(J of a Wife - BOOK 3) A FAMILY REUNITES - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanks Andy , for this wonderful comment 🤗 .

navi, i was really getting scared like you were not replying to my cmt, all other comments were getting replies
i thought you were angry with me
now am happpy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

@navina
will quote cumnt 2morow.

Will be waiting😉
and the last joke was hilarious!! it wasnt at all poor. rolled on floor laughing
Glad u enjoyed it😆.
ok. will wait patiently
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER : 1 :

I was happily for 6 years to a wonderful man. I had a 4 year-old daughter and I was pregnant with Veer. My sister was going for a function at her fiances house . We were all invited. My father , mother , only sister , my husband , my daughter Vinita and I travelled there by bus.
It was a huge celebration, as my sister's in-law's (to-be) were celebrating their 25th wedding-anniversary. We sang , we danced ... we enjoyed ourselves to the fullest. But little did we know, what was awaiting us.
On the way back , our bus collided with a truck and the driver lost control. Our bus flew off a cliff and came to a halt in a ravine. Many were injured - but my family was wiped out. Beside me ... nobody survived. I was certain that I had lost the baby in my stomach. Miraculously , he survived! The doctor's called him a MIRACLE BABY.
Veer became my reason to live. My world revolved around him. He was a mischievous child , but a kind soul. I was horrified the day he told me , that he loved Shivani and wanted to marry her; but I accepted it because I could NEVER REFUSE VEER. Whatever he asked me ... I did for him.
He broke my heart , when he decided to join the army. But he was so happy about serving his country that I could not refuse him. I was so sure that once he saw what the army-life was all about - HE'D RETURN HOME. But he didn't - I guess he found his purpose there.
The day he left home - I stopped buying the Daily Newspaper and I got rid of my TV. I didn't want to know the dangers he was facing at the border. I cut myself off from the rest of the world. Once a week , he'd phone me and that would be the happiest 5 minutes of my life. He had such a sweet, melodious voice. He never had a sad , or even an angry tone.
Manyata continued listening as Roopa Aunty continued her story. 1 day , I got a call , saying that Veer was shot twice in Kargil. My heart stopped. When I went to see him in the infirmary (army hospital) ... he was in a jolly mood. He was laughing and cracking jokes with anybody that would listen. I hugged him so tightly. Mom - those bullets didn't kill me ... but u are surely gonna suffocate me! , he said and I laughed.
When he recovered completely ... I forbade him to go back there. But he convinced me otherwise. He had a way with words ... nobody could ever say "NO" to him. That's how - HE ALWAYS GOT HIS WAY!
Where is Veer now , Aunty? , Manyata enquired. My son is dead. He died a year ago. The other morning , when u saw me leave the house ... I went to the river-bank. I went there to do Veer's 1 year ceremony , she answered.
Unknown to the 2 ladies , someone else joined their company. Shivani gasped when Manyata asked : Aunty - how did Veer die?
Veer and 4 soldiers were returning to their post , after completing a successful mission. They were so pleased with themselves , that they forgot that they were crossing into a mine-field. 1 of the soldiers stepped on a limpit-mine and it exploded. In that explosion , 2 men died. The force from that explosion over-threw Veer and he landed very close to another mine. On hitting the ground ... Veer had triggered THAT mine to go off.
Well - he was a MIRACLE BABY ... he survived that blast. But he had many injuries; and above that , a severely disfigured face. I showed u the picture , remember Manyata. She nodded , remembering the horrific photo. His skin was so burned , I was afraid to touch it. It seemed as if , it would come out in my hand. His voice , that was always filled with love , was so strained now. It was like , it was failing him. He had sustained a fracture in his skull even .
