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BE MINE

The first day of school a kid of three years entering all scared and shaving with fear holding his father hands with his tiny figure ,looking around all scared and afraid of new thing as his new chota bheem water bottle shaking up and down in his chest with every step heart pounds more and more but this was definitely not uday ,well his first day in school was a stud waking with his father with metal chains hanging on his neck and a killer smirk he looked like a small cotton boy as his chubby check bolled up and down and one of his hand catching his pants tightly so that his pants do not slip down his beautiful rounded belly he entered the class happily dancing in his own tune and the first thing he saw was her , she was sitting in middle of the class sitting all scared as tears drop were flowing on her text book something more than cartoon attracted the little uday ,that girl her fair complextion ,her pink check and her wide eyes were so new and uday 's eyes were hooked on her as without notice the teacher dragged him in middle of the class pulling his left check the teacher asked

TEACHER;so bacha what is your name?

But he was too indulge in her he pointed straight towards her direction and asked looking towards the teacher

UDAY:ma 'am why iz shez clying [ why is she crying]

TEACHER:first you introduce yourself

UDAY:no first you say why is she crying?

Now the teacher was irritated she raised her voice a bit and said

TEACHER:first you tell your name

The little cutie looked up at the teacher with tears sweeling up in his eyes ,the teacher was aware of his next action how badly she regretted speaking harshly with her but there was no way to control his tears as he outburst screaming and crying throwing his hands up in the air and said

UDAY:ahh miss is scholding me now she will hit us awnn mumma ,papapa , chotti help miss will hit me

The teacher did try to pacify him but his tears seem no end and a similar fear of getting beaten by the teacher crept in every body mind as all children broke into tears and the teacher herself felt like crying too ,the class was called off and all the students were send back to home , as when her parents came he saw her smiling and playing in her father arms while he was taken by his father as he went his mother broke into a hug thinking that her son had missed her little did she know that this devil planned all these for her he could not make her smile so he made every body cry as whole time he played with his baby sister narrating the whole tale , the very evening an old family friend came and to his surprise it was the girl she was the daughter of his father best friend her name was manyata as for the first time she extended her hands for friendship and those ahnds never separated ,time passed by ,new years began studies were more pressured but the only thing that ddi not change was manveer friendship they spend almost whole of the day together and even a moment without each other could not be tolerated by them ,there parents noticing the growing friendship assumed it to be love and it was uday loved manyata ,he loved her madly and he was over possessive about her but was still unaware of her feeling finally the time of the year came it was the prom party an ending to school life and beginning of college life , manveer had promised to complete there college together in states as uday asked her for prom that day , he decided to confess his feelings to her he was dressed handsomely in a tuxedo he gave his last look in the mirrow as his chotti and mom back hugged him and asked

UNNATI:awn finally dada will propose to bhabhi I am so excited

MOM:awn my small bacha has grown so big ok uday come now drink the milk

He looked at his mom it was true his mom could never think him to be a complete grown teen for her he was the small chubby uday but now he was hot with his abs and muscle only if his mother understood ,he was irritated as he asked her

UDAY:mummy I do not want milk

MOM:bacha there is born vita

UDAY:no mom still I do not want it

MOM:ok I will make your dad drink it now go you are getting late

He hugged them and headed out with his car he drove towards manyata house and was warmly welcomed by her parents

as he headed inside there she was making her way down the huge staircase in a beautiful full length red grown ,she looked so amazing her hair was tied in an elegant bun while a sweet smile was plastered to her beautiful face which turned beetroot at the very side of uday ,she came down while uday stood there with his mouth wide open ,both her parents chuckled at the love sicken boy as manuata waved her hands to bring him back to his sence as she asked him in a sweet voice

