nadaan parindey chapter 8 and 9 - Page 18

Originally posted by: snowdream

that was awesome.👏..
congo first to comment

I missed 2-3 chapters in between but finally caught up with all...and all that i could say is that it was awesome...😃😃😃
hehehe thank you

Such a rotten family of Mrinalini Devi the witch hunh😡😡😡, it was so pathetic to see what a game plan she played to get rid of Manyata..How could adhiraaj even think of his son raping his sister...That death of his was a mercy on him as he deserved lot more...🤢
yes they were they all killed each other
she was a witch and died in hands of a person she loved the most
naha he wanted to rape manyata
at last the guilt killed him

But all is well that ends well ...Uday proved his rights on her eventhough drugged and that was the beginning of the colours in Manyata's life...Thoroughly enjoyed it and ya seriously i enjoyed it..😳😳
thank you yes and moreover they were made for each other he had his right on her even before her birth

Reading that u planned to end it i was dumbstruck as i saw no point to end it finely but then u ended it perfectly...👏
actaully this is about family politics and i did not want to stench it
and i had no plot what would happen after they all die
so this was the only end i had in mind
i know there is almost no manveer scene
but this ss was to convey that every sinator is punished by god
and that did happen
my most of ss is filled with manveer
but in this one i wanted to potray this reality of life
i am glad that you liked it

Originally posted by: wonderblake

You write so well annie, and I am hooked into all your stories.

Oh and thanks a lot for the double updates.

Originally posted by: htgcute

Wow shona superb ending loved it...

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm puff pastryyy love it will miss this storyyy

Originally posted by: annabh

i am soo happy you liked it my hunney bunney

Originally posted by: huma12.

i love all ur stories puff pastryy... And what about my request which i tell u on fb