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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update as usual vibha.well done.👏👏

poor jay .felt bad for her.got 2 shocks same day.😭

armaan got to know about mihikas death.poor guy.😭

now chapter of akaash is closed for ever. hurrraaay.😆

hope j and armaan unite soon.😳😳

but there was no manveer in todays chappy.😭

now cant wait continue soon.
😃
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally j and arman 😊
thank the lord akask is going to be out of the way👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm n do update as soon as possible 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Great update mom.

Armaan still loves Mihika..😔 Poor J, again she had to face a heartbreak. But hope Armaan realizes some kinda connection with J.😛

Manyata and J talk was awesome.

Did I hear right? Akash is burnt.
I so wanted Akash to be dead. Now it's only Yuddhaver left.



Thanks Hina🤗 Loved your comment😃

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Great Part Vibha

Get Armaan and J together now that Majnu is out the way
Cont Soon



Glad you liked it di🤗

Originally posted by: annabh

awesome update jiji
awn i pity both
poor armaan
and jai she fell for him
awn it is so sad
watching those two lovers heart break
i am so happy manveer is together
woa akash jal gaya
hehehehhehehe
i am super happy
thank you for the pm
update super asap



Thanks Annesha🤗

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

awesome update...i feel bad for j nd armann😒... no manveer scene...akash is died...really?...nd tnnx for pm...



Thank you Prerna😃

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome update vibha poor j felt sad...
akash JAL gaya yiipie...
update soon



Thank you Mahima🤗

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsmmm vibha plz j or arman ku mila du i mean even she deserve a happy ending



Thanks Huma😃

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

hope Jai Nandini finds her love, Armaan, glad Manveer are fine



Thank you so much dear😃

Sorry all i couldn't answer your comments seperately..hope you don't mind😳
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

A serious update i would say...This was a connector ... From the bad past to the unknown future perhaps..😊Thats right

Is that body akash's...and if so was he killed by himself or is there yet another who burned Akash...?????No its Akash only..ab uska role khatam😉
Felt really bad for J...Her heart is all shattered but then as u sow u'll reap...Very true She did pretty much to turn M's life to hell and 2day she was to repay it..Hopefully she will get back her happiness soon...Sure she will
And vibhu what was that no manveer😕...Sorry sisu missed their scenes...You wouldn't like the next Manveer scene im gonna show
Update soon and thanks for pm...Its ok
BTW i unres my last post just now b4 reading it😃I saw..extra thanks sisu🤗



Thanks Partner🤗


Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great update Vibha 👏. Thanks Navina

Glad that Armaan was finally told the truth about Mihika.It was high time Without any histrionics , he walked away from Jai ... I'm sure after he has time to think and processes his thoughts , he'll be back for her😉!Ofcourse he will be
Jai & Manyata's scene was beautiful and heart-warming😳. That was a really nice dialogue about SISTER'S BEING MADE BECAUSE MOTHER'S COULDN'T BE EVERYWHERE😃. I enjoyed that!Glad i was able to do it right😳
Lastly , the best part ... Akash is dead!!!!!! I'm very pleased about that track ,me too😆 because I was worried that he'd return later to cause some more damage😡! No he won't..But he's gone , FOR GOOD this time🥳 !!!Yes its finally Tata bye bye Majnu
Loved the chapter ,Thanks again
do continue soon ,Sorry i got late
thanks for the PM😊.Welcome dear



Thanks Navina🤗


Originally posted by: chocohollic

read ur ss
it is awesoem
can u please send me a pm next time



Thank you Mona😃 sure i'll PM you dear

Originally posted by: ...anju...

nice update as usual vibha.well done.👏👏

poor jay .felt bad for her.got 2 shocks same day.😭

armaan got to know about mihikas death.poor guy.😭

now chapter of akaash is closed for ever. hurrraaay.😆

hope j and armaan unite soon.😳😳

but there was no manveer in todays chappy.😭

now cant wait continue soon.
😃



Thank you so much Anju🤗 loved reading your comment😛

Originally posted by: fireroad99

finally j and arman 😊

thank the lord akask is going to be out of the way👏



Thank you Azwa😃

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Awesome update
Thanks for the pm n do update as soon as possible 😊



Thanks Humaira😃

Sorry guys..i couldn't answer them seperately😊
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



Small note before you go further...😊
let me tell you that this chapter does not have a single happy scene at all...i just wanted to show that a marriage does not always mean a bed of roses..it means a crown of thorns too..read if you can take Manveer fight don't worry next update me dono phir mil jaayenge😃



"Veer, TV off karo aur chalo'we are leaving" Manyata said.

"Kya? Par kyon? Abhi kuch din aur rukte hain na?" Udayveer said.

Manyata was unusually enraged today and her temper rose 100 degrees more when she saw his casual attitude about it.

"Veer, tumhe pata hai tumhari problem kya hai? Yeh tumhara careless nature'har cheez ko mazak me le lete ho, kabhi toh serious ho jao" she accused him.

"Manyata, mera yakeen karo..main serious hoon..abhi mera English course poora kahan hua hai? Kam se kam uske liye toh rukte hain" He said.

