{Journey of a Wife - 5 } - Hum Rajwaade Hain!!!!!! Last ch - Page 146 - Page 116

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-

What name have u chosen?😳

Originally posted by: SaraloveAshiyal

hii Navi.. Hi Sara, Im very happy that u didnt ended the Story. The story has 13 more chapters , then it'll end😉. And what I say about the Story. It is very awesome,Thank u 🤗 . And I have no words to describe it. Wowww... U R tooo good. Thanks so much 😳. Actually not good u r best... Navi plz Bring ManVeer Romance as u did it before... I don't think I can write all that again , I've been warned by the mods to stop writing that.Navi i also write story. As im new on If. So i didnt know how to use it and how to post it. So I can understand how much get tired writing it. Just Head Off Navi. And plzzz never end ur Story.Awww, that's sweet ... but it must end 1 day😳. It is the best Story... plzzz do reply me... REPLIED😉😆!! Waiting for ur reply DONE😃!

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

lol loved the update.

Thanks Sow 🤗 ... it's so nice to see a comment from u (after ages)😳.
actually am yet to read the last chapter..

Well , it's quite long ... hope u like it though🤔.

chapter 13.2 was really really very good..
loved it... <3

Awww, thank you😳.

'haa neetu' was so funny 😆

Yep ... and CUTE too😉!

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanks for this sweet comment Sow 🤗 .

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: andy.a

Hi navi , 😃 Hi Andy😃

coming to the chapter, it was a very emotional chapter!!!😭😭 U want a tissue?

Part 1 : you know, I felt sad when Sultan died, I know how one feels when one's pet dies, I did tell you about my dog na!! I remember. we cried like someone of our family had died when he died, it even pains me, when ever I think about him, his love was just priceless ... I can understand😳. the saddest part was when we buried him, it was too emotional...😭😭😭😭😭 Do u visit his grave?

Uday is also a human, and is bound to feel that way na! but how could he hold his tears! Royals don't cry ... and more than that - MEN don't cry. And manyta helped him to cry his heart out without shame!! That part was too emotional!!😭 Yes - it was 😔

Part2: somebody got uday injured here na, gr!! I wonder WHO😕? I am surprised you hurt uday😲, did you mistake uday for arnav er darling😉? It was the horse that dropped him sweet-heart😉. And now uday needs a surgery, and what next navi??? Guess😉 ...How much more are you going to add to their troubles??? U ain't seen nothing yet😈!!! (lol. I am joking, I love this track, however Good to know😉)

So uday is confined to bed by his STRICT wife, he he he... and FINALLY after years manyta opened the gift Not YEARS - WEEKS!! , how thoughtful of uday to gift her kangans!! Another emo scene!!( where you planning to help the tissue company???)😆 I'm setting up 1 myself😳.

Part 3: uday is not planning another kid??? But he enjoys TRYING FOR IT☺️. He he he , his way of politely saying back off, reminded me of someone I talk to everyday, can't remember her name, do you know her navi? I don't know her😕! ( wink😉😆)... well he forgot about the farmhouse delivery, lol😆 He doesn't know about it .. if I tell him, he may run off.

I still hate brigraj!! He is a fool!! If you want to be attached to your grand child, you should take an effort , not others!!! Well said👏!

Part 4: you started it with a mystery, I was thinking, why were they there? Did u guess correctly? Was udita AGAIN injured?? Plenty time for that😈 . But then it turned out to be something else; I liked the way you went on writing the time and incident!! It was like watching an action movie😆 I was trying a new approach😳.

The bday part was nice, cant wait for the one tmrw, or should I say today evening, lol😃 U enjoyed the cake there... didn't you😉?

The part where ajeeth goes behind udita was funny, reminded me of my niece, of how SHE went behind my cousin's would be's sister's kid, who was some 3 year old... she never left his side ever... Future pairing😉??

I JUST WANT TO ASK, WHAT IS WRONG WITH UDAY??😡 Nothing is wrong with him ... he is PERFECT. he is over possessive!!! Its too suffocating( he is too possessive and even I am '1000😆 times less possessive than he is Actually - I used YOU as my inspiration for that part😉! ) come on, the kid was just 4 year old and he was acting as if he is old enough to ask her hand!! Why shoud he get mad for silly matters?😡 U answered your own question at the start - he is possessive of his girl😳😃.

