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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Awesome update Mona👏. I loved the father-daughter bit in the garden ... that was nicely written! Also , enjoyed Uday's emotional-blackmail over Unnati😆. Hope Manyata agrees to the date. The end part was utterly cute (with Manyata smiling on remembering Uday). All in all , a great update , do continue soon; Thanks 4 the PM😊. PS - Very sorry about commenting so late.

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Hey Mona di
How u? 😊
Amazing, superb update 👏
Loved it loads ⭐️
Sorry for the late reply
Loved the father daughter talk n chase, super cute
Love how Uday is kinda threatning his sister, hilarious
Aww, Uday n Manyata thought of each other before sleeping, is super cute
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃

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Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Wow gr8 update dear
do pm me nxt time n update soon

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

hey when will u update

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: capriya
Hai its awesome part...loved father - daughter chasing.pls continue soon.eagerly waiting for Manveer part..

Thank you so much
I am glad that you appreciated my work
Will update tomorrow

Edited by chocohollic - 12 years ago

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: pari_pooja
hey!
awesome update
manyata & giriraj's convo was nice
waiting for manveer's meeting
please do continue soon

Hey
Thank you so much
I am glad that my work is appreciated
I will update tomorrow

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: nishaya...
Hayeee! Uday is so adorable in your ss. The way self-talks about her and is desperate to date is just so sweet and Bichara Unnati,she has to pay for her deeds. Lol.

Loved the whole chappy Mona, you wrote that father-daughter scene also so cutely.

Do update on next weekend!

I am glad that you found him adorable
It was her fault after all
Thank you so much
Indeed I will update tomorrow

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: roopali15
hey mona this updat was just fab
i mean i luved the relation between father daughter relation
wow uday will take manyata for a date
manyata was smiling on the thought of uday
now waiting for sum romanace between manveer
update soon