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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_vania

awsome zabardast
thanks for the pm
nice update
written very welll
update sooon
continue asp
n please pm
nicee awsome


awn thank you dear
yea sure will try to update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you
i ahve a request plzz update ur ss asap
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annesha18


awn thank you dear
yea sure will try to update asap



ur welcome anni sweety please update for me
plz plz plz plz i m big fan of urs n manveer so plz update for me
this is my request i m ur new reader na so u complete my request
plzz update for me i m eagerly waiting for the next chapter
when u updated?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_vania



ur welcome anni sweety please update for me
plz plz plz plz i m big fan of urs n manveer so plz update for me
this is my request i m ur new reader na so u complete my request
plzz update for me i m eagerly waiting for the next chapter
when u updated?


awn dat was super cute of you
awn see i hav really a lot of ss hanging wich i hav to complet i will try to update asap only for u
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you all so much
only for your support i could write this story
nadaan parindey is a tale of
family politics and an emerging love from it
so here i present the last chapter of nadaan parindey
i wanted to keep is short and simple
i am not ending it abrubtly but this is the end of my this ss
love hugss
anni

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


chapter 10

part 1

The clouds covered the sky , as bright day looked all gloomy and sad , it was all her fault only her smile could make this sun smile and the leaves dance but she did not smile even the sparks of her eyes were lost , she had no idea that how on the earth was she on this bed nude with this horrible man beside her , and the dadisabh face turned red with anger as the last word she uttered was

DS:you both get ready and be down i am waiting for you both in the study

As she slammed the door on there face , manyata looked at uday who was equally shocked at this he had no explanation ,he knew he had committed a mistake but had no idea to rectify it as he dared and kept his hands to pacify the crying howling with pain manyata but all he got was another shower of anger as she shoved his hands off and jumped out of the ebd with the blanket wrapping around her body tightly and she screamed

MANYATA:you moron you schroldell how could you ruin my life aren't you ashamed you ass whole you ruined my entire life

She continued accusing him as he tried his best to control his anger but at last unable to do so , his hands flung on her cheek as she fell crumbled on the ground she looked at him with teary eyes as he had fireballs in his eyes and caught hold of her head and pulled it towards his face making her cry in pain as he said with his smirk

UDAY:look here firstly I did not get you drugged I myself too was drug ok and if you fail to understand then I am perfectly fine with the fact that you think I raped you or even better I had a one night stand with you now get off my way

Manyata sat dumbstruck as he got himself ready and walked off the room leaving her all scattered and annoyed , as tears were flooded in her eyes she crumbled herself and broke into tears but even uday was not happier on his side , his heart ached to see his girl crying he needed to figure what had happened before it was too late and god did hear to his prayers as he walked towards the gateway he was held back by two voice after a lot he figured it was adhiraaj and giriraaj , he stood there eves dropping as he switched on the voice recorder of his phone and heard them talk

GIRIRAAJ:how did this happen bhaisa ?i thought only aryaan was supposed to be drugged but how did manyata too got drug and why was uday with her

ADHIRAAJ:there was a simple mistake actually uday snatched the drug glass from aryaan and manyata well I drugged her

GIRIRAAJ:but why bhaisa

At this adhiraaj slamed his hands on the glass table and said suppressing his anger

ADHIRAAJ:because I wanted to be with her last night but that son of that wh**e spoiled my whole plan but at last we conqured what we want now uday rejected her and the panchayat will hang her to dead

A evil laughter filled in the room as uday heart pounded , he could not let this happen the flashes of past came running into his mind where his mother sucided because of this sick rapist and now he himself was being the villain even he was ruining manyata 's life no matter what the situation was but still he had to fix it , so he raced to dadisabh 's study there she sat and gave him a frostly look and said

DS:I am sorry my grand daughter committed a sin and do not worry she will pay for her sin

UDAY:its not manyata but you who committed a sin by giving birth of monster instead of sons

Ds anger boiled up as she clinched her hands in a fist and crushed her teeths saying

DS:what are you here for taking revenge for your mother rape huh

UDAY:No no more will I fight for the thing that gone but I am here for manyata I cannot let you all ruin her life how could you all stoop so low I mean just to kill her you wanted her to get raped by her own brother

DS:yes so what is so wrong in this huh , she is a girl child a sin to our family what ever I did was for my family good she was a fool to believe that I love her

UDAY:so you think your plan is successful huh

DS:yes it is

UDAY:no I am getting married to her mrinalini

He turned to move as ds got up and pulled the pistol from the drawer and pointed it on his forehead and smiled

DS:no uday now be a good boy and just go to your work I hope you don't want to loose your life

