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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED IT LOADS.

I HATE JAINANDINI & AKASH.

FELT BAD FOR AKASH WAT HAPPENED AT CHILDHOOD.

BUT IT WAS NOT UDAYS FAULT.

POOR UDAY.FELT BAD FOR HIM.

CONTINUE SOON.DANXS FOR PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great job anni nice writting
dear sorry 4 late really sorry 4 late
pls forgive me na...😭😭
hayee u great writter i give liked dear
u r the awsome writter
manveer amazing keep writting
n thank you 4 the regular pm
i realy loved ur writting style
dear loved ur ff's
u r the great new idea's writter
keep writting n sath
mai take care urself first
health is first ok
take medi always navi
we love you
bye
hugs
take care
cyaa
update soon
me waiting eagerly 4 next update

PS-pls pdate ur other works

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

great job anni nice writting
thank you so much
dear sorry 4 late really sorry 4 late
it is ok dear
pls forgive me na...😭😭
you are forgiven
hayee u great writter i give liked dear

thank you so much
u r the awsome writter

thank you so much
manveer amazing keep writting
n thank you 4 the regular pm


i realy loved ur writting style

thank you so much
dear loved ur ff's
u r the great new idea's writter
keep writting n sath
mai take care urself first
health is first ok
take medi always navi
we love you
bye
hugs
take care
cyaa
update soon
me waiting eagerly 4 next update

PS-pls pdate ur other works

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey anni luved hw manyata saved uday
but feel like killing that akash
the past was quite shock one
it mean uday and akash r step brothers
nw that aksh is making him suffer
by not getting job any were
i hope romance bloom between manveer
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... Aneesha...
First of all I am sorry for the late reply...
The updat was amazing...
But woh policewale...
Itna mara Uday ko...
Aur woh Aakash or Jai...
Ek request hai...
Jab unka is story mein khoon karogi na...
Toh pls mujhe bula lena...
Bcos I will be more than happy to kill them...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM..

PS: sorry for replying late... actually you know na... Firstly accident phir viral... and yes this time its a pucca wala promise thaat you will get your update on Sunday...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Annesha di, how are u?
Sorry for the late reply, internet problems
Omg, wow, Uday and akash are step-brothers
But Akash can't blame Uday for whatever happened, because it wasn't his fault, it was their father's fault
Felt so bad for Uday, shame, they tortued him
Felt bad for Manyata as well, can't imagine what she's going through
Wonder what's akash's new plan
Jai is like an irrating puppet that doesn't know how to rule her own life
Thanks for the pm
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

16 above

chapter 10

It had been raining since past one week , it had been a horrible weather , the roads were all flooded and the scenario was damped and ugly . the law of nature thundered and roared , it had been for the very first time the city was experiencing a premature rain , as she sat by the side of her window , and wandered looking down at the streets watching the little girls and boys play in the rain , her mind rain to the time when she too was carefree and danced to the joyful tune of the rain , but now things were different she was a MARRIED WOMAN and to her , soberness and character must be the first priority as it upholds her husband prestige , her husband , her uday a man she summits her heart , it had been a week she had not utter a word about the case she just prayed to god that he gets a job again , but maybe god had other prayers to hear so every evening he came dejected and sorrowful her talks did cheer him , but only to a certain limit late at nights she would watch the lights of his room still switched on but today was a dark night , the thunder and lightning had been scaring her as she tiptoed back to her bed and tugged herself into her blanket but then the light from his room pierced into her eyes and she decided to peep inside his room as watching him in pain pierced her heart this was the strength of her love for uday which she had realized the day she went to police station along him , but did not find an appropriate way to express it but maybe god was giving her a chance tonight . as she slipped inside she watched him , scattered and all broken , with a glass of half unfinished whiskey as he sat with his eyes redden with tears , he had been crying , at the sight of her he got up , he was not so drunk that he would strumble down , he composed himself and looked down ashamed of his behavior as he mumbled softly

UDAY:I am sorry 'I ..

She could take it no longer she wrapped her arms around him , as he burst into tears and said

UDAY:I am so helpless manyata , I am so useless non of the company want to keep me for job I don't even know how are we going to manage it is better if you leave a person like me , you deserve someone much better and moreover we are not attached nothing happened between us any boy will be willing to marry you please manyata do not spoil your life

His words struck her like arrow but she was aware only she could compose him by her love tonight as she looked into his eyes and said

MANYATA:I do not want any other man in my life except you '.uday I cannot leave you even when you will tell me as I am attached to you through soul my heart is with you '.i love you uday


He looked into her , he could not believe his ears it was too good to be truth , he was sure about the fact it was illusion but did she really say those words , but manyata payes no heeds to his confusion as she stood on her toes and finally her lips captured his , she just knew that this was the right time and the right thing to do , her tongue pleaded to enter his mouth but he remained stiff and he was not kissing her back , it irked her to such an extend that she left his lips and looked into him with her eyes blinded with tears as she spoke in a high pitch

MANYATA:why uday ? why are you doing this to me? Why are you not kissing me back?

