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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for double post.

happened by mistake.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Chapter 29



Maa ye sab kyun hua humare parivaar mein..mere dono betein khush nahi..un dono ki ek hassi dekhne ke liye main taras gayi hoon. Aapne hi toh kaha tha ki Manyata iss ghar ko kkhushiyon se bhar dengi lekin lekin usne toh mere ghar ujhadke rakh di..aisa kyun kiya usne maa'kyun'


Dadi who didn't had answers to any of these just maintained silence as usual but then Maya was furious that day.


Dekh lena maa unn dono ko apne iss kiye ki keemat chukane hogi..meri parivaar ko barbaad karne ki sazha unhe zaroor milenge..mere toh bas yahi dua hain ki joh khushiyan un dono ne humse cheena tha who unhe kabhi naseeb nahi honge..kabhi khush nahi rehega woh dono..

Kya who dono abhi khush hain????


Maya turned to look at her MIL for a moment'


Maa aap aaj bhi unki tarafdaari kar rahi ho???? she said with teary eyes

Hum kisike bhi tarafdari nahi kar rahi maya..lekin tum socho..Uss din ke baad kya tumne kabhi J ya manyata ko deka'kahan gayi woh..kaise honge woh..aise sabse door kyun chale gaye woh..unki apne maa baap ko nahi pata ki woh dono ab hain kahan..aise kyun gaye woh..kabhi socha tumne'Uss din Manyata kyun aayi thi kya ksisine jaanne ki koshish ki..bas sab unhe baar baar kosthi rehti hoon.. kya kisine bhi ye jaanne ki koshish ki aisa kyun hua'bas nafrat nafrat nafrat'.

Kya mila uss nafrat se'Maya hum sab aaj bhi wohin par hain jahan Manyata aur J ne hume choda tha..kuch nahi badla..kuch bhi nahi..aur ye sab tab tak nahi badlega jab tak hum ye na jaanle ki kyun hua ye sab'

Maa unn dono ne video clip pe..


Bass karo maya hume kuch nahi pata..maine shaadi se pehle hi manyata se iss mamle mein baat ki thi..Manyata bas uss accident ko ek boore sapne ki tarah dekti hain..ugar unhe badla lena hota toh wh bahut pehle kar sakta tha..kheir tum nahi samjhoge yeh sab'.hairani ki baat yeh hain ki brij aur Komal ne bhi ek baar apne betiyon se baat karne ki koshish nahi ki...unhe ye tak nahi pata ki unki betiyan zinda hain bhi ki nahi...


Dadi moved away leaving behind a confused Maya'.

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It was evening and Ramesh waited for orders from boss , but then all of a sudden Jagat came up'.Ramesh whats this..You hit our car with a local bus.How could you be so irresponsible

Ramesh tried to interrupt'sir it was not my mistake and and I did informed u the same that '


Shut up Ramesh ..Now u r raising your voice against me..Do u suppose me to remember all those said by my driver'How could you even raise ur voice..

Ramesh was really feared and shispered sorry sir with a bow head'

But jagat was not done'.You will have to pay for it Ramesh .You are suspended for a day and don't u show ur face to me b4 2mrw evening'

Ramesh raised his head to look at his master but he just remained strict and forwarded some money..take this ur salary till date and now leave'But remember not to be back after 2mrw evening..

Now Ramesh was really aware of things going around..he replied in a bow head..and ur pune trip sir'


Jagat looked away and ordered you are not the last driver ..I can adjust it 4 a day.. Afterall a driver too has his own priorities'


He soon marched snatching key from Ramesh and he looked at his boss with tearful eyes'Thankyou sir..May u get your happiness that you deserved long back he prayed'

He sat and drove off with a wheeping heart..

Forgetting you is the penalty for the sin of loving you

Moving forward is my revenge to those haunting memories of you

Hating you every moment soothes the pain of being ditched

But ''''''''''''''''

'''''''''''''''..while hating you, your hatred is killing me'

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There at the top of a beautiful yet simple mansion he stood with a mug of coffee'Wind was blowing away the blue curtains in rhythm to his mind and he looked at her'..


His hand moved down her forehead, eyes, nose and stopped ri8 at her lips'.


Where have u vanished...????? he asked the wind

Keeping the mug down he moved back and crossed his hands 'No I missed I missed something..


What was that she wanted to say what was that..Her face her eyes they were saying something..but what'.he shut his eyes in confusion.


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Jiji I need to collect some books from library she announced and moved in a hurry making her shoes proper. But soon that strong hand pulled her.


J whats that now 'You have always made fun of his feelings but not anymore. He was there with you in all phases of life like a good friend companion and family..You can't turn your back at him again. I can't let u do that again. Its wrong'..


What r u saying about jiji.. J turned to move around but Manyata pulled her back


Don't play oversmart J, u very well know what iam saying about..


J crossed her hands at her stomach ..


What..Manyata shouted..


Iam waiting to hear you jiji'so shoot'.


He loves you.. I have always seen that in his eyes'You can't ignore him further j'.manyata answered in peace.