That doctors told me that he'd be fine. I had many doubts. I could see the pain that my child was undergoing. I knew , he didn't stand a chance. The doctors thought that they could lie to me ... but they were wrong. I was a nurse - I KNEW WHAT WAS COMING NEXT.
Everyday , I'd sit with him ; he'd tell me to put his head on my lap. I would do so and we'd stay like that for hours. His eyes would constantly fill up with tears , but I was too afraid to ask him the reason.
The doctors were only interested in 1 thing. That was to reconstruct his face. It was like some major project for them , and they were so excited about this experiment. Everyday , they'd discuss this with me. For me , HIS FACE DIDN'T MATTER , I just wanted his pain to go away. But instead of it decreasing ... his pain was increasing day by day.
Sometimes , I used to wear my nurse's uniform to go & see him ; just so that I could gain entry into the dispensary to get him morphine injections. But even a strong drug like morphine , did nothing to lessen his pain. 1 Day he asked me the thing - I DREADED HIM ASKING. He asked to to END HIS LIFE!
No Aunty - don't say that ... Shivani yelled , don't say u killed him! She burst out crying and Roopa Aunty got up and hugged her. Manyata too , could not stop her tears. In the mean-time, "Veer" was looking all over , as to where Manyata dissappeared to. Finally he spotted the 3 woman , a distance away and started walking slowly towards them ; not knowing that HIS LIFE was about to make a U-turn.
He begged me to "kill" him. Please Mom , for me ... do it for me. It hurts so much Mom. My head is aching Mom - I can't take the pain anymore. Mom - please do something , he kept pleading. I finally agreed. I never believed in euthanasia, but now , I was about to do it myself. It was yet again , that I couldn't say "NO" to him.
His last words : I love you so much Mom ... and for doing this for me - I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE. Tell Shivani ... I loved her , till I died. I took an empty syringe and blew air into it and injected it into his system. Within the next minute , the air-bubble reached his heart ; and stopped it from beating further.
There was complete silence. Shivani ran off to her house and buried her head into a pillow and continued sobbing. "Veer" stopped to talk to 1 of his students , but the conversation between Manyata & Roopa Aunty continued.
Aunty - how did Uday come to lead Veer's life? , Manyata questioned. Veer died the night before , the next morning I had him cremated at a lavish funeral given by the Indian Army. I dropped his ashes into the river and was turning to come back , when I heard someone whimper in pain. It was Uday ... but at that time , I didn't know who he was. I immediately went to assist him. The moment , he spoke to me ... I was reminded of Veer. Uday sounded exactly like Veer ; not a decibal different. I took advantage of him , when I found that he remembered nothing from his previous life.
When I took him to the hospital ... he was the 1 chosen ; to donate blood to you, Manyata. Still at that time , I did not know his connection to you. It was after a couple months , that I came to know his real identity; but by then , he was very comfortable as Veer. I was very selfish there ... I knew that there was a father , a sister and a wife that was grieving for him ... but you'll had each other to lean on ... I had NOBODY! So I kept that secret ... and hoped that he'll never get his memory back.
It was only today ... that I discovered that you'll had a daughter ... I wouldn't have wanted that child to grow up without a father. I wouldn't have kept Uday here for my selfish reasons and deprive that baby of her father. "Veer" finally neared the 2 woman , in time to hear : I must accept it now ... my son is dead. MY SON, VEER, IS DEAD!!! Then who the hell am I? "Veer" barked ... before stoming off. Go to him Manyata ... go tell him the truth, Roopa Aunty urged.
