(J of a Wife 4) Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum ... Last Chapter - Page 146 - Page 114

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Navina!

First of all, I Am Really Sorry for not pressing the LIKE BUTTON on your previous update ( i know you must be saying "HOW DARE YOU") but then i remember doing it (i guess golmaal ho gaya ;-( ) . Please don't mind.

Secondly, CONGRATULATIONS ON A NEW THREAD. It proves how AMAZING WRITER YOU ARE...

Coming to the update.. I am very MAD at Uday now. Enough is Enough ( i know you will make him pay for it..still can't help). Overall, the update was emotional as well but i loved it.

Hence, See you on your next thread Navi, till then Take Care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tune to title se darra diya 😲 ... Last chapter sunke shock ho gayi 😆 ... Anyways Awesome update Navi 👏 👍🏼 .. The Story is getting more interesting... Manyata begging for uday's mercy .. The scene when ManVeer remembering their son Virat is really touching... 😭 Waiting for more ... Plz continue soon dear!!!!!!! 🤗 And my hearty congrats for ur New thread.. 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago

29 January 2014 Hi..Hey😛
The last chapter of book4 was beautifully written Thank you 🤗
Or should say it is a bomb on manyata Ya - an ATOM BOMB😈.
As uday is back with his style Yep ... the Yuvraaj is back.
Love udita in it she is a cute pie Indeed😳.
She will make her parents come close one day or I should say u will make it happen Yeah - I better do it ... as she's too small to handle such a huge responsibility😆.
So Philip is dead it is so good
Liked the way u made him die could not stop laughing Glad u found it funny😉
Don't let manyata break down after reading the headline I doubt she'll break down , but let's see what happens.
Thanks for the update Thanks 4 the comment😉!
And congratulation for finishing book 4 Thanx.
Will be waiting for book 5
Thanks and hugs Hugs to u 2 🤗

Thanks for the awesome comment 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cnibir

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this is for chapter 14... i skipped it accidentally sorry... No problem (glad u found it again though😆)
I thought the chapter was well written and had the right sort of emotions but i am afraid of uday's cold shoulder towards Manyata... Yep , his coldness is deadly🤢.
keep writing well and i apologize for missing it...

Chapter 15 and completion of thread 4
OMG Navina congratulations on finishing yet again another thread... Well done and you deserve every bit of the praise... Thanks so much 🤗
coming to the story, honestly i don't like the way uday is treating manyata but i am sure they will figure their differences out soon... Yep ... and will be together once more😳.

Well done again and looking forward to more...

Thanx 4 the lovely comment Nibir 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nash..

Hey Navina! Hi Nash😃.

First of all, I Am Really Sorry for not pressing the LIKE BUTTON on your previous update ( i know you must be saying "HOW DARE YOU") Actually , the truth is ... I NEVER NOTICED IT , and if u didn't mention it now ; I'd never have known😆. but then i remember doing it (i guess golmaal ho gaya ;-( ) . I understand ... it happens to me also. Please don't mind. No - of-course not😳.

Secondly, CONGRATULATIONS ON A NEW THREAD. Thank you 🤗 It proves how AMAZING WRITER YOU ARE.. Thanks (I feel my head swelling now😉).

Coming to the update.. I am very MAD at Uday now. Shame , poor Uday. Enough is Enough ( i know you will make him pay for it..still can't help). I'm not gonna make him pay for it😉. Overall, the update was emotional as well but i loved it. Awww😳!!!!

Hence, See you on your next thread Navi,Hopefully , it'll be the last thread😕. till then Take Care.U 2.

Thanks 4 the wonderful comment Nash 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanks for the lovely comment Gargi 🤗 .


Lolz..only your updates surprise me Navi..Don't worry..that look was supercute🤗..Will be waiting next week
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Hi navi, 😃 Hi Andy😛.

Once again first😳, I see that😆. I thought I would edit the comment on Saturday because, only then would I get time to edit it. thanks to a threatening scrap that someone' sent me, Who was it😡? am making time to edit the comment, so first only, I am saying sorry for a small comment which I can give in this time... Andy - your version of "small" is VERY WRONG😆!!!

First of all a huge congrats for completing book 4!!! Its not a simple thing to complete one book and you finished 4 books!!! I'm crazier than u thought , right😉?

Congratulations navi!!!!

Thanks Andy 🤗

It was good to read manyta using colourfu language again😉!It was fun writing it alsoEmbarrassed. Loved that stubborn, stobborner and stobbernest words of manyta!!!😆 Glad u enjoyed that😃. So now manyta is now going to fight to get uday back !!! good going girl!!👏 Hmmm , but will she win😕? I wont call uday "cruel" because he has his reasons. No one can be so forgiving as uday was , and even uday has days na!! Right! loved that scene with udita, where she tries to get on the table to grab uday's attention for disturbing her cartoons, Yep, she wanted to start a fight with her father😆. and I am happy that uday allowed manyta to be with them when udita was playing!!(if he did not allow I would have blasted him away😆)That's exactly why I allowed him to allow her😉!!!

Navi you may want to read both my and my twin Andrea's dialogue after this chapter😆 OK.

Me: if manyta thinks even now she can make things alright she is mistaken!!

A: you are wrong! What manyta is doing is correct! She is uday's wife and its only correct for her to fight for her husband.

Me: what about the part where she goes to uday's room and acts that she was sleepwalking, it was really cheating na Correct!

