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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

loved d chappy so much mona.
so manyata is back in devgarh.
awww poor uday.
everybody teased him so much.
but he loves manyatha.
you should condinue soon.

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@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

hey!
awesome update,
u have written it soo... beautifully
& last part haha... made me laugh
uday is so innocent
please do update next chappy soon
& thanks for the pm

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Hilarious chappy Mona!

Loved the description of Uday's condition.

Please do continue soon

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Awesome update... Hey pls add me to ur pm list...

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Hey... Mona...

The chappy was fantastic...

Thank god you updated...

Manyata is finally back to her home...

The family rebonding was really sweet...

Bechara Uday itna impatient ho raha hai...

Unnati joking with Uday was aso really cute...

The sweet bro- sis love...

Uday really loves Manyata a lot...

Pata nhi ab kya karega...

Ab toh sab ki shamat hogi...

I am eagerly waiting for them to fe each other..

Update soon...

And thanx for the PM...

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Awesome really loved it lol unnati is really naughty and uday actually believed her and thought manyata would look just like how unnati described... Wonder what uday is gone do now since he knows how his princess looks but is angry with him please update soon

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

hey mona the udate was fab

specially the unnatis prank was wonderfull

how sweet of uday when he came to know that manyata is ugly

but still he said that he luv her

waiting for manveer meeting

waiting for udays reaction

update soon

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: huma12.
Fantastic mona

thank you so much

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
hehehehe the last part was cute!!
poor Uday so innocent to be fooled when considered with manyata!!
awe the imagination of Uday blushing!.
young charming prince
itself makes the butterflies dance in my stomach!!

indeed he was fooled and now manyata is super mad at him
yes i always wanted a scene as such in dek
maybe they showed but i missed as i was restricted to watch tv in hostel
same here