Mohabbat Ki Dastaan- saga ch 5 page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue : page 8 -dawn of a new love saga😃
chapter 2 : pg 16
Chapter 3: pg 22
Chapter 4: pg 23
Lol converted to FF
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She was there getting herself ready for the board meeting... Maharani Manyata Udayveer Singh...


Wearing a white shirt and grey Skirt..She looked so beautiful...Her skin as soft and tender like a rose petal...At a glance no one will say that the reputed Maharani of Jaigarh is mother of two kids.. Her husband being the Maharaj of Jaigarh and a man with so lot of responsibilities always made it a point to be by his wife's side in all ways..and with the word by side he do mean it😉



While Trying to tie the hair up..the shirt moved up a bit exposing her waist and the very next moment what she felt was a shrill pain at her navel...His laser teeth penetrated her soft skin giving her immense pain...


Ahhh she gasped in pain..A small victory smile crept his lips as his tongue ran to soothe her pain...She closed her eyes in pleasure but then all of a sudden it was all over...


Opening her eyes in dislike she looked around only to see him buttoning his shirt...


She couldn't believe her eyes and moved up to confront him...Maharaj what was that..she asked in a straight tone..


What Maharani he asked with a cool smirk...


What were u doing in front of the mirror..

What I did nothing ..Infact I was here all the time..wait wait do u had a day dream or something he chuckled...


Me and day dream...she asked with irked tone..(.but was it...she herself questioned inside).. She raised her shirt to give a look and to her wonder she was absolutely ri8..His teeth mark was still so fresh over there in round..


Maharaj Udayveer Singh how dare u say lie to me..See its ur teeth and yes I was ri8 u were soothing my pain a while ago and then all of a sudden came here to dress up..You bull...


Ohho Maharani Manyata...don't behave like a princess.. (running his hands up to cover her neck from a side he continued)Afterall you are mother of 2 kids..and that too kids of Maharaj Udayveer Singh..Being desperate on these things doesn't look nice on you..So now hurry up for conference.. he announced hiding his laughter.


She gave that angry look and threw his hands away...


What me n desperate..Maharaj for your kind information I was getting myself ready that u came up to me with ur so called vampire teeth to suck my skin...


Awww Princess how much do u lie...U were there trying to seduce me with ur milky skin and when I became a prey u r complaining as though I did a crime... he replied making a innocent face...


Uday u are a lier... she revolted in anger...


Me and lier...am I aati...he called off aati who was passing the room...

Now why r u bringing my son in between Maharaj..


Excuse me Maharani but let me remind u he is equally mine afterall iam his creator,...He said with a cheesy smile irking her more..Aati who was by the time in Uday's arms..questioned..what happened dad?


Aati now see ur mamma is saying that iam a lier...Now u say am i...is ur father a lier and that too to ur mom?


Aati smiled and replied with a wink..never Maharani Manyata UdayVeer Singh..My dad is always loyal to my mom...


Ahhh Uday u r asking this to our 5 yr old son and Aati u r designating ur mom by name..Urghh both dad n son are the same..liers...iam leaving u lier people...


be there on time..she commanded from behind

What..Princess wait iam coming..He shouted but she was fast and moved out quickly...He brought up a deep sigh hearing the sound of car rushing out..Ohho Princess its so easy to poke u yaar...Ahhh don't worry will take u 2ni8...He said with a naughty grin to her photo...


Dad can I come with u...iam bored at home..even mristi and Raj is not here...so what shall I do all alone dad..please take me with you..


Oh my son thats why I asked u to leave with others for Devgarh..But u were stubborn to be with ur dad-mom and see u r getting bored..Now don't worry we are too leaving today evening..so u can pack ur bags today ...also take care of ur choti..She needs some1 to look after her and iam sure none can look her as good as her dada


Yes dad iam my angel's sweet brother...i'll look after her all nicely..

He kissed him and soon left for office

Coming up to the conference room he saw her sitting at the extreme end..nearly opposite to his near to Vijendra Singh...But he is also her husband who knows very well to control her..


