SS: An Untold Tale Of Love ||ch2 at pg 20||

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Hey guys!!! Seeing many wonderful work by the best of the writers here in DEK forum, I too have decided to start an ss named "An Untold Tale of Love"

"There are many things in the nature, that are undefined and beyond the knowledge of human."


SS: An Untold Tale Of Love

Prologue

The man sat in the couch, his eyes glued on the TV screen.


"3 girls in the past 1 month have been reported missing."


The news channel showed pictures of 3 young and beautiful girls striking a pose.


"The whereabouts of these girls are unknown. The reports of their missing was terminated as they were considered to have eloped.


But the reports of their missing has been re-opened when one of the three girls, named Aaliyah was found dead in the forest. The body has already decayed and the skeletons were found buried by some of the trekkers.

In the past 6 months, 20 girls are reported to be missing. Investigation is going on and the police are going through missing reports again as they suspect all these missing cases are interrelated. For more reports, please keep on watching Channel News."

The advertisement started playing.

A pretty girl wearing only an over sized shirt entered the room. She snatched the remote from the man and closed it.

The man for the first time took his eyes away from the TV and looked at the girl with an annoyed face.

"How dare you?", he said.

The girl ignored the last sentence and sat on the man's lap and started undoing the buttons of his shirt.

"You give no more importance to me." she said in a seducing tone and started kissing his lips.

The man too kissed the girl back and in no time their clothes lied in heaps in the floor.

"Let's get this thing over with." he said before carrying her away to his bedroom.

A minutes later, the whole mansion was filled with the scream and cries of the girl.

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So how was it??? Please hit the like button and comment if you think it was worth it.

And drop in your suggestions whether I need to continue it or not.


With love,

-DEATHmusic-





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CHARACTER SKETCH

Name: Uday Singh

Age: 20

Status: Single

Description: Hot, handsome and rich. Has no idea who his father is and mother (Vasundara) died at the age of 12.

Name: Saleen Singh

Age: 18

Status: In a relationship with Unnati (without the knowledge of their parent)

Description: Cute, a Casanova (earlier) and a charming guy. Loves his brother Uday (does not share a blood relation)

Name: Avantika Singh

Status: Dead

Description: Mother to Udayveer singh

Name: Grijraj and Maya Gujral

Status: Dead

Description: Died in a car accident.

Name: Manyata Gujral

Age: 19

Status: Single

Description: A naive girl who does before she thinks

Name: Vijay Gujral

Age: 29

Status: Single

Description: A protective brother of Manyata and Jay. Though loves and connects to Manyata more. He thinks he's responsible for Jay leaving the house. Is rich as after their parent's death, he inherited all the money.

Name: Jaynandini Gujral

Age: 17

Status: Single (Missing)

Description: Left the house to be individual.

Name: Unnati

Age: 18

Status: In a relationship with Saleen

Description: A down to earth girl is a cousin cum best friend of Manyata.

Name: Brijraj and Komal

Description: Parent to the only child Unnati. Loves Manyata, Vijay and Jay as their own child. Insisted Manyata to stay with them when they heard that Manyata will be studying in the Mount Navar School, in Navar.*


Name: Inspector Grover

Age: 30

Description: Is currently handling the missing case of the girls.

* Navar...what can I say about it. The first thing I don't know that a place such as that exists or not. I kinda invented the name. It is beautiful, cold. Ok, guys imagine that it is Darjeeling or Manali like.


P.S. Other characters will be introduced soon.And I have changed Vijay as I need a tough Vijay in this SS

Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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INDEX


  1. Prologue
  2. Chapter I: Introduction
Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow an awesome beginning dear..do continue soon and pm me if possible😃
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Originally posted by: snowdream

wow an awesome beginning dear..do continue soon and pm me if possible😃


Glad you liked it
no problem for pming
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written!!!!!!!
Who is the man???????
I hope it is not Uday...
Please pm me the next time.
Waiting for the 1st chappy...
I think it is a mysterious one!!!!!!!
It will be fun reading your SS.
And by the way your second attempt is wonderful
Update soon!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue Hina👏. Very intriguing!!! I hope that guy isn't Uday ... because I think he might be the person responsible
for those missing girls !!!
And now killing the girl that he was with😒!
But it was a fab start...
please continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: edward123


Glad you liked it
no problem for pming

yup😆
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Originally posted by: eyecatchers

Beautifully written!!!!!!!
Who is the man???????
I hope it is not Uday...
Please pm me the next time.
Waiting for the 1st chappy...
I think it is a mysterious one!!!!!!!
It will be fun reading your SS.
And by the way your second attempt is wonderful
Update soon!!!!!!!!!



It may be Uday dear but it may not be also😕
Glad you had fun while reading the ss
The next update's gonna take a long time.

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