"Maharaj Udayveer singh'wah wah..kya baat kehdi! Jab dekho, 'main, mera aur mera' humara kuch bhi nahi? Shaadi ki shuruat se saari cheeze main karti aayi hoon..tumne kya kiya hai mere liye?" she was full of anger.

"aap log please ladayi band karo'mera sar dukh raha hai" their lone audience spoke up.

"Manyata, samajhne ki koshish karo'aisa nahi hai" he denied it.

"dekho, ab tumhari wajah se meri behen ka kya haal hua hai'na hi tum ise yahan leke aate, na iski yeh halat hoti'hume Mumbai wapas jaana hi hoga! Koi aur hota toh kabke samajh chuka hota, tum jaisa aadmi jo chawl me pala ho woh kya samajh paayega kisi ka dard!" She said with gritted teeth.

She had inadvertently hit where it would hurt the most. He opened his mouth to say something, closed it again and then said in a voice cold as ice "Manyata, tum meri wajah se sharminda(ashamed) ho? Theek hai aaj hi wapas chalte hain Mumbai" and he went to the adjascent room without a word.

The silence after the storm prevailed in the hall which was buzzing just a moment ago. Manyata sat on the floor holding her head in her hands. Her head was reeling and she wished she could call that chawl reference back. She wanted to tell Veer that she was not ashamed of him and she would always be proud of him. But she was a human afterall, ego; the biggest enemy of communication had consumed her completely. No she wouldn't say sorry, what she said wasn't completely untrue; let him come and apologise.

On the other hand Udayveer was completely stunned after hearing what Manyata said; was she really ashamed of him? Did she regret their marriage? Or is it the reaction of hearing about Akash's death? He was her first love afterall.. oh my oh my it could be right! No wait, it was she who clobbered Akash to death!

Did her mind change back after seeing Akash's painful death on TV? But then was it really Akash who died? The body was charred beyond recognition, the reporter said.. his thoughts were stinging him like giant bumble bees. He remembered there was a bar in some corner of the house..

5 minutes later Uday had finished half the bottle of imported whiskey and still wasn't finished. Whoever said Alcohol could drain a man's sorrow couldn't have been more right. He raised a glass to the time when he was 'Veer' and only that, without sub-titles.

Manyata continued to hold on to her ego and Veer only got himself more drunk. J simply didn't know what to do..her own pain aside; the two people whose love could withstand even the strongest of the storms had been shaken so violently. Was this how every love reached its nadir..

The quietest of the nights prevailed and everyone remained where they are; Veer drank himself to unconsciousness at the bar and Manyata sat unmoving against the pole in the hall. While J lay all alone in the room.. Maybe even nature was in a melancholoy mood; there was not even a sound of a song bird, which was common in this area.

Next morning Manyata gave a handwritten note to J. "J..yeh apne jijusa ko de dena.., aur haan maine yeh hindi me likha hai.." she said the last sentence a bit too harshly.

"Jiji..aisa nahi chalega..main aisa nahi hone doongi..aap dono ek dusre se pyar karte ho, bohot pyar..saara gussa bhool jao aur phirse ek ho jao..please" J pleaded.

"J..pyar toh main ab bhi karti hoon..par main chahti hoon ki Veer mere liye kuch kare; baaki patiyon ki tarah..shaadi ke pehle din se sab maine hi kiya hai" Manyata was adamant in her point.

"Jiji..shaadi me 'mera, tumhara' kuch nahi hota, sab 'hamara' hota hai..please try to understand" J desperately tried to make her see reason.

"J..tu pehle yeh note usko dede aur phir apna samaan pack kar'we are not staying here a moment longer" she said so firmly that there was no room left to argue.

One hour later J was driving and Udayveer sat beside her. Manyata sat alone in the backseat. After a journey that seemed unnecessarily dragging too much, atlast airport came into view.

As they alighted from the rental car and proceeded towards check in counter, someone called out J's name loudly.

"Armaan!" J couldn't believe it.


Ok i did awful lot of delay in updating this chapter..im really really sorry😳

i was suffering a writers block ab update kiya hai toh 'Like' and comment😃


Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg first to comment hahhahaha
awesome update jiji
it really touched my heart
you are right with rose comes the thron
poor manveer are facing it
but fight leads to more love
awn jai is turning into an angle
please update super asap
i love this ss
and thank you for the pm

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE SISU...👏👏👏

OMG how could Manyata even say that..
It was all time n opportunity that made herself above Veer..
Poor Uday was it his mistake to be brought up in chawl unlike to Manyata...
Moreover he has nothing to do with J, who came all by herself behind U-M..It was M who wanted J-Armaan alliance and she is the on who ave green signal to J.
Ego kills a relation and accusing eachother results in disaster .now i really don' t want Veer to forgive Manyata so soon even after an apology..she said pretty much😕😕😕...

continue soon n thanks for pm
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it vibha.loved it so much.loved it loads

manyata ne bechara uday ka dil thod diya usse

chawl wala kehke.


she shud have said sorry for dat.

loved j so much.she is trying hard to make

manveer end their fight.


ohh so dey r moving back to mumbai.

wat armaan is back to j.ie good news.

enjoyed d chappy to its core.

try to continue soon.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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