Smriti why don't u sit here near to me he asked the young share holder who just entered the hall and was searching for a place to sit as all other chairs was occupied.


Smriti for a moment looked at Manyata who paid no attention to all this..

Smriti are u planning to stay there...he asked again and the very next moment she was near him.


Soon the meeting started with Vijay's introduction speech..As u all know this is a special meeting to sum up the growth of JD group of companies..Soon after the marriage of Yuvraj Udaybeer Singh and Yuvrani Manyata Kumari Jaigarh and Devgarh group of companies merged up to form the present JDC..And now we r going to have our 5th anniversary of the same at the end of this month.So along with annual growth we need to asses the overall growth in past 5 yrs...


Vijay went on with his directions while Manyata just stared at a file not giving attention to anything around.. Uday did noticed it but was helpless


The meeting went on nicely but for a change Manyata was silent that day...


Eventhough she excused quoting an headache it was indeed the closeness of Uday n smriti..From day 1 she din't like smriti and her attitude towards Uday..and even discussed the same with Uday but he always ignored giving it a silly thought ..and today just to provoke her, Uday made that girl sit near him and that too at her seat...This was not at all getting down Manyata's throat...She was waiting for the meeting to get over and once that word was out..She collected her file and moved out ignoring Uday and Smriti who were then on a discussion..


He looked at her leaving and he knew that he had made his path tougher...


K Ms Verma we will discuss about this later as I need to be with my Princess now...


Smriti give a disappointed look and replied in a casual tone..Uday u can call me Smriti as u called b4...


Ahhh so sry but that was by mistake but iam comfortable with Ms Verma ..hunh actually none calls me Uday otherthan my dear n near..All my business partners calls me either Mr Singh or UV and if u don't mind I would like to be called either of this by you...


Without waiting for reply from Smriti he moved out..


Where's Maharani he asked his pa who was just outside his cabin..

Sir she is inside..


Ok aman make sure we r not disturbed by any ...he ordered and entered to cool down his super mad princess


There she was sitting in her desk going through a file.. She did sensed his presence but ignored and went on with the work until he came and stood by her side closing up the file..

Princess I think u have an headache so don't strain much..


Its k Uday iam fine so u can go n resume ur work...she stated opening up the file


No princess please I want u to take rest and u can do this later on he again closed the file irking her..


Uday pls leave me alone ..iam not a small kid that u run behind me..she said in anger poking him..


The very next moment she was pinned to the wall ..His eyes were fireballs in a split of moment...


Whats that Princess when I say something you will have to hear it what so ever...And don't try to go past my orders..You need rest and so just stop playing ...


She stared at him for a while and soon her eyes was filled..She looked at her hand which was still tightly pinned that he realised of hurting her all this time.. her hands was all red by the time and he released her soon..


She tried to move away but then he was more faster this time and took her in arms to the private room...


She tried to protest but then his lips controlled her quite well and she once again became his loyal wife...


He placed her softly at bed and himself got near her...Keeping her close to his chest he asked calmly...what was that Princess... why are u so childish today...My love , my soulmate, mother of my 2 kids is behaving like a typical girl friend today...What happened love..Don't u know my heart beats for only one lady in this world which is then you..


And only me she completed...


Give me a kiss he ordered...politely yet authoritatively.


Now whose speaking My husband ya Maharaj...


He leaned and whispered at her ears Your boyfriend Uday.

B4 she could realize she was again claimed...


Uday iam missing DS she finally whispered.. Tomorrow is her 5th death anniversary and we are going to inaugurate a memorial hospital on her name at Devgarh ..But still I can't believe she is no more..How could she leave us that easily...I miss her ..i miss her...she completed with teary eyes tightening her hold on him.


