fans sweetheart 😃

Manyata: Agr tumne ab kisi lrki ko ankh utha k bhi dekha toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga. You're only mine

Uday: yeah I know all yours meri jaan.

Manveer get up.

Manyata: I'll leave now Uday.

Uday: princess don't go yet please 😔

Manyata: I have to. Everyone will be worried thanks to the bomb you dropped on them this morning.

Uday feels bad and says: Im really sorry princess. I should have controlled myself. 😔

Manyata: its okay. Now forget about it.

Uday: next time I get angry or upset just give me a long passionate kiss. All my anger will melt 😃

Manyata: na baba na. I aint taking the risk. You'll get angry everyday just for a kiss. I know you very well so no chance baby. She winks at him.

Uday smiles and hugs manyata. He pecks her forehead.

Uday: Now go before I change my mind. You look so sexy humari niyat bigar rhi hai 😉

Manyata: besharam.

Uday: ab tumse kya sharmana. You're a part of me 😊

Manyata: I love you Yuvraaj.

Uday: I love you too soon to be Mahrani Manyata Udayveer Singh. 😉

Manyata: hmm that sounds great 😃 bye.

Uday: hmm it sure does sweetheart isliye jldi se humare se shaadi kr k humare mahel main ajao and then you will be Mahrani Manyata Udayveer Singh not only for me but for the whole world.

Manyata: we'll talk about marriage later baby. I seriously have to go.

She gives him a flying kiss and leaves. Uday chuckles and gets lost thinking of the moment he shared with his princess.

Manyata reaches devgarh mahal and walks straight to her room smiling like an idiot. She barely notices all the eyes staring at her.

Jay: wow jiji looks happy. Subah toh chehre pe 12 bje hue thy.

Vijay: lagta hai jungle queen and tarzan k beech sab theek hogaya hai.

DS: See I told all of you that there is no need to be worried. Everything will be fine. By the smile of Manyata's face anybody can say that shes really satisfied and happy. Im sure they have confessed.

All the others smile. Unnati excuses herself and goes to Manyata's room

She sees her friend looking out the window and smiling to herself

Unnati: ahem ahem where are you lost madam? So how'd everything go?

Manyata: Everything went really well and like you said he forgave me in no time. Thanks unnati. I would never be able to do this if it wasnt for you. Im happy that you are a part of my life.

Unnati: awwe thats so sweet of you. And no need to thank me. We're family. It was my duty. I feel honoured to have you as my future bhabi 😉

Unnati: waise tumhare aur dada k beech main kuch hua? 😃

Manyata smirks.

Unnati: I can see by the smirk that bht kuch hua hoga 😆 you look just like dada. All he ever does is smirk. So I can imagine what the both of you might have done jo itni jldi you've learnt how to smirk like dada.

Manyata: Unnati zip it 😳

Unnati: Manyata promise me you'll never leave dada. He'll break. 😔

Manyata: meri pyaari nanad I promise I wont leave him. Leaving him means losing my life. Humesha apne saath bandh k rakhun gi tumhare dada ko waise b bht bigar gaye hain 😆

Unnati: I'll help you. We'll be two against one.

Manyata: yeah but tumhare dada akele hi kaafi hain. Hes the best.

Unnati smiles.

Unnati: ayein things are heating. Now I'll take your leave. Bye.

They both hug each other and Unnati leaves.

Manyata is busy thinking abt Uday when her mobile rings. A huge smile comes on her face.

Manyata: hello Sir. How can I help you?

Uday: Well I wanted to talk to my beautiful would be wife manyata so can you call her.

Manyata: Sorry Sir, Manyata toh yaha nhi hain. Ap mere se kaam chala lein.

Uday: Im sorry. I love my princess alot. Shes in my every heartbeat. Meri dost, meri saathi, meri zindegi,
Meri dard ki dawa, meri dukh k raahat sab kuch Manyata hi hai.

Manyata gets tears in her eyes.

Manyata: Uday please dont love me so unconditionally. I have nothing to give you in return.

Uday: first of all baby no tears. They are really precious. Secondly, you give me everything just by breathing. I just want you. Nothing else matters to me.

Manyata: Im all yours already. I wany you just as much as you want me. Btw why did you call?

Uday: I was missing you alot.

Manyata: Uday 😆 I just met you half an hour ago and you've already started to miss me.

Uday: ab kya karein princess. Apne humein majnu bnadia hai. Dont you miss me?

Manyata: nope not at all.

Uday: fine then bye.

Manyata: Uday...

He remains quite.

Manyata: baby... meri jaan... kya hua? Naraz hogaye?

Uday: yeah. Im not talking to you any more. I dont like you.

Manyata: thats because you love me. Pocho ge nhi why I dont miss you?

Uday: why dont you miss me?

Manyata: we miss those who are far away from us but tum mere dil main rehte ho. 😳

Uday: haayyeee baby. You made my day.

Manyata: I rock. Dont I? 😉

Uday: yeah brcause you're Yuvraaj UV's fiance.

Manyata: not fiancee. Only gf.

Uday: seems like you've forgotten that humara roka ho chuka.