UDAY: I really do not care

DS:but you will do care when it is manyata right bacha

Uday froze he look back just to see manyata getting dragged by adhiraaj with gun on her forehead , she had witnessed the whole scene as she begged ds

MANYATA:why are you doing this ds please I am your grand daughter

DS:no you are no one of mine you both deserve to die

UDAY:you can kill me leave the girl ok

At this manyata turned towards him shocked as he smiled at her , emerging feeling of love could not be hidden from those eyes as ds smiled and said

DS:woa so much of love huh

Then let both of you die , there was a gunshot as adhiraaj rushed to ds to find her lying down on the ground dead , as uday glanced at manyata and she looked back at him , it was not they to shot ds neither adhiraaj then who must it be they turned back and was shocked it was aryaan

They were dumbstruck , aryaan had a pistol in his hands and his eyes emerging with anger as adhiraaj laid by mrinalini dead body trying to pacify himself and aryaan headed towards manveer before they could speak he caught uday by shoulder and said

ARYAAN:I am sorry only if I knew my dad was a devil and the thing he did with your mom was so terrific I would murder him by my own hands and now this senator were back of my sister but I would never let that happen ever so uday run with her to temple get married and after that no one can do anything to you both now don't waste your time and go fast

UDAY:but what about you aryaan

ARYAAN:jaagat and vijay is waiting for you outside ok till then I will try my best to stop this people here ok now run

MANYATA:no bhai I cannot leave you and go

ARYAAN:bacha be save and that is all I want go

Saying this they hugged as uday dragged manyata away , they ran as fast as there feet could take them , they crossed the long corridor and now they were on the gate just to be blocked by several well build guards , uday looked at manyata and said heavily

UDAY:go stand aside

MANYATA:but you

UDAY:just go

He barked as she stood aside and watched him fight , he fought them single handed and broke each bones of their body he was truly like any action film hero as after all the goons laid on the ground wounded the chase was started again they went out as vijay headed them to the car and jaggat started to drive it while vijay sat at the back of the car with his riffle shooting bullets at the car behind , they were being followed by giriraaj car as giriraaj shot the car knowing the fact that his sons were there in the car but now revenge demanded for a own blood and he did not regret sacrificing even his son for it but even they were not willing to give up as manyata was hell scared and was tightly into the embrace of uday who wiped her tears as jaggat smiled and said

JAGGAT:the police are going to arrest us for breaking all traffic rules

VIJAY:no worries our jiju is the king of police and we are all doing this for his marriage isn't it uday veer

UDAY:sure guys your protection is my gurantee

He joked as ,manyata looked up at them and said

MANYATA:are you all mad huh we are here going to die and you are all joking

UDAY:see dieing is a part of life but the fun is in the journey we know we might die but come on till then we can leave our life to the fullest right

She looked at him as a smile crept into her face , his nearness made her cheek turned red as they finally reached the same radha Krishna temple they raced and narrated the tale to the pandit and he arranged for marriage , everything was set as they sat down and marriage started but giriraaj and his mens attacked them , luckily jaggat and vijay was into there rescue , they fought with the mens and there father bravely as manveer marriage continued after a battle jaagat and vijay won all the man laid wounded , here the sun almost took it last good bye and was setting in the sky as they saw a blood covered adhiraaj climbing up the stairs helped by giriraaj ,uday clunched to manyata even pulling her more into her embrace as girirraaj took jaggat and pointed a gun on him and adhiraaj said

ADHIRAAJ;in a battle we need to sacrifice our own soilder see my hands blooded and it is filled with the blood of my own son , yes I killed aryaan

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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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part 2

MANYATA:how could you kill your own son

ADHIRAAJ:wait and watch till I kill each of you one by one

VIJAY:dad leave jaggat

GIRIRAAJ:no he wil get the taste of his own medition

Manyata pulled herself apart from his embrace and stepped forward as she said to them

MANYATA:you all wanted me na for me only aryaan life was sacrificed right but you are mistaken it was you adhiraaj who killed first your wife and now your own son look at you what do you have with yourself nothing at all now you are completely alone according to you girl child are a sin right but if boy like you in disguise of devil are born than that is no boon too

There she felt a hard slap on her face , adhiraaj hands flung on her face as uday eyes reddened with anger and he screamed and charged towards adhirraaj but manyata continued

MANYATA:you killed your son you killed aryaan

ADHIRAAJ:it was the need of war

MANYATA: what war against your own family with your own blood

He kept murmuring to himself as he headed back , at this he himself too realized that he was mistaken , his whole life he had done sins and finally god did punish him he missed his steps and fell off the stair time stood still as they looked down just to see him lying down on the end of the stair case dead before giriraaj could react police mans caught him and got him arrested , finally peace prevailed both menuka and giriraaj was arrested as they went back to the house and after a few days funeral was held for all the three member a week passed , , the post of mla was handed to bridgraaj manveer were married but uday did not claim his rights on his wife they stayed in separate rooms , they hardly even exchanged a word and she was disturbed the whole time the only good thing that happened was manyata misunderstanding was cleared with her dad and she spent most of her time with it , finally after a week all of a sudden komal and akash came after knowing the whole story .

