ManVeer SS ||Crossroads||NOTE Pg14 - Page 6

Originally posted by: serat

awesome update woww

but i love it flashback

i think uday use vahan bulakar

uska mazaq udayga

i think

but i can't wait for the next chapp

nd

thxx for the update

it's awesome

plzzz

updatee

nexttt

chappp

sooon

plzzz

plzzz

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great update! Flashback was really interesting. Do continue soon😊.

Originally posted by: JustLikeMe1

Thanks! Don't you really think Uday will just let her go by mocking her?😉 I m working on the next chapter will be up soon :)

Originally posted by: cnibir

I read your SS in one go... it is really a fresh concept... I like it for its modern nature and a upbeat story line.

You are doing a great job in writing this SS and i can't wait to read more. Please if it is not a bother, PM me i would love to continue reading this as it is not worth missing what happens next in the story.

Continue soon and once again a very good job!!!

Originally posted by: serat

i really dont know

but

i think

he do

cuz he is uday😊

ab to sirf update ki wait

can't wait for the next chap

seriously

jaldi se update de daina😊

Originally posted by: pia.raha

o my goodness,u updatedd!!!!!! thaaank uuu!!!!!!!! i reallyy luvv diss ss!!!!! it was awesomee!!!!!!! mnyata revenge was hilariouss!!!!!! aww,waitng to see wat has heppned in the past,and did she really wear dta dress,hmm udya didnt left ehr a choice also,bt lets see wat heppens thenn!!!!!! doo cntinue soon plzz!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Hey I read all the five parts if your story and I'm in love with it already aashi is a really lovely friend to have wonder what uday actually did in the past... So uday found out it was manyata who put the panty in his pant really can't wait for the next part please update soon and if possible can u add me to your pm list please