Um, the poor boy, was helping udita and uday was trying to kill him by throwing him into a pool?? God!! this IS TOO MUCH!!😡😡😡😡 I know 😆. Um just wondering why ajeeth's mama's name is highlighted???' Andy - u ask silly questions🤪. U know I don't give Character sketches .. so, whenever I introduce a new character - I put their names in BOLD writing😳 . any part for her in future? Hawww - u forgot? Go back to my promo and check😉.

Uday can flirt with girls when he was young EXCUSE ME MISS ... he is still young😳!!and wants to lock his daughter up??? Isn't it hypocrisy??? Um, good think he apologized... and loved the cute scene bw manveer It was supposed to be NAUGHTY😕.

And after all the "fun" they had , jai gets herself drenched in juice and all she finds to wear is heels??? Well - it was THE ONLY PAIR THAT FITTED PROPERLY😳. And when she fell I felt fear!! It was too hard to explain!! And harder to write!

Part 5: um, I HATE ANYONE WHO SEPARATES A MAMA FROM HER KID!!! 😡 U said THAT many times before ... but I'm still not changing my track to accommodate you😉! Lol it's the third time I am saying this na!! I am shocked!!! Too shocked !! I know I don't like jai!! But that does not mean I want her dead, especially in this state... Then WHICH STATE😕?

Um, just a doubt, it could even be that I was dreaming, when I was reading the first time I felt like I read something like, uday chose the kid and let jai die, and manyta says he did the right thing as jai would have suffered if she lost her baby? WOW - U know what's going on in the new chapter even before I could write it😕 ... you're becoming SPOOKY! Something like that, but now its not there, maybe I did not read correct... because if I was in uday's place I would choose jai and not the kid..😭 I would choose the Baby😳.

I really felt bad for jai, loved the name jasmine!! Are you a fan of alladin? Not really ... WHY? And udita took responsibility of jasmine , er??? All she did was nod her head ... doesn't mean she knew what she promised to do😆.

I am a bit happy reading some of your replies that jai is not dead...When did I say that😕? because a child deserves a mother, bring her back na navi!!!! No!

Finally the end of the comment!! No kidding😆.

Did you die of boredom, ... on the verge of slipping into a coma😉! will go for short comment from bk 6 ok???😉😆 We'll see😉.

Thanks for the pm , Welcome ... did u delete it? waiting for july 22😆 Me too ... it's my birthday😳.
love you❤️ Love u too😳.

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

welcome navina 🤗

loved the last chapter as well..😃 Aww - thank you 🤗 .
i liked it even more cos it was quite long If you're dancing, that means it wasn't boring😆!

sad that jay had to die.. DID she die😲?
and i cant understand how uday can choose who has to live.. ideally only jagat would hav the right to do so.. Right ... but nobody was willing to make a choice and the decision landed on Uday

seriously only manyata can think all this.. adopt jay's kid.. wat does she think.. poor jagat he has already lost his wife.. now his only happiness in life would be his daughter n manyata wants to take that away frm him.. Manyata doesn't think things through😆, thank god uday acts sensible and convinces manyata.. Correct!!

and her example for saying kids shouldnt be brought up without a mother - her and jay... i would any day prefer manyata over jay.. i mean the original jay🤢 not the one she has become.. I'd choose Manyata also.

ummm u kno even after this long i still miss manveer.. I can relate - I miss them too😭.
the cvs could hav done some justice and given us a few romantic scenes n a few fights say after marriage n d list goes on... & if they were short on ideas- WE could've helped them out😉! sigh it dint happen..

thanks to all the writers especially you through whom manveer lived all this while... Thanks😃. I was also very disappointed with the show, that's 1 of the main reasons that I started writing. UNFORTUNATELY - the stuff I wanted to see ... I have to write myself

thanks a ton for writing such a beautiful story 👏 and also completing it.. <3 It's not complete ... another book to go😉.

wish there could have been a few more chapters.. Your wish has been granted Sow 😉. readers are always hungry u kno 😆 😛 I know I know 😆.

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-