Adhoore - Page 2

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awww Anni - that was so beautiful😳. Superb piece of writing👏. Really emotional! And the end was heart-breaking ... when Uday imagined that they would've had a child like that. Unfortunately - DEATH IS A REALITY & LIFE GOES ON!

Originally posted by: anu1299

hey!

this os was just so amazing

and ur a fabulous writer as i always say ;)...

it was so heart touching... loved it to the core...

keep it up

LOVE ANMOL

Originally posted by: pia.raha

hey its veryy touchingg!!!! a heartfelt story truly,gr88 writngg dearr!!!!!

Originally posted by: sanah12

Don't really have to describe how heart touching and beautiful it was.
Loved it loads!
Jaggat and udays fight was good
Poor Manyata died.
Feeling really sorry for uday.
Love the way you described the character and the way you wrote the whole story
It was just awesome!
You are a fabulous writer!
Plzzz do write more.
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: huma12.

fantastic baby sister

Originally posted by: ---ButterFly---

Yar zabardasti this os touching my heart it was feel able os I have no words sorry but I m speechless yar amazing last scene was touching my heart yar I m feeling very sad for uday yar I must say you are very talented written you fabulouse genious I loved it yar amazing that's name was suitable name and perfect character you discribe each and every line your os touched my heart it was so deep and intense story but my was shattered or it's good yar had daughter yar very nice buhot buhot beautiful loved it write more keep it up love you my dear! Cya🤗

Girlies this was my request to all of you please give likes and auspicious long comments to Annesha encourage her please she was very good and talented written please girlies that was my humble request.

Thank you.!

So kind of you all who encourage Annesha

Love you my cutie always mazak Karen wali itna acha likhugi ham yar orry for late comment beat me yahi punish itna beautiful os late parne ki yar super cool like me😉