Why she asked in a rocky tone'


Manayata was stammered for a moment'


Iam asking u jiji she announced with yet more strictness'


Manyata still tried hard for an answer but then blocking her J continued'.


Because I don't have any option..You want to dumb me in to his head bcoz u know very well that he loves me..Don't worry jiji iam never a responsibility on you..never'J finished with a cold tone'


Manyata's eyes pour out hot tears but soon it turned all red'She crushed J's arms in her hands'


How could u even think of that J'How could u'was this my love for you..was this'.Here iam concerned of your life and u'

Hunh concerned thast the word..why jiji'were was ur concern when we broke those people who loved us'.


Manyata stood froze hearing that word from her'..


J slowly took off her arms from manyata's clutch and held Manyata's hand all tightly'


Was that our love for them jiji..was that??? they trusted us and in return we ditched them.

Jiji we cheated two men, two families , all our dear and near but then wasn't that wrong she asked piercing those eyes that was staring at her..

Her eyes filled all of a sudden'..J do u still lo''''..

Before she could continue J kept her hands cross her lips'

Love is a dead feeling'I can never love a person, never ever..Its just guilt, mere guilt that's all. You need not fear jiji..please'..and now I realize love never exist, atleast not in my world..My world is just me and I can never let any1 in other than u and my sweet heart..

(She went to manyata's embrace.)Jiji please don't destroy Rahul's life. He would get his best but then that should never be me if u wish his brighter future. He will soon realize how wrong was he in choosing me and I'll make him realize that iam never a marriage material, never'..

But I can't let u live alone J'.I have a beautiful gift given to me by the man whom I loved..what abt you?'You are all alone my sister..all alone

J looked at her sister with a tear filled eyes'..Jiji leaving our world behind both of us had an expectation- expectation of gaining it back someday but just in 3 months mine was proved wrong ..


In all this u forgot yourself..If u have a wonderful gift from man u love then I have a wonderful gift from the god whom I trust. Its you'when u r by my side why should I need some1 else'.

Before Manyata could speak another word J moved out'.


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His life was turned a 180 degree..He was no longer a busy man..He just kept himself away from others. He manages Kapoor Companies at UK. Eventhough he was the head, it was him his PA Aryan Rai who sees everything..



But all these years something haunted him and that was her face..Their last meeting kept him in complete confusion. His lot of questions just went severe by her that visit.. Her painful eyes, shuddering lips, raised heartbeat proved her love for him.He did felt that immense love in her ..But then when she moved out with a disappointed look which crushed him... The pain of parting unwillingly covered her...



The video all talking about could be an old one too as dadi said...His heart asked him to believe her eyes but his brain moved with the opinion of others and finally after the fight all that he could do was to ask Jagat not to spoil a girl's life as he knew loving a girl and then marrying other can give only pain to the latter one.


He never got what his mistake was but then his words hit the whole family and he was flooded with questions..At the end he could do only one thing and that is to leave back everything and every1...so he did...


Isolating from all did helped in forgetting the separation from her. She was far yet so near. Still his eyes searches every road for a glimpse of her..


Wherever I go, u r with me

In my dreams, In my soul, In my endless night.

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Rush Rahul, we r behind the time..


Yes bhai iam doing it but this dumb signal...I am afraid what if we miss our fight..


Ratan give a warning signal to Rahul and he shut his mouth...At the back seat Manyata and J was in their own world..


Manya are u sure you want to take J to UK.. I mean ...


Rahul interrupted ya di don't u believe my bhai...


Ahhh I want to confirm Ratan. Ahh its not that I don't believe you but then I can't take risk now..so its always good to do some kind of re-testing..


Ahhh I do agree but then I don't think u too must go alone..If u want Rahul will stay back...See you can't manage everything all alone...ratan said in a worried tone


Rahul smiled at his bhai's comment looking at road.


But soon it was J who replied...Its k rats...and don't say me that u want Rahul to accompany us...He need to be taken back India ..And also rats please ask Tanu mom to find a girl for him ...Its better that this playboy gets married soon...J completed with a smirk...


Oh Ms Jainandini why should I look for other girls when you are near..rahul revolted joyfully giving clear indication of what he had in mind


You must Mr Rahul bcoz I am going with jiji to UK just to meet my future husband..So when I come along with my fiance I don't want you to be lonely...and hence u need to...Now is that K...J completed with a powerful yet serious smile sealing the lips of all three present...


Soon they reached airport and after hugging eachother the men moved forward while .


Rahul turned to look at J but she avoided that look and got back to car followed by manyata.


To be continued...Hope u enjoyed reading...😊

Do hit Like button because if it decreases then i'll mark end to this 4 sure😊

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first to comment
yahhh
now to the update
the opening scene of maya and dadi
was powerfull and filled with emotions
maya is very much right on her point
she is a mother and she has all rights to think
about her sons welfare
at a point manyata did ruin her family
but here we cannot deny dadi fact
her speech had strong point
they should have listen to mayata
they should have talked about it
by talking big problems are often solved
now pure jaggat he has become such a cold hearted
meta guy with nothing to smooth his broken heart
i pity him
and wat the manyata is talking shit
if she broke jai and jaggat relation why is she back
of getting her with rahul
if she wants to see her sister happy
go to jaggat and confess
she did ruin everything
she could have acted more matured
poor jai
awnn for the first time
i am feeling bad for her
instead of manyata
and about uday i have truly nothing to say
uday grew even worse
actually he was better after the dead of tara
manyata scattered him
even after knowing he is already heart broken
awnn i am on the urge of crying imagining uday like that
i know you had to take so much of trouble for this updat
thank you
it was awesome
your update left me speechless

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HAI KRISHU...

