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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Nice update !

Loved it !

What is going on with Uday ?

Manveer scenes were too cute 😳

Actually is Akaash really a problem ? 😆

I mean why doesn't someone just throw him out of the window !

Actually even if he is not thrown out then he should really see Uday there !

He needs a good lesson 😆

BTW why do you always leave your updates at a cliff hanger ?

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Great update Sanju 👍🏼. Very interesting. Uday meeting those mysterious guys , I think 🤔 (maybe) he was buying a bag of disguises from them ; that's how he , so cleverly dressed himself as a salesman and Manyata couldn't even make him out😉. Anyway ... that's just a thought! Manyata and Kantabai's altercation was superb. I could just picture Manyata in her jungli-billi mode ... defending Uday😳. The slap was too good , but the best part was when Kantabai shielded herself from a "SUPPOSED 2nd SLAP" 😆. Loved this line : "aww' itni galiya kahase seekhti ho princess?"

Manveer scene inside the chawl , was awesome👏. Awww , Uday helped with the house-work ... HOW CUTE .

Now , why did Akash have to come and ruin their sweet moment😡. I'm sure whoever those "2 pairs of eyes" belonged to , they must've told Akash to go home now. Hope Uday remains hidden 😉 & isn't caught! Eager to read the next part , please continue soon ! PS ... I did not "LIKE" the update , because the stupid button is not working😭.

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

aww,itw as superbbb!!!!!!!!!! manveeerr scenesss sooo soo magicalll!!!!!! uday ki baatein and manveer cuming closee!!!!!!!!!! hayee akash kaha se tapak padaa!!!!!!cntinue soon!!!!!!!

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Rapchik rapchandous update CC 👏 👏
Loved the way Manyata stood out for Uday...yeh hui na baat...and yeh sab Uday ne sun liya..wow 😛
starting wala part thoda mysterious tha...what was there in the bag 😲 sales man ka costume? 😆 and woh do log Akash ke khabri toh nahi 😕

gosh ab kya karegi Manyata...kamre me Uday, darwaaze par Majnu😉 aur Majnu ko dusra time nahi mila ghar lautne ke liye 😡

next update is eagerly awaited 😃

Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago

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Kritika

@Karkit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Wow nice update
manyat so possessivness to uday n slap kantabai ws so gud
manveer persnal movement me again akash entry hmm i hate akash
cntinue soon n do pm me if it possible

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-
res...comment cming soon🤣

edited:
Love the update
Kanta bai was hilarious and serves her right for getting a slap.😆
Manveer moment was again ruined by Akash😡
Continue soon

🤣🤣

thanx for the commnet! yup, will continue soon!

sorry for it bringing in akash!!

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: annesha18

"aww' itni galiya kahase seekhti ho princess?" he said to her coming even closer to her.
loved this line
awesome chappy
thx for the pm
ammoni manyata fought for uday
so sweet of her
uday in chawl was super cute
manveer dng work together
for what did akash come
update asap
pm me

thanx for the comment annesha!! glad u liked it!u will know it jald what akash was doing in chawl 😉😉 till then just wait n watch!

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: -Zina-
super duper cute update sanju...
loved it loads... glad u liked it

my fav part was manyata's possessiveness for uday.. mine also

she surely loves him a lot but is misunderstanding with friendship... yup, she is a dumbo sometimes

ManVeer had good time together and i was enjoying reading it but why did you have to end it and that akash kuttay ko abhi tapakna tha kiya i hate him so so much... aww... i know all my readers are so so so angry on me for the akash matter!! he will walk out of the house very very very soon!!

Please update fast...please please... yup, i will update fast!!

Thanks for the Pm. pleasure is all mine 😊

thanx for such a beautiful comment zina!!

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: anushruthi
Great Update
very nice thanx dear!!
UV hid in M's bedroom?? lolz!! hell yeah
I can imagine what pakash will think when he
sees UV thr ... he shud see UV there first

cont sooon yup, i will as soon as possible!!