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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Jarin04

hey try to update soon plizz



Will update tommorow😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Priya46

interesting continue soon






Originally posted by: Priya46

Updateee and when u do please pm me



Ok. I'll pme you.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: annesha18

woa awesome
continue soon and pm me



Thank you😆




Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
when is the update coming? waiting for a long time
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Originally posted by: andy.a

when is the update coming? waiting for a long time



aaj toh pakka karongi😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Before starting with chapter I please go through


Character Sketch

first

Chapter I: Introduction

Part I

Year 2011, May10

The path on which he was walking had worn out resembling that no one used to walk through the path. Use of the modern pitched road had made the people forgot that the path even existed. It lead to the middle of forest all the way to other side of the city.

It was almost midnight and he did not own a torch. The burden he was carrying helped him no further in pacing his way.

He stumbled in the root of some huge tree which made him fall down along with the load he was carrying. He immediately stood up trying to readjust himself.

Beads of sweat covered his entire body and face. A gorgeous face otherwise, he was wearing a white shirt and black trousers. The shirt clinging on his torso like a second skin, had stains of fresh blood in it.

He bent down to pick up the load. Only the load was not something but someone. The naked corpse of a gorgeous girl.

He immediately picked it up and tread deep into the woods. Once he was on the spot, he put the corpse down. This time no one is going to find out.

A single red rose he took our from his shirt pocket and laid it on the corpse's hand. Then, he took out a matchstick and collected dry twigs and grasses to cover the body, to help it burn nicely. He lit the matchstick and threw it in the ground. In no time the dead body was all converted to ashes.

****

The girl looked out of the open window of the bus. She was wearing a casual top and blue jeans. No hint of makeup in her face, yet she looked beautiful and naive. The scene outside was changing constantly from valleys to hills. But she was paying no heeds to the scene outside as her mind was far away, far away from the present, in the past.

Manyata, 5 years

"Bhai" young Manyata said tugging her brother's shirt. "Why are father and mother sleeping at this part of the day?"

Jaynandini, was crying constantly and Vijay was having a hard time to console her. He knelt down to reach Manyata's height. "Princess, they are never waking up again. They are going far away from us, never to come back."

"But why, won't they miss us?" she started crying not understanding why her parents were leaving them.

"God needs their help, baby. Besides they are not leaving us entirely, they'll be in our heart. They'll stay among the stars watching us, guiding us. Now wipe your tears and be a good girl."

"If God will need your help, will you leave us?" she asked innocently.

"No, never"

"Really? Promise then."

"I promise you. I will never leave your or Jay's side."

A moment earlier:

"Once you reach Unnati's place, please inform me princess."

"Bro, don't be too hyper. You insisted on accepting the admission otherwise I would have never agreed to be away so far from you and now you are missing me already. Bear the consequence now."

Honk...Honk...

"Princess, if you keep on blabbering, you will probably miss the bus."

She gave a peck on her brother's cheek. "Bye brother. Take care while I am gone and if you find the details of Jay's whereabouts, please inform me."

She got in the bus and the bus droved away, to Navar.

Sorry, princess for breaking my promise. But it's for your own good.

5 hours after

Manyata looked at the watch for the 10th time but still there was no sign of Unnati anywhere. Every time she dialed Unnati's number, it said that the mobile was switched off. Goosebumps rose all over her body as the weather was cold and she wasn't wearing a sweater or jacket to warm her body. Clutching the heavy bag and cussing Unnati for being late under her breath, she decides to find Unnati's home all by herself.

"I have been there once (when she was 10 years). Surely, I can find it by myself." she muttered under her breath.

Strangely there was no cab for her to hire.

What kind of a city is this? Not a single cab in sight. I think that I need to walk till Unnati's house. I don't need anyone; I am capable of finding my own way. Where does she stay? Ang...Angel road, I think it's the place.

"Excuse me, can you show me the direction of Angel road?" she asked a random guy.

"Go straight and go to the right. There you will see a Temple..."

"Manyata, is that you?" a familiar girlish voice said.

"No, it's not. Who are you?" she replied harshly.

"Manyata, don't be childish. Let's go home." Pointing to the man "Thanks for your help, Bhaishab but now you may leave." The man left.

"Unnati, so rude of you, he was just showing the directions. By the way, where the hell where you? I tried your cell a number of times. Still no reply from you. I am never talking to you again."

"Chillax, Manyata, when Unnati's here why fear. My cell ran out of battery. So, I couldn't call you or receive a call from you."

Manyata crossed her arms in response.

"Manyata sorry, nah. Mom had sent me a little earlier but I met my old friends and I completely forgot about you. Sorry, please."

Still silence.

"Tsk..Tsk..not even a hug seeing your friend."

Manyata heart softened at once and she embraced Unnati.

Unnati breaking the hug "Now can we head home, you look tired."

"And hungry." she added.

The crappiest thing I have ever written in my entire life. Still I am posting it guyz. This was mostly Manyata. Another update will be Udayveer. Manveer's gonna take time. So have patience. Do comment and don't forget to hit the like button.

With love,

-DEATHmusic-

Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
yaay me first...

res/.

Update soon...😉
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
ooyyee kitthe hai chapter one????
kahi dikh nahi raha hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
That was an awesome update👏 thougha bit confusing😊./...lolz i think a lot is there up in store and we'll have to wait...update soon n thanks a lot for pm
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
it was awesome
eagerly waiting to read more
update asap
yhx fopr the pm

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