MANYATA:oii hero where are you lost lets go we are getting late

UDAY;umm ya yes we need to go yes right

MANYATA:uday you are fine no I think you need to take rest lest not go to prom

UDAY:nope I am fine actually better than ever lets go fast

Saying this he grabbed her hands and dragged her to his car ,she was taken back by his sudden speed in things as she passed him a smile and the drive started ,within no time they reached there destination it was beautiful place a gate of flowers with red carpet was there to welcome all the couple which let to an open area disco decorated with latern and flowers ,the air smelled so good as the moon added to the glory of the night , love could be felt in the air as uday locked his hands in hers and let her inside the area they greeted there friends chated for a while as after that every body let to the dance floor ,finally the moment came , the magical moment for which uday ahd waited over an decade or lets say the very first day of school as his hands touched her soft curvy waist and her hands were perfectly settled on his shoulder the music filled in the place as manveer without missing a beat started to dance

Na jaane kab yeh hua
Na kisi ko khabar
Na khud ko pata
Khoye khoye rehte
Hum yahan hai
Silsilo ka silsila hai
Hua shuru abb jo nikle bhi jaan
Abb se humraahi chahton ke
Yeh jaise phela nasha.
Woh pheli nazar phela gumaar
Yun lage mohabbat hi jahan hai
Doston ki dosti yaaron ki yaari kam lagne lagi
Behke hai hum behka yeh sama hai

Kaise samjhaau tumjhe
Mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh
o O OO O O
Aankhon mein aitbaar hai yeh
O Ooo oo O
Mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh
o O OO O O
Aankhon mein aitbaar hai yeh
O Ooo oo O

Hawa bhi mili thi humein
Jhokon mein pooch rahi thi
Pyaar yeh agar nahi to phir kya hai

Aye aasmaan tu bhi aajkal saang chalta hai
Saaath leke chanda taare ..

Kaise samjhaau tumjhe
Mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh
o O OO O O
Aankhon mein aitbaar hai yeh
O Ooo oo O
Mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh
o O OO O O
Aankhon mein aitbaar hai yeh
O Ooo oo O
Mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh
o O OO O O
Aankhon mein aitbaar hai yeh
O Ooo oo O

There were the main attraction of the whole place there sizzling chemistry made the whole hall silence as if time had paused for them and they were to indulge in each other to notice anyone or anything around them both eyes glued to each other and both lost in each other but the showers of claps bought them back to reality as she felt the discomfort of being the main attraction and he felt it and unwillingly separated himself as they were crowded by there friends all hooting and teasing both face turned red out of embrasement as to cool the situation uday excused himself to get her a drink he needed to cool his nerve before telling her his feeling but poor he , his body shivered like a tiny flower in harsh winter winds he could get of no way of proposal he was making his way back to her as his eyes turned redden at the very sight ,there he was his biggest enemy akash with her he headed his steps towards her and poor she akash held her hands harshly and said in a drunken state

AKASH:o come na manyata we can dance together

MANYATA;akash leave her hands please

She said all helplessly and with tears swelling up in her eyes

AKASH:why baby are you afraid of me huh

Suddenly he felt a strong grip on his hands he turned to see there he was his face reflected his anger ,as uday gritted his teeth and said

UDAY:you didn't get her she said you to leave her

AKASH:who the hell

Uday had enough there his hands ran across akash 's face the punch was really hard as akash fell on the ground uncouncious ,manyata was shocked at his sudden anger and the very next moment she found herself being dragged to his car but she pulled her hands apart and at him as she screamed

MANYATA:what the hell why did you hit him

Uday twisted her with his hands and pinned her to the door of his car as his muscular arms holded her soft waist and his eyes piercing into her and he said with so much of pain and love

UDAY:because I do not like anybody misbehaving with my girl

Saying this he caught the back of her hair and pulled her towards himself and his lips were reducing the distance between her as his hard manly lips touched her ,exploring her mouth chewing and biting her lower lips making her mour in his mouth and leaving her finally breathless as he looked at her and saw her eyes flooded with tear and He crushed himself the very next moment for uttering those words as he loosen his grip and looked away ,she stood there immobile and he understood her answer there was a lone tear in his eyes as she asked in a slow voice

MANYATA:what did you say?

