THE SECOND SHADOW#2, chap 39 pg 43 new!!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: andy.a

if she goes behind her word then, that would be my last update and last talking with her lol

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Awesome update Andy. Uday is pure-evil (in a cute kind of way😳). As I suspected , he paid the doctor to take HIS part. Then he paid off his staff , to keep their mouths shut😆.

Favourite part was when Uday had come out of the shower with a towel wrapped around his waist☺️! (I bet Manyata had some bad thoughts at that time ... AS DID I😳😉!!!!!!) Hawww ... what if the towel fell 😲😈?

Their supper-time SILENT CONVO was so sweet😳.

Uday pretending to have nightmares , just to get Manyata in bed with him was superb👏. I loved it in the promo ... and I loved it in the final update too!

Looking forward to the "VERY VERY VERY BAD PART" . Now that u mentioned it to me , I can't stop thinking about it😉.

U made an amazing start on thread 2 ... may u go from strength to strength😃!

Please continue soon ,

thanks 4 the PM😊.

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

hey andy the update was fab

i sumwere knew it that uday would have bribe docter

the towel scene was good

exicted for further updates

update soon

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

amazing update andy

loved it to the core 'beautifully written and cant wait to see more of uday and his ways to get manyata

as navi mentioned in her comment that a very very very bad part if coming up and she cant stop think about it so according to the way her brain works i know the part is awesome amazing and even i cant wait for it 😆

please please please update soon

how many likes do u need to update sasp

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Manveerangel
👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
1st ov all congrats for ur 2nd thread thanks so much😳
And 2nd andy jiji tomorrow is my Birthday
So u have 2 post it today as my advance BD gift 😆
Plzzz jiji
Love ya

thanks for the sweet comment dear

and a belated bday wishes to you😳

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: saakhi01
Nice update bt a very short one... Update next one soon...

thanks saakhi😃

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
awesome awesome awesome Andy!!! thanks mahi😳
awww kash mein manyata ki jaga hoti!!! what a sweet dream😛
Uday and uske attics!!
hawww doctor ko kharid Liya ???ya, he is very smart😳
awesome update soon will try to update
and once again congrats fr 2nd thread thanks so much

thanks mahi for this sweet comment😳

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Ashish.Addict

Awesome update andy thanks sanju😃
The jugalbandi of there thoughts was really hilarious
Uday is really very cunning and I am loving this side me too😳
And the dinner
Its was awesome thanks sanju😳
Candle light dinners truly intrigue me we had powercuts this summer, so every night had to eat under candle light, suely it rubbed on me
Loved this update
I know I am not commenting now-a-days on any of the updates
I am sorry I did the same with urs thats ok sanju, even i dont get much time to read all updates, life has become busy these days
But I read them all
thanx for the pm u send me every time welcome sanju
And yeah I loved the last part
I seriously want to see them sleeping cuddling with each other
Lol they are already cuddled
Thanx for the pm welcome

thanks for this sweet comment sanju

i really enjoyed reading it😳

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: cnibir
a very cute update! thanks for the PM Andy. Wish you luck for the next chappy. 😊

thanks dear,

bw waht is your name?

i always wanted to ask you 😃

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: nityatandon
Hey... Andy..hi nitya😃.
It was fantastic... thanks so much

I loved the way you potrayed Uday's emotions...😳

He is such an evil guy...

Lights off kar di...

Chillane laga...

And he made Manyata sleep with him...he is very smart, i tell you

And I loved the thoughts of Uday...

In between Manyata's explanation of his past...

Hatts off to you and your Uday...thanks nitya...

Update soon... will try to update soon

And thanx for the PM...welcome

thanks for this sweet comment nitya, i loved it😳

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