~Our Incomplete Love~ - Page 2

Originally posted by: fireroad99

THIS ALMOST MADE ME CRY

JUST LOVE IT

LOVELY

Originally posted by: cnibir

did you have the intention of making me cry... sunha sunha rula diya...

But in saying that it was such a beautifully written OS, i mean the feelings of each character, the despair of loosing someone... it was all too much!!!

great job and even though the ending wasn't happy the story itself had a really nice message/Moral

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: shankrishty

awesome os.
Thanks of the PM

Originally posted by: sanah12

Can't find words to describe how awesome the os was.
Loved it to the core!
The first part was really cute where manveer where kids
Uday was jealous but he didn't tell her that he loved her that's sad
Manyata use to love him as well but uday didn't get her signal what she meant.
The last part was heartbreaking, really emotional.
The concept was nice but I wish it could be a happy ending but as they say all ending don't have a happy ending.
Beautifully written.
Do write more
Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: tazeen...

Awesome Os...

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#009966" size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome OS Anni.

</div>Beautifully written👏.
The end was very sorrowful😭.
I like happy endings Anni ...
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... but u made me cry.</font>

Originally posted by: nishaya...

I cried Annie!

What more do i need to say