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MrsSSO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

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Hey Navi ... 🤗

How are you ?

The update was good !

Well - written !

That it always is ... 😆

I loved the whole thing ... 😳

PIRATES ... 😲

That sounds ... scary and adventurous !

I am glad that the pirates were caught !

Of course everyone would be ... 😆

To tell you ...

I did thought that there might be some COAST GUARDS involved !

Makes it more realistic ...

Is that like the right word ? 🤔

Manyata is five months pregnant ... 😲

I thought they just discovered that she was pregnant ... ?

Did the time pass by ?

Navi,

Are you writing a SEA ADVENTURE book ?

I mean first PIRATES and now a SHIPWRECK ... 😲

God knows what you are going to do with those three poor people out on sea ... 😲

Count VIRAT in too ... that makes it four 😆

One more thing,

What do you mean by ...

NEXT UPDATE - WHEN I'M SATISFIED WITH THE RESPONSE!

(I'm saying this because between ch1 and ch2 , my LIKES have decreased by 10😔!)

I can understand that but still ...

Please update soon ...

I am waiting to read more and more !

Continue soon ...

Edited by catty2000 - 11 years ago

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DaddyzPwincess

@DaddyzPwincess

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

omg that was an amazing update but, it was a little scary
ur and amzing writer
udita is so cute
and manveer are the best at being a couple and parents
that precap looks scary and cant wait till the next update

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Grt update Navi...Pirates were given a good punishment and i loved the lecture Udita was given by her 'PAAPA'..to be a elder sis...😳...

awww...Udita actually obeys her PAAPA's words a lot n so had her share of food so well...That was really nice...

Over all the part was lovely..👏👏.sorry i can't give a longer comment as not feeling well...😕

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Hey awesome chapter navi... So uday n family r safe bt nt for long, i hope this danger also passes by n dey safely reach home...
Hey navi i hv a request, i m missing d arrogant n lil dark uday, possesive n all like b4...
If u cud put this up in some chapter ahead, i wud b glad n thankful

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Thank god the family was saved just int he nick of time from the pirates.

I am too sad to read the next chapter, i don't want to see the happy family suffering. Please don't let anyone die.. PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: PrincessZaneb
omg that was an amazing update but, it was a little scary
Thank you 🤗, it had to be scary ... PIRATES are terrifying people.
ur and amzing writer

Thanx for the compliment Zaneb😳.
udita is so cute

... she takes after her DAD😳😉!
and manveer are the best at being a couple and parents
that precap looks scary and cant wait till the next update

It is going to be a SHOCKING CHAPTER😲!

Thanks for this awesome comment Zaneb 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Grt update Navi...Thanks Gargi 🤗 . Pirates were given a good punishment and i loved the lecture Udita was given by her 'PAAPA'..to be a elder sis...😳... But the poor child never understood a word.

awww...Udita actually obeys her PAAPA's words a lot n so had her share of food so well...That was really nice... Hmmm , she's HER FATHER'S LITTLE GIRL.

Over all the part was lovely..👏👏.sorry i can't give a longer comment as not feeling well...😕 I understand , THIS IS MORE THAN ENOUGH! I hope u get better REALLY SOON😃.

Thanks 4 the lovely comment Gargi 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: cnibir
Thank god the family was saved just int he nick of time from the pirates.
Arre "THANK GOD" Kyun , saara kaam toh maine kiya , na?😭

I am too sad to read the next chapter, Awww , that means u won't read? I'm sad now😔!!!!! i don't want to see the happy family suffering. But my plot requires some SUFFERING. Please don't let anyone die.. PRETTY PLEASE!!!!! Who do u think is going to DIE?

Hey , I think this was your first comment on my FF. Thank you for finally commenting 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: huma12.
Awsssmmm niviii thank god u saved uday

Thanks Huma 🤗 , I had to save Uday ... IF HE DIES - MY BOOK DIES😭!!!!!!

Originally posted by: saakhi01
Hey awesome chapter navi... Thank you 🤗 . So uday n family r safe bt nt for long, i hope this danger also passes by n dey safely reach home... Don't count on it!
Hey navi i hv a request, i m missing d arrogant n lil dark uday, possesive n all like b4... OMG😲! That characteristics of his ,doesn't fit in my plot😕!
If u cud put this up in some chapter ahead, i wud b glad n thankful I would love to fulfil your wish, but that is totally adverse to my storyline ... Maybe much later I could do it , but not right now😒.

Thanx 4 the lovely comment 🤗 .

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

thank god manyta ne thik time p-e call kar diya,aur wo log sahi waqt pe chale aayee!!!!! warna kya ho jata😭😭 aww uday is such a cutee father ,talks to her kidss soo soo sweetlyyy!!!!!!! and i think uday likes baby girls mre 😉 uditaa iss chooo chweeett,i jst love herr!!!!! haye ranna ye kya hoga pehle pirates ab ship wrecked,how will they swim so muchh!!!!!! navii gt ur scrapp!!!!!!😊😊😊

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