He broke her hug and cupped her face...I know it princess even I miss her a lot... But thenshe is with us, with our every success with our every happiness. Close to us... I had promised her to become the strongest Maharaj and iam proving it every day with you by my side...Manyata aaj main aapko woh seek deti hoon jo DS ne apne aakiri waqt hume di thi...har aasu ko thakat banana seeko; har galti ko seek banana seeko; har khushi ko yaadein banana seeko ; aur har gham ko bhoolna seeko...


I have followed that till date and now I wish the same with u...


Mmm stupid u should have told this b4 see I was always back in that day...not realising how to forget it..


Mmm leave it princess ..I think we should leave now or else we would be late..Aati and Anushka will be waiting for us..


Back at lift Manyata was silent...Princess..he whispered...

Mmm


Please learn something..

What..

Ahhh actually Smriti 's perfume is so pleasant welcoming ...and ...


B4 he could completed her scarf tightened his neck...and stinking for u...she completed with a victory smile...and locked his lips with hers forgetting the world around...


In between the kiss he spoke..Princess can we go for a third child please...


The very next moment he was pushed away by a irritated manyata...but he just grinned and pulled her by waist..Princess I always get what I want and u r the very beginning of all my wants... His teeth again pierced her neck and she stood helpless




Hope u enjoyed it

thank you😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wah wah wah👏👏
i loved loved loved it😃
i liked how they still behave like boyfriend girlfriend even after so many years of marriage😊
not losing themselves in the grind of marriage and stuff😳
so cute their little boy was😛
it was awesome sisu⭐️
im sure Annesha will love it😃

(for the first time, me first to comment yay😉)
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was simply
jakass bindass awesome😃
ahhh it was super romantic 😊
ahh naughty uv teasing her and 😉
the first scene was super romantic😳
loved as uv bought his little son👏
to clarify that he was not a liar😲
awnn missing those golden updates of mkd😭
it was like i read the whole mkd book 2😊
in one os😆
seriously this was the best story i ever read😊
it had everything
manveer cute romance😳
there parential thing😆
and even there duty towards there riasaat😊
really felt bad for ds😕
awnn how badly i wish she was alive😭
but it is ok as the story demanded for that
i am happy and comtemped and😆
it was super cute when uday asked her for a third baby😳
awn he is so adorable⭐️
and so cute
awnn the private room scene made me blush😳
guess so this is my next addiction
omg how will i ever get away from mkd addiction
it was so good
some where in smiti i saw the reflection of liza😡
awn he never leaves a chance to provoke his naive princess😉
and calling her despo 😃
i mean blamming her for the thing he did 😛
was soo romanitc
rhank you so much jiji😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
thank you😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
i truely have no words to thank
it was sooo good

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os...i read all chapters of mkd...i loved that ff...manveer were too romantic...😳
Edited by prernakhandelwa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can u tel me where iz mkd ff i havnt read it can u giv me the link of mkd book plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was Awesome!
Loved it to the core!
Manveer are really an adorable couple.
Do write more os.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maine MKD poora ka poora padha hai😳...itna bhi aalsi nahi hoon jitne aap kehti hai
Great OS mom👍🏼
This part was needed and thanks to Anni we got it.
Glad that Udayveer and Manyata are still romantic with each other.
Udayveer and Smriti part was hilarious. Jealous Manyata was funny.
Manveer part were fab .😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

maine MKD poora ka poora padha hai😳...itna bhi aalsi nahi hoon jitne aap kehti hai
Great OS mom👍🏼
This part was needed and thanks to Anni we got it.
Glad that Udayveer and Manyata are still romantic with each other.
Udayveer and Smriti part was hilarious. Jealous Manyata was funny.
Manveer part were fab .😃

aww my lazy baccha did it...mmm...proud of u🤗..
lolz really u should have told me then dear...
thanks a lot..glad that u enjoyed it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hai snow...

os was very cute and funny.

i have read ur mohabat ki dastan.
it was awesome.

thanks for anni to prompt u to write dis os.

manveer were bindaaass..
uday so adorable.jealous manyata
was so cute and funny.

well done snow.keep it up 👍🏼

danx for such a cute os

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