A: na, she did the right thing, uday is overacting!! But he never said a word.

Me: uday needs his time to calm down, let him enjoy his life na!

A: you mean , you would like uday if he cheats manyta?

Me: um! Its just for sometime na, leave it

A: I wont!! I will stop reading if uday cheats manyta! Hailla!

Me: don't you threaten the writer , and don't you say about uday Ya , just tell her Andy 🤣

A: He is acting like a chiLD! Grow up uday!

Me: I told you ,don't you dare call uday like that!

A: what if I do?

Me: I will kill you!!! I'm with you Andy ... finish her off😆!!!

And both of us starts fighting!! See navi, what happened you created a family fight!!! So, is Andrea DEAD or ALIVE😕?

Seriously, I really liked manyta in the update!( don't be surprised). The way she acted to patch up with uday was just superb!! Sleepwalking!! OMG! THAT was hilarious!🤣 Hope u enjoyed your laugh Andy.

Even I was suspicious that uday had something to do with stanley's death(though I am happy that he DIED) but later you made us know the truth!sorry uday I misunderstood you!Confused😭 Uday is sad that u suspected himCry!

He he he, uday put manyta down! That was funny!😆 The girl hurt her behind ... and u found it "FUNNY" 😲.

Now the part where they go for the 3 rd month death anniversary of virat was a bit sad, you know i really felt bad for the family. Hmmm , me 2. The update took a serious turn from the light nature at the beginning from this point. Now how could manyta think uday would forget about his son, she forgot, it does not mean uday would!!😭😭 He'd never forget😔.

The nigh they spent together in silence is confusing me!! Howcome😕? Why did uday do that? Why then did he leave? He had business to attend to😉. was there any truth about he being back to his play boy ways? How would I know? Na, I wont ever believe that. Now manyta would fight more to get uday back! looking forward to that!😃Tongue The fight will be childish😆.

After reading this comment you must be feeling that I am having some split personality problem(which you always say😆) ... and now I have proof of it😉!!! but this update has made me support both sides equally😆! all thanks to the writerAngry Told u na ... u can't take anyone's side above the other!

Once again sorry for the small comment!! U are kidding, I hope😕. But then you know the reason

Thanks for the pm(the one you which you send later😆)😃 And thanks for helping me with the scrapsEmbarrassed!

Love you❤️ Love u 2Embarrassed.

Ps: do start book 5 soon!! Prologue is ready , 2/3rds of chapter 1 is ready ... just waiting for my 7 more LIKEs😉!!! Cant wait for it!😃 Hope it lives up to your expectationsEmbarrassed.


Thanks for the amazing comment Andy 🤗 ... loved it stacksEmbarrassed!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar4eva55

Omg !Omg!Omg!!!

Oh my God - calm down Alisha.
Congrats on the conclusion of yet another book Navina! :D
Thank you 🤗
But,Book-4 is over :((
Book 4 was trs interesting!
From Manveer's survival till Viraj's death :( and their fight :).
Yep ... action -packed book😆.
Amazing chapters,with everything mysterious and enigmatic that leaves the reader boggled and enables him/her to think about what may happen next!
And I hope to continue in that light in the next book also😳.
Their constant quarelling was sad :'(
But the scene after Viraj's cremation, was cute :3
No intimacy,yet romantic and showed their passion :)
Aah , well said👏. U summed it up perfectly.
And seriously?? Uday back to being a playboy!? Kudos to you Navina!! :D
I want to tell you that Joaw has been amazing from the very beginning and book 4 broke all the records for Joaw. I'm flattered that u think so😳. K3G was simply amazing! Do continue! After K3G, Yep , will continue in a new thread.
according to me,you're the best FF,SS and OS writer on the DEK forum!!! WOW! Thanks so much for the compliment😳. (But I believe that there are others better than me)
P.s.- 1 month of bliss was awesome as well!! :D Oh yes - I forgot about that OS ... glad u enjoyed that also!
Love you! :* Love u too❤️.
It is said that - "The sky is the limit",but you've proved it wrong :)
Your writing is over the top <3 My dear - u have no idea what you're doing to me right now ; I'm seriously floating in the clouds now😆.
And do continue soon and keep up the good work! :D <3 Thank u 🤗 ... and I do hope you'll comment more regularly (U are just what my ego needs😉)
We love you! I love you all too😳.
And you're da superstar of writing!
Bye! Bye😃. Tc :* You too😳!!!



Thanks for this beautiful comment Alisha 🤗 ... I loved it😳!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ParusDivs

Tune to title se darra diya 😲 ...Kyun , maine kya kiya😕? Last chapter sunke shock ho gayi 😆 ... Ab tune mujhe shock diya😆!!! Anyways Awesome update Navi 👏 👍🏼 .. Thank you 🤗 . The Story is getting more interesting...Glad u think so😳! Manyata begging for uday's mercy .. The scene when ManVeer remembering their son Virat is really touching... 😭 Yep , totally emotionalCry. Waiting for more ... Awww😳!!! Plz continue soon dear!!!!!!! 🤗 As soon as my wants are met😈. And my hearty congrats for ur New thread.. 🥳 Thanks Dear 🤗 .

Thanx 4 the wonderful comment Divya 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Navi, according to ur promo Ranjana is a negetive character, is she really negetive or r u misleading us?

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