UPDATE WAS SO HEART TOUCHY DEAR.NO WORDS

CAN EXPRESS IT .U MADE ME SPEECHLESS.


I FELT REALY BAD FOR UDAYS MOM.DAT STUPID

DECISION OF MANYATA BROKE TWO FAMILIES INTO

PIECES.MOSTLY UDAY AND JAGAT.


LOVED DAADI SOO MUCH.SHE IS WISE A
LADY.

WEN I READ TODAYS UPDATE FELT DAT MANYATA

BCOMING TOO SMALL INFRONT OF J.REALLY J IS A

WOMAN OFSUBSTANCE.AND A STRONG WOMAN.


HOW CAN MANYATA JUST SAY DAT J MUST MOVE ON.

MAY B RAHUL IS TOOGUD.MAY B HE LOVES J.BUT HOW

CAN MANYATA JUST FORGET WAT DEY HAVE

DONE WID UDAY AND JAGGAT.

I FELT REALLY SAD FOR UDAY.POOR GUY.HE FELL AGAIN

INTO DEPTHS OF SORROWS AND LONLINESS.HOW CAN

MANYATA B SO HEARTLESS.SHE KNOW DAT ONCE HE WAS

HEART BROKEN.ONCE AGAIN BROKE HIS HEART MERCILESLY.

CONDITION OF JAGGAT IS NOT LESS.FELT SORRY FOR HIM.

LOVED CAR SCENCE SO MUCH.HOPE RAHUL UNDERSTANDS

WAT J INDICATED.


HOPE MANVEER MEET SOON IN UK.BUT THERE WAS NO

CHOTOOS IN DIS UPDATE.


NOW EAGERLY LOOKING FORWARD HOW STORY PROGRESSES.

TRY TO CONTINUE SOON PLEASE.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: annesha18

first to comment
yahhh
now to the update
the opening scene of maya and dadi
was powerfull and filled with emotions
maya is very much right on her point
she is a mother and she has all rights to think
about her sons welfare
at a point manyata did ruin her family
but here we cannot deny dadi fact
her speech had strong point
they should have listen to mayata
they should have talked about it
by talking big problems are often solved
now pure jaggat he has become such a cold hearted
meta guy with nothing to smooth his broken heart
i pity him
and wat the manyata is talking shit
if she broke jai and jaggat relation why is she back
of getting her with rahul
if she wants to see her sister happy
go to jaggat and confess
she did ruin everything
she could have acted more matured
poor jai
awnn for the first time
i am feeling bad for her
instead of manyata
and about uday i have truly nothing to say
uday grew even worse
actually he was better after the dead of tara
manyata scattered him
even after knowing he is already heart broken
awnn i am on the urge of crying imagining uday like that
i know you had to take so much of trouble for this updat
thank you
it was awesome
your update left me speechless

aww thanks a lot baccha🤗..Its all a ruined relations..Ego and not hearing each other destroyed everything..each person is shattered by that one decision of Manyata and J...not to forget it was the decision of J too...If M doesn't accompany J would have gone alone

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb luved it

Am really feeling sad for uday manyata jay and jagat..

And thanx for the pm jiji

Hugzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: snowdream

aww thanks a lot baccha🤗..Its all a ruined relations..Ego and not hearing each other destroyed everything..each person is shattered by that one decision of Manyata and J...not to forget it was the decision of J too...If M doesn't accompany J would have gone alone


ego it the root of all problem yes very much tru both are responsible bit i hope all the misunderstanding are cleared asap can't bare so much of tragidy lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic update...,j and manyata convo was superb...uday in uk...nd both sisters are also going there...,can't wait for their meeting...pls make everything alright soon...i can't bare so much tragedy...nd thnx for pm...
Edited by prernakhandelwa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: annesha18


ego it the root of all problem yes very much tru both are responsible bit i hope all the misunderstanding are cleared asap can't bare so much of tragidy lol

lol don't worry its just till manveer meeting and revelation then i'll make up for all tragedy 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Krishna👏.
Dadi's talk to Maya was long over-due. I agree with every word she said ... she's definately the most sensible character here😉.
I also enjoyed Jai's out-burst on Manyata😃. She was absolutely right in her accusations of Manyata. Jaggat is cold and down-right rude🤢. But that's his way of dealing with a broken heart 💔 - so we can't fault him. Uday has relocated to the U.K - GREAT!!! And the sister's are headed there presently ... i can't wait for their meeting! I think u said that the baby's name will be disclosed in this chapter - changed your mind , DID U?😉 (I'm dying to know the kid's name). Loved the update , do continue soon , thanks for the PM😊.

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