UDAY: sorry I just said what was in my heart and I know you do not want the same neither will I force you, I know you will break our friendship and I really cannot blame you I am sorry

He could no longer continue as she locked his lips with hers at first eh was taken back and did not react but slowly the it turned into a passionate kiss as they tore off running out of breath she looked at him and said sternly

MANYATA:I love you

He could not believe his ear and try to hug her but a tight slap was across his face he looked at her as she had tears in her eyes and as he asked

UDAY:what was this for?

MANYATA:stupid cound nt you just come and ask me why was I crying instead of bringing the whole class into tears

He recalled the first day of school as he pulled her for a warm bear hug and she hugged him back resting her head on his chest as he asked with a smirk

UDAY;so knew that I love you

MANYATA:nope

UDAY:then

MANYATA: I knew that I loved you and no matter what you have to be mine

As he looked towards her and there lips met once more and the kiss remained young for there entire life

The end

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jb bhi update kre do pm me😉
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Wow sucha romantic cute simple love story...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Wow he made the whole class cry for her..shooo cute..😳
and i loved his words "ahh miss is scholding me now she will hit us awnn mumma ,papapa , chotti help miss will hit me"
Such a funny cute intelligent boy😆...

Now u gain made akash chachu a villain...Lolz he was a bridge in that kiss of manveer..pehli baar uss manhos ki wajah se kuch kuch hua manveer ke beech...

And the way M said about him asking her instead of making whole class cry was something so cute to hear..She remembered that incident all these years n kept it deep inside while being in friendship with him...wow...
a divine pure love story..👏

Thanks anni 4 that..😊
love u🤗
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Great until now...
Update soon.

EDITED:

Great OS Anni👍🏼
Manveer scenes in their childhood were cute.😊
His mom foring him to drink bourn vita was funny.😆😆
Manveer in the prom were fab but Akash the villain had to do sth to mess things up.
But it lead to Manveer kiss...so I'm OK with it😳😆
Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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OS WAS CHOOO CHOOO CUTE ANNI.

AND CHOTA UDAY.CHO ADORABLE.
LOVED HIS ANTICS CHOOO MUCH.

AWWW HE MADE D WHOLE CLASS CRY
FOR MANTATHA.CHWEEETU.

UDAY DISHOOM DISHOOM AKASH
FOR MISBEHAVING WID MANYATA.LOVED IT.MY FAV SCENE.

ENDING WAS LOVELY.WID A SWEET
MANVEER KISS.PICTURE PERFECT.

LOVED DIS OS CHOOO MUCH
ANNNI.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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great is less fr this update...awesome...
loved it loads deary...
especially the last part...
Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: snowdream

Wow sucha romantic cute simple love story...☺️
awn thank you 😃


Wow he made the whole class cry for her..shooo cute..😳
and i loved his words "ahh miss is scholding me now she will hit us awnn mumma ,papapa , chotti help miss will hit me"
Such a funny cute intelligent boy😆...
hehe just like me😉

Now u gain made akash chachu a villain...Lolz he was a bridge in that kiss of manveer..pehli baar uss manhos ki wajah se kuch kuch hua manveer ke beech...yes so thaks to him btw dnt forget the knock out 🤢

And the way M said about him asking her instead of making whole class cry was something so cute to hear..She remembered that incident all these years n kept it deep inside while being in friendship with him...wow...
a divine pure love story..👏
thank you😊

Thanks anni 4 that..😊
love u🤗love you too😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...anju...

OS WAS CHOOO CHOOO CUTE ANNI.
thank you
AND CHOTA UDAY.CHO ADORABLE.
LOVED HIS ANTICS CHOOO MUCH.
so did i

AWWW HE MADE D WHOLE CLASS CRY
FOR MANTATHA.CHWEEETU.
yup just like me
UDAY DISHOOM DISHOOM AKASH
FOR MISBEHAVING WID MANYATA.LOVED IT.MY FAV SCENE.
aha glad that you liked it

ENDING WAS LOVELY.WID A SWEET
MANVEER KISS.PICTURE PERFECT.
thank you

LOVED DIS OS CHOOO MUCH
ANNNI.


i am glad that you liked it
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comment edited page 1
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Hey... it was really nice...
But I am a little confused,...
Is this an os or a full fledged story...

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