"Veer" walked so fast , that Manyata battled to catch up. Uday! Uday ... she called but he didn't respond. Veer - please stop, we need to talk , she tried again, but he was not listening. He walked straight to Ajay's garage and got into a car. Just as he started the car , Manyata jumped in. GET OUT!, he spat. No - I'm not going anywhere! He pulled out from the garage at high speed.
1 Of the mechanics at the garage saw "Veer" take the car. He rushed to tell Ajay. So what ... I told Veer , he could take any car he wanted , whenever he wanted , Ajay explained. Lekin Bhai ... Veer ne saffed gari li ; the 1 with the faulty brakes. Ajay , together with his assistant got into a jeep and tried to follow.
She lied to me Manyata , Veer shouted as the car kept racing. Slow down Veer, we can talk about this calmly , Manyata tried talking rationally but Veer's anger had already reached its peak. Veer - stop the car , then we'll talk. I'll tell u who u are and why Aunty lied. DON'T TAKE HER NAME MANYATA! Do u know how many times she lied to me. On many occassions , she said : " I promise u Veer - U are my son ... trust me ... I'll never lie to u!" I know Veer , but there is an explanation. Veer got onto the main road and continued driving like a maniac. He nearly smash into many cars, but controlled his vehicle at the last second. VEER - PLEASE - STOP - THE - CAR! , Manyata pleaded.
Veer tried doing so ... but the car refused to slow down, let alone - STOP! He pumped the brake-pedal , but ... NOTHING! SHIT!!! There's no brakes. WHAT??? There's no brakes Manyata - I can't stop the car , he screamed.
Suddenly , it was as though , he was stuck in that awful nightmare again. Being in a car ; that's going at top speed and had no brakes. He held his aching head and Manyata quickly took hold of the steering-wheel. Are u alright, Veer? I've been in this position before , and Manyata knew exactly what he was talking about. Ab hum kya karenge? , asked a worried Manyata. I think we'll need to jump! Just then , they saw a truck coming towards them. As Veer could not keep the car steady in his lane ... he veered into an open field.
He was still getting flashes of his nightmare. He was talking to someone on his cell. He discovered the car had no brakes. Suddenly the doors began to lock on it's own. A microphone suddenly came on in the car. Someone spoke through it : ... NOW MONIYA WOULD BE MINE! He strruggled to open the doors , but they would not budge. He kicked out the windscreen ... (THAT WAS THE SOUND OF GLASS SHATTERING). He jumped out through that ... and the car exploded. All went blank after that.
Veer , Veer ... Manyata called out , getting him out of the flashback mode. Angel - we are nearing a cliff . U have to jump. And you? Don't worry about me ... U jump. No - NOT WITHOUT YOU! Both began yelling at each other. Tum itne ziddi kyun ho? Tum ekhi cheez baar, baar kyun bol rahe ho? Hum dono , ek saath kudenge. Angel ... just open the door and get out! No Veer. ANGEL , PLEASE. I said NO. Dammit Manyata ... jump now , he shouted in anger. NO WAY!
The cliff was nearing. We'll jump together ... u from your side and me from mine. Manyata - u jump first and I'll follow. NO VEER. JUMP OUT OF THE FU**ING CAR , MANYATA!!!! NOT HAPPENING!, she crossed her arms over her chest and stayed stubborn. I'm begging u Angel. She shook her head in a NO. MANYATA! VEER! Please Angel ! NO VEER! PRINCESS PLEASE! NOT WITHOUT U ,UDAY!!!
Simultaneously , both jumped out from their respective sides and the car flew down the embankment. Manyata looked all around her , but she could not see Uday. Uday! Uday! , she called ... fearing the worst. He appeared suddenly and she ran and hugged him. Uday got a bit hurt , when he ended up jumping into a thorny bush. A small amount of blood oozed from the wound on his shoulder. When Manyata hugged him , the blood from his cuts smeared onto her fore-head , and marked her empty maang. I thought I lost u , Uday. Not in this life-time , Princess!
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Next update ... 23rd March 2013 (midnight)!
PRECAP - Uday finds out about his daughter😳!!!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
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Yeah!!!!!!!!
I'm the first one to comment...😉

