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Your story is truly awesome.
I read it in one go.
I was searching for some good stories on DEK when I came across this. And I'm glad I happened to read it.
Its totally diffrent from every story I read till date..
Coming to your story, it grips the reader from the very start..
It keeps our excitement intact by some suspense and the suspense is also not dragged much..
Loved new Manyata aka Ananya.. Jai is nothing compared to her.
I personally think Ananya-Meenakshi interaction showed us what Ananya is like. Looking at her response to her, one csn say she is totally changed in attitude from what she was before.
Uday has also changed drastically. He's treating Manyata in such a bad way. But can anyone truely blame him? The jealousy and possessive nature of him clearly tells that he still loves Manyata. Also, he should not have kissed Manyata forcefully in his jealousy. But still loved it as it was Manyata's first kiss which she shared with Uday. As its said you can never forget your first kiss.
Hate Jai so much. Its true girls like her can never change. She's still jealous of Manyata as Manyata got better than her. Now, I don't want any of her plans to put Ananya down should succeed as she's done that enough to Manyata.
Loved how Unnati & Vijay wishing her happiness with Samar from heart. Even after knowing that it'll break Uday's heart coz he can deny as much as he want but he still feels for Manyata only.
Samar's character is truly nice. Don't want him to be heart-broken. Its clearly evident that he truly loves her. The way he spoke back to jai & uday clearly showed how much he cares for her.
Also, I forgot to mention, I love complete family of Ananya. They're very nice and care for her so much. They brought her in their family when she had no place to live. Also love Ananya's bond with her dada. His soft attitude towards her was clearly emphasized by you which I liked a lot.
What happened with Anaya's cousin Jhanvi is too bad. All coz of Jai. And Uday took Jai's side. All coz of his anger & his huge ego. Want Ananya to expose Jai in front of not only Devgadh family but also in front of all. That will teach her a lesson.
When you mentioned about missing show-stopper, I thought why not Ananya become the show-stopper? This will not only backfire Jai's plan but will also make that Queen ofJealousy more jealous.. And as this fashion-show is on bridal wear, it'll sure leave an impact on Uday.
Reading last line I have a feeling that Jhanvi is going to propose Ananya to be her show-stopper. Hope she doesn't tell in front of Jai as shell surely try to create more prblms for her.
This is the longest comment I've given till date. Loved your story sooo much.
When are you going to update next part? Please make it fast. I'm too excited to read further..
Pls pm me when u update next.. I've sent u a buddy request.
I read it in one go.
I was searching for some good stories on DEK when I came across this. And I'm glad I happened to read it.
Its totally diffrent from every story I read till date..
Coming to your story, it grips the reader from the very start..
It keeps our excitement intact by some suspense and the suspense is also not dragged much..
Loved new Manyata aka Ananya.. Jai is nothing compared to her.
I personally think Ananya-Meenakshi interaction showed us what Ananya is like. Looking at her response to her, one csn say she is totally changed in attitude from what she was before.
Uday has also changed drastically. He's treating Manyata in such a bad way. But can anyone truely blame him? The jealousy and possessive nature of him clearly tells that he still loves Manyata. Also, he should not have kissed Manyata forcefully in his jealousy. But still loved it as it was Manyata's first kiss which she shared with Uday. As its said you can never forget your first kiss.
Hate Jai so much. Its true girls like her can never change. She's still jealous of Manyata as Manyata got better than her. Now, I don't want any of her plans to put Ananya down should succeed as she's done that enough to Manyata.
Loved how Unnati & Vijay wishing her happiness with Samar from heart. Even after knowing that it'll break Uday's heart coz he can deny as much as he want but he still feels for Manyata only.
Samar's character is truly nice. Don't want him to be heart-broken. Its clearly evident that he truly loves her. The way he spoke back to jai & uday clearly showed how much he cares for her.
Also, I forgot to mention, I love complete family of Ananya. They're very nice and care for her so much. They brought her in their family when she had no place to live. Also love Ananya's bond with her dada. His soft attitude towards her was clearly emphasized by you which I liked a lot.
What happened with Anaya's cousin Jhanvi is too bad. All coz of Jai. And Uday took Jai's side. All coz of his anger & his huge ego. Want Ananya to expose Jai in front of not only Devgadh family but also in front of all. That will teach her a lesson.
When you mentioned about missing show-stopper, I thought why not Ananya become the show-stopper? This will not only backfire Jai's plan but will also make that Queen ofJealousy more jealous.. And as this fashion-show is on bridal wear, it'll sure leave an impact on Uday.
Reading last line I have a feeling that Jhanvi is going to propose Ananya to be her show-stopper. Hope she doesn't tell in front of Jai as shell surely try to create more prblms for her.
This is the longest comment I've given till date. Loved your story sooo much.
When are you going to update next part? Please make it fast. I'm too excited to read further..
Pls pm me when u update next.. I've sent u a buddy request.
