Complete my Incomplete dream - Page 5

Originally posted by: panchaali

I did not get proper response in my os...i don't know wheather i'll update it or not 😔

I think most of the ppl disliked the story

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Hey I got the idea...

here it goes...U buy some food from the school canteen and mix some churan in it😈..(laxative)..force Akash somehow to eat it. Go to staff room saying that you were extremely sorry at ur and UV's behavior and so wanna share ur lunch with him...after he has it quietly leave the place and then wait for the class. He will come to class and tolerate the lesson torture for sometime. After that the laxative or churan will start its game...Game of Bathroom!!...😆...He won't be able to concentrate in the class and do have a room-freshner with you handy for trying to save the other students from the laxative wrath...

Afetr that class will be cancelled and u and UV can go for the movie...😉

So tell me how was the idea??

Originally posted by: princessSonia

no way didzz

dn't say like dat...

its amazing...😃😃👏

i really loved it n so did d others...

Originally posted by: panchaali

Then why did I get so less likes and comments!!!

It got the least response

BUt that OS took all of my energy

I put my best effort on it

But now seeing the response I am frustrated

I am not gonna publish it any soon

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

hey payel ur OS is going very well...specially the concept...so don't be disappointed...people will eventually start reading it...

Originally posted by: panchaali

Annesa u r truly a genious...this is the best plan 👍🏼👍🏼

hats of to u dear 🤗 and more hugs 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: annesha18

now complete the story

Originally posted by: panchaali

When will they like it!!!

Its an OS it will finish within two more updates 😔