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Guys i am not an awsome writer like you all but i just gave it a try, if you all will like it then it will matter a lot to me and if no then please apni screen mat phorna yaar please pardon me for my mistake. DILEMMA [MANYATA Pov] It has been two years that i had seen him last but yet he hasn't changed a bit,the same arrogant guy with hundred girls rounding him like bees flocking to honey. I was right,i was absolutely right.,He was a waste of time then and he is a waste of time now. But more than wondering about him, i am suprised at myself that admist all these people why the hell am i noticing him only,O CUMMON MANYATA, you need a drink to get done with this. Saying this manyata turned her steps towards the bar placing her hands for an order Manyata: A quartile taquila please...O God Udayveer singh i just don't want to see your face.
Uday: Are you sure princess?
Manyata's heartbeat suddenly rushed with a thud. It was he, the one whom she had been trying to avoid since so long. He was near her, very near that she could feel his warm seductive breathe on her neck.She turned back instantly and her head collided with his chest, she looked up at him and there faces were just apart. Manyata: Tu..tu tum! Uday: Haan princess Hum, kya hua? hume itna nazdeek dekh ke hairan ho rahi ho...
Manyata: Uday peeche hato, aur tumse mujhe kya lena-dena hain jo tumhe dekh ke mujhe hairani ya paresani hogi. Manyata just jerked away herself and turned to leave but as she did that Uday just pulled her by her shoulder and turned her to face him. He brought himself closer to him and threw a his signature smirk
Uday: o really princess humari mozudgi se koi fark nahi parta tumhe toh humara chehra kya tum aathwa(eighth) azooba (wonder) lagta hain tumhe jo itne der se tum hume dekh rahi thi jab hum waha khade un ladkiyon se baate kar rahe the... Jawab do princess
Manyata (to herself: o god iski aankhe itni tez kab se ho gayi,shit, what to do) : look you i wasn't noticing you got that now let me go..
Uday: ok then u weren't noticing me then let me guess tum zaroor us khambe(pillar ) ko notice kar rahi hogi, isn't it?
Manyata face was fully flushed with raged.
Manyata: Haan pillar ko hi notice kar rhi thi toh isse tumhe kya fark parta hain, jane do mujhe.
Uday: fark parta hain princess bohot fark parta hain aur tum har baar hume is tarah chor kar nhi ja sakti.
Manyata for the first time in her life saw this side of Uday, there was a different glint of emotions in his eyes, she coudn't make out as to it was of love or hatred but there was something that his eyes wanted to speak but he couldn't.
Manyata's eyes were filled with tears, however she gathered herself nd spoke: Humare bich sab khatam ho chuka hain Ud..aa..ay
Uday: aur ye sab tumne khatam kiya princess humne nhi.
Manyata: dekho uday...
Uday: hum nhi aaj tum dekho gi princess.
Saying this he dragged her towards the elavater.
Uday and manyata had been married four years ago, a happily married couple. They shared every relationship be it friends, companion, mental, physical evrything but everything turned blue when Manyata met with an accident and doctors reported that she would never be able to give birth to a child, she has serious internal injuries from which however recovered soon but she had become a complete different manyata. She used to get angry on little things of no importance . Her mental trauma was creating a great difference between her nd uday. Uday on the other always wanted to stay by her side even if it was at the cost of her harking at him for every little thing but manyata's temper was being too much to be tolerated and thats how they once fought nd manyata left the house stating that she could not stay with that man. Uday still tried to contact her many times but Ds informed him that manyata had left India and thats hw he undrstood that there was no point other than to move on.
Manyata was remembering evrything that happened in past when his voice brought her back into reality. They were in uday's private room of udayniwas. The room had all the pics of uday nd manyata together since the uday had heard that manyata has returned back , he had been waiting to show her this, his love , , the depth of his emotions nd how lonely he was without her.
Uday: Dekho ye sab princess kya ab bhi tumhe lagta hain hum tumse dur bhage the?
Manyata now couldn't control herself ,she sank on the ground crying bitterly.
Uday: princess please aise mat ro, hum tumhe aise nhi dekh sakte
Manyata: ye maine(sobbing)kya kar diya uday ,
uday: Plz don't cry princess agar galat humare saath hua hain toh ise sahi bhi hum hi karenge.
Uday cupped her face in his and rubbed her tears
uday: ab toh tum humse dur nhi jaogi na princess
manyata: kabhi bhi nhi
he hugged her tightly as if neva to let her go again nd they got lost in each others embrace the end

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Posted: 12 years ago
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god job dear👍🏼mai kafi time baad koi os parh rahi hu but i really enjoyed
fantastic job oh god i love this os old memories was totally freshed in my mind
tu tum us pillar ko dekh rahi thi haha manyata ko irratate karna koi uday se sekhe

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: candy08


<font size="3" color="#000099">god job dear👍🏼mai kafi time baad koi os parh rahi hu but i really enjoyed</font>
<font size="3" color="#000099">fantastic job oh god i love this os old memories was totally freshed in my mind</font>
<font size="3" color="#000099">tu tum us pillar ko dekh rahi thi haha manyata ko irratate karna koi uday se sekhe</font>



thanx a lot yaar and mujhe motivate karna toh koi aapse sikhe. thank u so much:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!
seems awesome nishu! will edit asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved 😊 EDITED: it was a sweet n cute OS dear 😛 loved how Manveer became one in the end 😃 you definitely should write more...😃
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS !
Loved it !
You should try out some more ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice OS !

Loved it !
Youshouldtryoutsome more ...


thank u so much ,you have no idea hw much ur all's appreciation means to me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

Reserved😊
EDITED:
it was a sweet n cute OS dear 😛
loved how Manveer became one in the end 😃
you definitely should write more...😃


thanx a lot,glad that u all liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh SHIT!!!This was just...freaking BEAUTIFUL<3I
do hope people understand...two people can be that close, love each other with their heart & soul..but still separated for some reasons..They r deeply in love man..Love has too many forms..N must say you portrayed their love so BEAUTIFULLY!!!!
Oh my god...I just love manveer.. And after
the conversation that they had after the fight, they
have an even more special place in my heart...Finally after so many months..finally I can say that I m SPEACHLESS..I honestly love u for this nish😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow wow wow . u really amazed me. the os was really nyc nd cute. do write more dear.

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