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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Awesome update anni... Loved it.


thank you so much
I am glad that you liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: samanta175

I jst loved it...specially it was so cute to imagine manveer dancing in the rain..😳.bt dear..i couldn't understand why Uday didn't want M to read the book..??


thank you so much
and thanks a lot for commenting
it really means a lot to me
i am glad that you liked it
the puzzle will be solved soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: angleroops

hey anni

the update was nice
i think something is fishy
i mean why would bridraj wanted her younger daughter marring uday
it means dabyanti married uday
and her sautan was none other her own sister
and manyata cant poison anyone
i think its not true
dabyanti loved her sister she wouldnt marry
why would bridraj will declare war aganst raighar
because his elder daughter was going to marry the prince of raighar
lets see
the rain part was vey romantic
thanks for pm
update soon



hey
thank yaar for liking it so much
fishy well it is indeed dear
sorry but to all your assumptions I have only one answer
???????????????
*Smirk*
???????????????
it is my duty
On the date given

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey anni... how r u... really loved the update it was too gd uday was really scared when he thought he lost manyata... dont know y but even though manyata went to return the book at the library i think she will go and get it again... really loved the dance between manvver in the rain too gd do update next part soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: preya_radev

hey anni... how r u... really loved the update it was too gd uday was really scared when he thought he lost manyata... dont know y but even though manyata went to return the book at the library i think she will go and get it again... really loved the dance between manvver in the rain too gd do update next part soon and thanks for the pm


hey jiji
I am fine
well he is going to loose her ultimately
maybe the answer lies some where else
awn thank you so much
it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

The moment froze for them, as they parted away slowly; Manyata scooped her head into his chest, her cheek flushed and she closed her eyes feeling the rain drops on her body and rejoicing in their closeness. As Uday looked down as her and ran his figure softly and lovingly through her hair. They stood in that way for a long time before Manyata parted away and still maintaining her eyes rooted to the ground, she said in a soft nervous voice

MANYATA: We should go back to our room. Or we will catch cold

He looks at her with a smirk and begins to tease her

UDAY: should WE go to our room or just your room

She looked at him and a cute smile just pushed its way out of the mouth, she hit him in the arms slightly and walked away as she was stopped by his call, she did not turn round just heard him say

UDAY: I want all the falls of my life with you, in this similar way.

She smiled as she walked away, he watched her going as a peace settled down in his heart and he whispered to himself

UDAY: I wish, the incident have never come, I wish I had trusted on our love, I wish we had never to part away ... I wish I would be there for you

Next Morning

There was an announcement for the practice, even for the fashion show, but Manyata did not want to deceive Uday anymore and quit going for it and went to see Uday s dance practice. He was really very good at it, she loved the way he looked at her with every move he was making, and at every little interval he came to her and sat beside her, he was such a lovely and perfect boyfriend to her. Every boy envied Uday and every girl envied Manyata for having such a caring boyfriend. But amidst of everything they spend their time together, just an hour was left for the lunch break as she sat and watched but suddenly some sound disturbed her concentration she looked and saw a yellow figure rushing running down the corridor. She stood up and not even knowing she came out and tried following it, but pretty soon she lost track of it and found herself completely lost. She looked around and started to sweat, she had no idea where she was and she tried to find an escape but there were so many doors, she had no idea even how she reached, scared and panicked she called out for Uday, but it was complete silence response that she got. She started to open all the door, but everything settled down to a messed up room, finally the room at the end of the corridor caught her attention opened into something different, the glass of the window was broken, the room had a huge hall with mark of golden chair legs on both the side, and a stair case to the huge throne. Manyata walked up as she suddenly felt very odd seeing the wall adjacent to the throne, she went up and knocked at it, completely shocked she heard the sound getting reflected back in an echo. With all her might she tried pushing the chair away which was indeed hard but because of the rusted iron it was made easy. The trance had started, the spell had begin to break, the destruction had started as in front of her the old door knob which was closed with tons of iron locks suddenly broke into million pieces, but Manyata was not taken aback she simply went inside noticing all the thing round as she saw it was an extremely dirty and messed room, the walls were completely black , but suddenly something caught her attention. A painting that was turned towards it back, she walked towards it as howling spirit tried to stop her but nothing even affected her, she was in a deep trance as she flipped the painting and...

The dance practice was finally over, Uday high fived with his team member and headed towards Manyata, but blood drained away from his body when he saw her missing, a shiver ran down his nerve as he went to everybody asking about her, it was not long when he saw the past repeating itself, one by one all the people began to freeze in their position, he ran as fast as he could to escape the spell. He knew that finally Manyata had found himself, but the spell started to work on him too, he also froze in his position as he felt slightly from his toe to up his head and just before it reached it neck he screamed in pain

UDAY: MANYATA

A gust of dust filled in her eyes, as she saw the picture and her breath was caught up in her throat. Her eyes fixed on the oil painted eyes as she murmured in a soft audible voice


"If you can read me then you have to be me. I have been waiting for you for a thousand years, this story is waiting to be opened, the truth is finally going to be out of the box, the evils are going to be punished for their deeds, the love is going to be tested again. I wrote this letter knowing that ONLY I can come and read to recall my past so that I do not get deceived again. I am here to tell you the oldest story that destroyed many lives, killed the humanity and above all punished the innocent soul. Every single being used me for their own benefits, every single one exploited me in their own way, and everyone caused my end.

I am Princess Manyata, your past and now I am going to be the answer to all your question, the place where you are right now standing was once the symbol of pride, it was the Jaigarh palace, the palace descended for the King of Jaigarh, for the monster. Yes, Maharaja Uday Veer Singh, the cause for everything, the one behind everything, the one who deceived me and cheated me. This very place, in this very room I got myself burned right in front of his eyes yet he remained quiet, standing to a side and looking at my eyes. I choose the wrong person and maybe that was the only mistake I committed, the book had only the half truth and I am here to tell you the story of my Bleeding Heart

The night had bought a new meaning to our marriage, to a new meaning of our love, we finally became one but little did I ever imagine that this was not a dream but a nightmare. Next morning I did not find him by my side, on enquiry I found that he had received a scroll from his one of the sub kingdom general to come over and settle some revolution made by the farmer, so I was hence all alone. Days and I found myself alone in the exhausted and empty palace without him so I headed back to my home for some days. I was warmly welcomed by my family, it was a time of celebration my elder sister was to marry the prince of Raigarh. There was an air of happiness, everything seemed more than perfect. As it was only at the end of the first week that I found I was carrying Udays baby. I even wrote to him and he promised to resolve everything and come back as soon as he could, One of the evening I was called by my father, in every different way he had tried to take out the hidden secrets of Uday s court but being loyal to my husband I restrained from saying anything at all. He was mad at me and also threatened to get my baby killed but my bhaisa protected me. Anwar bhaisa also confessed that my father got me married so that I could destroy Jaigarh. After that I did not even come close to my father and decided to tell everything to Uday once he comes back ... but that was the beginning of my sorrows.


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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
i hate uday!
i donno why but i do!
awesome update anni.
loved it loads!!
waiting for next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Awesome update.. Loved it...
Waiting for d past to be revealed...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
interesting & awesome update dear...😃

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