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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome work vibha...
poor veer and manyata...
going through so much hardships.
loved it loads update soon...



Thanks Mahima🤗
good luck for exams👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: rockingal09

res 4 chap 32, 33
vl unres it 2morrw..



kal kisne dekha
waise thank you🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 34

After 3 minutes of search she found a club as thick as her arm and lifted it to hit the wall which was hollow. It was a wooden club and the splinters of it hurt her fingers but she kept on going. Atlast the wall gave away and she threw off the club exhausted. Her fingers were bleeding and her clothes were dirty but she didn't care. The opening was so small that she could barely manage to crawl through it to the other side of the wall. There he was, her lifeline'the reason of her existence in this universe, the man for whom she could sacrifice her life.

"Udayveer?" she called out his full name with trembling lips.

She felt her throat tightening with myriad emotions, anger, disgust, pity, relief'one after the other.

He opened his arms widely, welcoming her'she gladly ran into it snuggling onto him. they held onto the embrace till Manyata said "Veer, hume yahan se kaise bhi bahar nikalna hai'mujhe laga tha ki main us andhere kamre se nikal nahi paoongi par'"

"tum galat nahi thi..ab tum log iss jagah se kabhi nahi nikal paoge'saath jeene marne ki kasam khayi thi na tum dono ne'abhi saath me maro" Yuddhaveer said appearing from the door which he had opened just now.

"Yuddha ruk..mere paas ek suggestion hai..mujhe ladki chahiye aur tujhe daulat..

Udayveer agar tu apni biwi hume dede, toh hum tujhe yahan se jaane denge..zinda..woh bhi khush..tum bhi khush" Akash was there too.

Udayveer responded with a shot at Akash's face, which he ducked. Uday collided with Yuddha and both fell on the ground. As she stood watching them, three men fought like animals not knowing what was the outcome. For a second it seemed Uday was winning and the other moment the two goons were gaining faster.

Then Manyata remembered the club, which she had broken the wall with. Her chosen target was Akash's head and she chose a perfect moment to reduce him to the ground. Yuddha was so surprised at her quick move he could only look on.

Manyata hit him relentlessly, one swipe for cheating her, one for wrecking her sister's life, one for'

"Manyata, chalo yahan se..chodo use..mar jaayega woh" Veer pulled her hand. She left the club and it hit the ground, streaked with akash's blood.

Yuddha had come to his senses and got up to follow them. They ran as faster as they could.

They found a busy road just outside the building they were lodged in; if only they could get someone to show them the way to the police station. Yuddha closely followed them and now they had reached the busy main road. Vehicles were hurrying by and Manveer dashed across without hurting themselves. But yuddha got wedged between an over loaded garbage truck and a van carrying poultry; both coming from opposite sides.

Both drivers pressed the break at the same time and some of the slimy, stinky garbage fell on Yuddha's head, falling over his face and blinding him. He sauntered around blindly hitting the poultry van. The chickens crawed and made such a din that it was unbearable. The two vehicles were causing traffic stoppage and others honked loundly asking them to move. Manveer who were witnessing this from the other side of the road couldn't resist doubling up with laughter. Yuddha's hair was sticking out from his head in spikes tinged with the ugly slime. His regal clothes were soiled and he looked like an extra from an ET movie. He collided with a woman selling flowers at the traffic signal and she slapped him.

"abey, pehle toh gaadi rok kar traffic rukvata hai aur phir ladki ko chedta hai, hum tujhe chodenge nahi" a passerby grunted angrily.

All came forward with their footware in hand and there was a commotion leading to a large crowd and the police had to step in with their lathis (batons).

Atlast the circus came to an end when the police arrested Yuddhaveer, the self assumed prince of Jaigarh; for creating nuisance at a public place. He was lead to the police van with shackles on his hands. He kept on protesting and name dropping of big people but his pleas fell on deaf ears.

"Sigh.." she took a relieved breath, out of the numerous problems which were plaguing them since they married, one was obilterated, if not completely then temporarily.

"tumne dekha Veer? Kya haal hua 'Rajkumar Yuddhaveer' ka? DS kehti hain ki koi bhi khushi, chahe badi ho ya choti, dhoom dham se manayi jaani chahiye'kya kehte ho?" Manyata winked.

"hunh?"

