~The Prom night~ A Manveer OS :)

pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

it was veryy sweeett!!!!!!! uuff akash to hai hi living jokee!!!!!!! hayee manveer at teh end was soo lovelyy,their dance and proposal lovely!!!!!😊😊

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awww , that was so cute Vibha😳! Akash was NOT A NERD ... he was a geek 🤓🤣!!!!! Gosh , I nearly fell off my bed reading your descriptions of him ... striped shirt with checked pants 😲😆! Hilarious Vibha! Manveer scene was sweet and romantic. Uday was kinda a shy guy , in that - he never formally asked Manyata out , but just pitched up at her door😳. Lucky he bucked up now and asked her for that prom-date ... a year early😉. Loved the OS ... It was awesome👏. Thanks for the PM😊.

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow
after a long time...
an awesome os...
thanks fr that deary...
it was really very cute...
manveer was really very sweet...
awesomely written vibha

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

A very enjoyable OS Vibha...loved it...Akash is so funny...the dance that he did cracked me up🤣...

The way UV came to Manyata;s home was really so cute but yes that Akash had to spoil it😡

The last scene of Manveer was very cute...

Very nice Vibha..write more OS of these kinds next time😉

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sanah12

@sanah12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

It was an awesome os!👏

Loved it to the core!

Beautifully written.

It was a cute, sweet and fabulous os!😊

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panchaali

@panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Vibha this tooo good and tooo cute sis!!!

Loved every lines from this os

But this is the best

I in her place would have refused a date with Brad Pitt, if Udayveer had asked me.

Awwwn That is called true love ❤️

Carry on your Good work

Thankz for the pm 😊

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey.. It was fabulous..

Poor Manyata had to fgo to the prom with that majnu..

Ohh.. I can imagine Majnu's chiken dance...

U r an amazing writter...

Thanx for the pm...

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Shahista

@Shahi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

👏Simply beautiful and enthralling vibha.

Love the humour, simplicity and over all sweetness

Of the story... great job.

... and the cherry on top was akash the nerd... with checked pants...BRILLIANT...lol😆👏

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Vibha Bangalore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: annabh
unres
it was an awesome os
firstly million thanks
for akash the nerd
thank you he got what he deserved
awn so cute uday had come to ask her for prom
if i was in manyata shoes i would cancel the date
the moment i saw akash in the dance floor
the last part was super cute
uday expressed his feeling so easily
loved when he said he would snatch her from akash
the ending was too good
it was perfect
thank for the pm