Manyata: I havent. But I was too small. No one bothered asking me my opinion and even now no body bothered asking me for marriage 😔

Uday knew his princess was talking about him. He realized manyata wanted him to propose her. But kept silent in order to surprise her.

Manyata gets upset as he doesnt respond. She hears footsteps.

Manyata: Uday someone's coming. I'll talk to you later.

Uday: No. and you dare cut the call.

Manyata: Stop being stubborn. Please uday phone bnd kro

Uday: No

Manyata: Uday...

Uday: Manyata...

Manyata: band kro na please. Koi ajaye ga.

Uday: so what you're talking to your future hubby. Fine you can go but give me a kiss.

VB enters the room.

Vb: hey M bhai bht khush lg rhi ho. Kya baat hai?

Manyata gets shocked.

Manyata: Uday bye.

Uday: tumhe humari kasam hai you wont cut the call, first give me a kiss.

Manyata remains silent.

Manyata: VB aisa kch nhi.

VB: so what does loverboy want now?

Uday on phone: im waiting princess.

Manyata: Vb go out for a min

VB: no. Continue your romance. Im not going.

Manyata on call: Uday please.

Uday: humein kuch nhi sunna.

Manyata: Uday stop bothering me aur phone bnd kro.

Uday: Manyata give me my kiss now. Otherwise hum jaey kisi aur se le lein ge.

Manyata: you wouldnt. I'd smack you.

Uday: I would. So either you give me a kiss or...

Manyata: fine. Muuuaaahhh.

Uday: ummmaaah. bye

Uday cuts the call.

VB: Omg. M bhai all romantic. I have to tell jay bhai. Btw I've recorded this. Im going to show it to everyone. 😈

Manyata: You better not tell anyone warna...

Vb: warna what?

Manyata: warna I'll tell everyone about you and...

This was it for chapter 13. I hope you guys enjoyed. Please hit the like button and leave your comments. Thank you.
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omg awesome chapter roshu really loved it ... liked how manyata went to udays room placing a kiss on the back of his neck... although day was angry with her loved how he pulled her towards his and forcefully made her look at him when she tried to look away... really loved the confession bit loved how both shared their emotions especially manyata when she started crying... and i loved the passionate kiss between our manveer to good roshu... haha i was laughing when vijay bhai called manveer as jungle queen and Tarzan... loved unnati and manyata convo it was very sweet... the phone convo was really nice hmm so manyata wants uday to propose her but he doesnt say anything as he wants to surprise her and now i cant wait for that bit... haha vijay has great timing to disturb the lovers... uday gave manyata his kasam that she wouldnt cut the phone on him untill she doesnt give him a kiss and manyata who was hesitant did it in front of vijay... and our lovely evil vijay bhai recorded it now wonder what manyata was talking about that if vijay shows the recording she will tell everyone about something related to him and now that has made curious do update soon roshu really wondering what it could be and thanks u for the pm and this amazing update ..love u X
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lovely. really love it... 😊
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Finally u updated. What a beautiful Manveer scene you added. I hope there is a chapter 14.
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Originally posted by: jagz11

Finally u updated. What a beautiful Manveer scene you added. I hope there is a chapter 14.



Yeah That Was Lovely ChApter.. 😊... Hope U Will Post Next Chapter Quick 😊
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WOW!! nice update dear...loved it
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yippee beautiful update
finally manyata confess her feeling to uday 🥳 🥳
ahem ahem manveer kiss 😳 😳
all the families were really happy for manveer 😃 😃
awe unnati tease manyata 😉 😉
manveer naughty nok jhok was really cute 😉 😉
update soon
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

yippee beautiful update
finally manyata confess her feeling to uday 🥳 🥳
ahem ahem manveer kiss 😳 😳
all the families were really happy for manveer 😃 😃
awe unnati tease manyata 😉 😉
manveer naughty nok jhok was really cute 😉 😉
update soon




Yeahhh Trully Beautifull.. Waiting For Next Chapter... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing as always!! 👏
Finally the moment of confession has come 😳 the first scene is beautiful. Uday is an expert in hiding his true feelings 😛 one moment he is behaving like a romantic boyfriend and then the other he is back to the arrogant Prince lol. 😉 but it's good, now Manayata needs to work hard to get her UV back.
I love the way you write by expressing every emotion of the character ⭐️ and now the confession!! I loved it! 😃 manveer kiss ❤️ 🤪 😳 first one on this ff, isn't it? And evn in between their romance, the nokh-jokh has to be there, after all that makes Manveer 😃 loved Manayatas 'lecture' to UV lol. Now Manayata knows very well how to make an angry Uday happy again 😉 btw never expected M to be so outspoken in this way 😉 UVs dialogues always brings a smile to my face, I can actually imagine the scene when he speaks 😛 'Maharani' combined with Ms name indeed sounds really gud, sadly didn't get the chance to hear it in the show and also seeing M smirking loved VBs names fr everyone: jungle queen and Tarzan 😆 and what is this? M is praising UV, 'he is the best' 😲 we know he is 😳 but didn't expect her to say that. Manveers phone conversation was really sweet 😳
Just noticed that manveer were doing a lot of 'baby' and 'Jaan' in this chapter lol and not only UV but M also 😃 lol te phone kiss was really funny 😆 VB and...
Continue soon.

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