"chalo na bhaji paav khate hain..aur uske saath masala chai bhi..bohot bhook lagi hai" she made a puppy face.

Udayveer dug into his pocket and came up with a stray note. As they stood eating paav bhaji standing by the road side, Manyata felt a sense of deja vu.

Instead of Pasta she had bhaji paav in her hands and the traffic din was their personal melody. The servant boy brought their masala tea and placed it on the bench nearby. It was beginning to drizzle slightly and a drop of water fell into the glass. "chalo na Veer dance karte hain" Manyata said shyly.

They waltzed in the rain, holding hands, to the amused glances of onlookers and the chaat stall owner. It was one of those moments which would be narrated to their children, over and over; in the distant future.

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"woh Akash mera-, mera pati hai..hai nahi tha" J said.

"tum shaadishuda ho J?" Armaan looked crestfallen.

"meri shaadi sirf naam ki shaadi hai'us aadmi se mera koi vaasta nahi" she said looking at nowhere.

"tumne mujhe yeh baat pehle kyon nahi batayi J? kya tum mujhe apna dost nahi maanti?" Armaan said.

"ofcourse maanti hoon Armaan'par maine tumhe in problems me phasadiya..yeh jaante hue bhi ki'" ki tumhari apni problem itni badi hai..

She didn't say the last part aloud.

"J, chinta mat karo..sab theek ho jaayega..shaant ho jao..tumhari Jiji aur jiju mil jaayenge'main dhoond kar launga unko.." he lifted her chin.

"Humari date spoil ho gayi aur candle light dinner ke plans bhi" she wailed.

Armaan was quick to add that it wasn't like a date but just a casual dinner plan with a friend. "hum kabhi aur chale jaayenge'jab Mihika milegi tab hum sabhi chalenge..Manyata, Udayveer, Tum, main aur Mihika"

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Thats it for this chapter😊 Thank you so much🤗
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Lol that was so funny yet serious update vibhu...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Loved the way how Manyata didn't losed her patience and went on trying to find a way of her imprisonment... jo kaam Uday ko karna chahiye tha woh Manyata ne ki...lol...but then she is the one who had that rod to broke...😉
And the way Manyata gave Akash his part wow...i wished to see it live...lol and Yudha + eggs hayy...kisine usse fry kyun nahi ki...
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣..His hairless head with egg yolk would be so funny🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣..
Mmm hope Yudha is not out soon as he is that one evil men😡

SORRY for late un res sisu.😕...it got out of my mind so sorry...abhi jake next update padti hoon 😃
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update mom.

Thanks to the club that saved the day.😆

Manyata was brave when she hit Akash. The only regret is he's not dead yet.😆

Yuddhaveer scene was funny. He deserves to rot in jail for the rest of his life.

Manveer scenes were cute and rain dance was awesome.

Loved Armaan and J's conversation though my hopes vanished by the last line.
Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
unres
awesome jiji
loved it
thank god manveer was saved
woa manyata did rescue by finding that wood
what the hell this akash thing huh
arghh hate this yudha too
awn pau bhaji and rain dance was super cute
poor jai
awn armaan heart gonna break when he will know that his mihika is dead
please continue super asap
awesome update
thanks for the pm
Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipee🥳 manveer was out of danger😊...bt my fav part was when that lady gave a tight slap to yudha😉 nd manyata beaten that akash😛...i love manveer pav bhaji nd masala tea...these both things are my fav too...poor aarman i feel pity on him...at last after wasteing ur so much time...it was fabouls update...i loved it...nd thnx for pm...
Edited by prernakhandelwa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Reserved !
Will edit it probably in an hour !

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Posted: 12 years ago
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GREAT UPDATE VIBHA.LOVED IT 👏

THANK GOD MANVEER ESCAPED SAFE AND SOUND 🥳

ATLAST... END OF EVIL YUDHVEER.GOT ARRESTED BY

POLICE.VERY GOOD. 😡


LOVED HOW RELENTLESSLY MANYATA HIT AKASH.🤣

OH NO DIS ARMAN IS BEHIND MIHIKA.PLZ ANYONE TELL

HIM DAT SHE IS DEAD.SO DAT ARMAN N J CAN HAVE

FRESH START. 😳


LOVED D UPDATE TO ITS CORE ❤️ NOW CONTINUE SOON.

AND THANKS FOR PM 😃


Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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