As she saw a smirk placed on his face as he said her

MANYATA:coz this was not the right way princess

She took a longer time to react as his hands travelled back of her hair pulling her face closer to his as his lips captured her , her hands travelled to the back of his neck as there tongue went battling each other , the saliva was driving him insane as he drew his attention towards her upper lips , bitting and chewing on it , causing it to bleed as he smoothed the area with his tongue those bites causes her to mourn in his mouth with was suppressed perfectly with his tongue , she ran out of breath , but his lust was not yet fulfilled as he did not leave her , now she started to struggle in his embrace , he could feel her running out of breath and finally he left her swollen bleeding lips as he looked into her eyes , but she could not meet his eyes , his gaze was burning her up , she was sweating and how much she wished that she could just run away and hide herself from him , her cheek was red and she flushed and managed to utter some words

MANYATA: good night uday I think we should sleep goodnight

She turned to leave but the very next moment found herself pinned to the wall as she stared down at the floor , her two hands were tightly in his grip above her head and with another hand he went caressing her cheek giving special attention to her lips , as his thumps brushed against the corner of her lips she turned her face to the other direction hiding her face from him , as he whispered huskily into her ears

UDAY:that is exactly what I am doing wifey '.i am going to sleep tonight WITH YOU

Within a fraction of second she felt a shrill pain on her ear lobes , he pierced his teeth into her soft skin as the very next moment it turned all red , she gave a small cry as he smoothed the area with his tongue , she had summated her body to him tonight , she would not fight just be his wife today , as he loosened the grip on her hands and he took her into his arms as she buried her face in his chest , he placed her softly on the bed as he kept his hands on the either side of the bed and not weighing any pressure on her body not breaking the eye contact, she could not avoid the gaze and he drew his mouth closer to her neck , his breath was falling on her bare neck while being so close to him made her all nervous her heart skipped beats as his lips softly bushed against her soft skin ,his tongue travelled all the way down to her neck as she faced towards the half open window , it had been raining more furiously now , she could slowly feel his weight on her as he left soft pecks on her neck , but suddenly she felt a shrill pain in her neck as he penetrated his teeth into her soft skin she took hold of the bed sheet and crushed it with her fist , as he continued to place his fierce love bites all over her neck , she was helpless all she could do was mourn in a pleasurable pain , he indeed tried to be soft on her , but her skin was so tempting to him , that he could not help but place his teeth mark all over her neck

After being contempt and satisfied by his work he unpinned her sari as he took hold of her pallu with his teeth and softly pulled it down her shoulders leaving the pallu hanging beneath in the floor , her blouse did a poor job , as her cleavage was clearly visible to him , she turned towards him as he locked her eyes through his eyes , she was so drown in his eyes that she failed to feel his touch as he unpinned her blouse it was only when his lips brushed against her beauty bone did she realize his next steps , she helped him as she raised her body a little higher while he unpinned her bra and took off both her blouse and bra of her body and threw it crumbled down on the floor , the hungry animal in him was awoken by her beauty , the most beautiful creature laid infront of his eyes , her skin was milky white while her assets was perfectly settled in his hands , he placed his lips and brushed it against her breaths at first it was a smoothing but as he was tempted away he took her one breast in hands and squeezed it , while he played hard bites on the other , the nipples were erected to such pain while she twisted on the bed and mourned , her mourn was like a melodious song to him , as he got harder along with the speed of the rain , he went bitting , squeezing it , while she breathes harder and harder , sweat pilled upon her head , as she mourned , but he enjoyed and her mourns encouraged him as he squeezed them harder and harder while her nails broke down while crushing the bed sheets his bits got tougher and wilder it was impossible for her to match his insanely love , as after leaving it all red and sore he looked at her face he took her hands and placed them on his shirt and commanded to her

UDAY:OPEN IT I DO NOT WANT NAY OBSTACLE

She followed his , she started to unbutton her shirt while he unwrapped her sari , she unbuttoned his shirt and took it off his body , as he too successfully unwrapped her body it was not late before all their clothes lied crumbled on the floor , this was the moment as he heart pounded finally they were going to be ONE as he left love bites all over her long things and finally grabbing his attention he entered her through mouth at first , the feeling could not be explained as after placing love bites in each corner of her body , he took the final step , he locked his hands into hers as he captured his mouth in hers and then he entered her with a jerk , her body lifted up due to the pain , indeed he could not make it at the very first attempt as he kept thrusting in and out of her merciless while she mourned in her mouth her nails digging into his hands , with every thrust he got harder and faster finally he entered her , a lone pair of tears escaped her body as she climaxed being semi conscious , he knew she needed rest as he separated himself from her tired body and kissed her forehead he pulled her into his embrace while she closed her eyes and he covered there body with a conforter as he watched the raindrops trickling down the window glass

done with the update

i am sorry if i offended any body

please hit the like button and no res box

hugss anni


Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH MY😲!!!!!!!! That really was HOT AS HELL☺️. Awesome update Anni, well done👍🏼. U did a fab job👏. Their consummation was perfectly timed (story-wise). Looking forward to them taking on the evil villains now! Please do continue soon, I loved the chapter ... ... it was so worth the wait😳!

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