Well that was a really sad story😭
Roopa aunty killed Veer with her own hands
But, I think it was Veer's wish..😊
But. how can she be so selfish to keep Uday with herself as Veer...😡

Any way I am happy that Manveer are back together..👏
Yes, finally Uday called Manyata "Princess".
The way they fought in the car reminded me of DEK
I just hope that they don't get into another trouble again...

Thanks for the pm.😛
And yes this time without forgetting I have hit the like button.😉

I have already deleted all your pm's
😃
Edited by eyecatchers - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
why 2 res??
if for update, then
RES!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Res unres

Hi navi,😃

Once again I am commenting late (by a day). So do I need to tell you how the update was? Then what ' would be your answer na,😆

As usual it was simply super, but really emotional,😭 think of reading the update at 2 in the morning, sleeping on your bed, that too the part where veer dies. It was really sad, I really felt sad reading it. but you really did apply your knowledge on human nature here

Critically I would say the update was emotional and it did touch my heart, but the last parts were really dramatic and action filled with manveer. Will come to it soon😛

The first part where roopa aunty described her past was heart touching, I really would love to have met the original veer, he sounded to be such a nice fellow, the miracle baby, is that not what you called him na?😃

Roopa aunty would naturally be overprotective towards veer as he is the only living soul she has with her, I really could imagine roopa aunty and her thoughts as veer confessed his love for shivani, his desire to join the army and so on. Poor lady would have visited hell many times😭

I was thinking that she had stopped the newspaper and tv at home because she did not want uday to know the truth about himself, I thought she was one wicked lady separating uday from his family. 😡But you gave me a shock of my life. She did that right from the time veer joined the army, really she is one type of unique specimen.

Veer seems to be a magnet for danger I think. First the incident at the army and then the limepit explosion. He is one brave soul, like our uday. Poor fellow had to suffer a lot, but he faced it really bravely. The part where he was suffering from insufferable headaches, the plight of roopa aunty who saw her son slipping out oh her life , her decision to help her son end his sufferings,, his death in hiss moms hands now you're making me cry,😭 I did not even cry when I read the update, though I was heartbroken. Maybe I was too asleep to notice my tears.😕 I can now understand why you cried while writing the update navi. Man it's too emotional writing these things than reading, honestly

You know how I 'love' shivani, but I honestly felt sad for her😭, her love was dead. Even uday comes to know the truth about his mother, he would naturally feel betrayed, anyone would feel so. His anger can be justified

This brings me to the end of my first part of the comment

Part 2 coming soon, the comment turned to be a bit long so I split it into 2

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
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Di , it was n xcellent updte. I loved it so much😃.
Am so happy Uday is back😳.

Give sum hot scenes with Uday/ Manyta, please di.

Roopa Anty had a very sorrowful story. I cryed so much😭. .
Make Uday take her with him. Dont let her b left alone.

So excited about next part , Uday will meet his baby, So sWeet.


Update b4 Saturday di , pleees.

Yippeee , I was the 55 persons dat LIKed da update.
Edited by mrs.K - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
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Unres

Amazing chapter 👏 👏 👏
Very beautifully written ⭐️ ⭐️
I was right about the first year death anniversery of veer 😳
Roopa aunty story was so so emotional 😭
Poor shivani
Yayayayya uday's memory is back 😳 🥳
I want physical manveer love now please
The emotional touch is super awesome but i want physical please
I loved this chapter
Please update soon
Thank u for the pm
Love you so much soul mate
Hugss
Muah
Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Awesome Update Navina
Very Nice ...
as always Beautifully written
Roopa Aunty's story was very touching ...
I cant believe I m saying this or rather typing this
but I m actually feeling Sorry for Roopa Aunty and Shivani
Uday's Anger was right as Roopa Aunty
continually lied to him and kept him away from his family ...
Manyata and Uday Bickering was cute
Liked how You used another similar accident scene to make
Uday regain his memories...

Will Wait for 23rd March
thank you for PM

P.S. I might feel sorry for Roopa Aunty and Shivani a bit
but I still Hate Akash 😡 Uski Itni Himmat?!!!
Liked your creative take on Uday 's escape from the car
It was no less than a movie scene

Well Done 👏
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago

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