Akash went to her room as she laid down peacefully and he shoved his hands on her hair and said

AKASH:do not worry it was not a legal marriage so we do not consider it ok I know everything it is not your fault you was drugged but now I am here and everything will be set right ok lets marry manyata

She looked up at him and smiled as she said him

MANYATA:legal or not the truth is I am married to uday infront of agni we took vows to stay with each other through thick and thins so now I cannot ditch him , he have saved my life he is my husband now

AKASH:are you out of your mind manyata if uday does not have any problem why are you being like this

MANYATA:what did he say akash?

AKASH: He said all that matters to him is your happiness

At this she popped out of the bed with a smile plastered to her face and she said

MANYATA:no akash I cannot let this happen I cannot marry you neither can I divorce you because I love uday you are my friend I hope you will understand

AKASH:I do manyata you are free go he is waiting upstairs in the terrance for you

As those words came out she raced to the terrance and there he was standing there and taking the rain in his embrace as she went and hugged him from back he was dumbstruck and turned towards her , manyata hands rested on his neck and his on her waist pulling her closer to him the rain drops flew down there body as she said

MANYATA:you know why that night we did that mistake not because of our drug but because our heart I did not protest not because I was drizy but because I knew it was wrong

UDAY:I did so because I knew I would never regret it as we were always made for each other

MANYATA:I love you uday

UDAY:I love you too

They hugged each other like there was no tomorrow

Presnt

they reached airport as jaggat shook jai and said

JAGGAT;jai lets go

JAI;the story over already so fast

UNNATI:I thought you did 'nt like it

JAI:you are kidding me I loved it

VIJAY:what about our group song

JAI:but wha connection does it have with manveer

TARA:in their reception they danced in this song only

JAI:oh but you know akash you are awesome what you did was so good

AKASH:thank you for your sympathy but she who is single here

JAI:awn so you are sad just because you are single

AKASH:yes

JAI:awn don't worry you will surely get a better match now lets go

they all headed towards the main entrance as manyata and uday , his arms snaked around her waist they all broke into a hug but manyata was taken awake as she got the tightest hug from jai almost chocking her life out as she questioned

MANYATA:hey dear sorry but i cannot recognize you

JAI:i am jaggat girl I am a total fan of you both

UDAY:that is really sweet

VIJAY:by the way why are you looking so fat manyata

JAGGAT:i think that is jijusa hard work na

MANYATA:since when did you get so shameless

UNNATI:so it is true we are going to get a new member soon

UDAY:yes we already informed aunty komal and bridgraaj uncle they will be here asap

MANYATA:by the way where is akash

TARA:dunno he was with us only

they turned to see akash looking dreamily into a girls eyes , they were sharing a deep indence eyelock as uday whispered into her ears

UDAY:start of another love story

the end

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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was awesome.šŸ‘..
I missed 2-3 chapters in between but finally caught up with all...and all that i could say is that it was awesome...😃😃😃
Such a rotten family of Mrinalini Devi the witch hunh😔😔😔, it was so pathetic to see what a game plan she played to get rid of Manyata..How could adhiraaj even think of his son raping his sister...That death of his was a mercy on him as he deserved lot more...🤢

But all is well that ends well ...Uday proved his rights on her eventhough drugged and that was the beginning of the colours in Manyata's life...Thoroughly enjoyed it and ya seriously i enjoyed it..😳😳

Reading that u planned to end it i was dumbstruck as i saw no point to end it finely but then u ended it perfectly...šŸ‘
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

that was awesome...I missed 2-3 chapters in between but finally caught up with all...and all that i could say is that it was awesome...

Such a rotten family of Mrinalini Devi the witch hunh, it was so pathetic to see what a game plan she played to get rid of Manyata..How could adhiraaj even think of his son raping his sister...That death of his was a mercy on him as he deserved lot more...
But all is well that ends well ...Uday proved his rights on her eventhough drugged and that was the beginning of the colours in Manyata's life...Thoroughly enjoyed it and ya seriously i enjoyed it


thank you so much jiji
it was about a family politics
so did not wnat to strench it a lot
i am glad you liked it
thank you
i know there was so less manveer scenes but it was based on family politics
and finally i conveyed the mesage thank you

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Posted: 12 years ago
You write so well annie, and I am hooked into all your stories.
Oh and thanks a lot for the double updates.

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