UDAYVEER 'S LAST BOW - Page 15

Originally posted by: htgcute

Just a superb update but the ending was surely sad... didn't hoped that but still it was really gud...

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

nice update.
but ending was sad.but anne manyata does not deserve such a betreyal and horrible death.i felt sorry for her.

plz continue wid book 2.but in dat i request a happy ending.

Originally posted by: fireroad99

this was a really sad story and i had a question afterknowing the truth why didn't uday jump in the pond and safe manyata .

plz write a book 2 but i had a request plz don't put a sad ending to this

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Nice update 😊
Ending was sad, I don't think Manyata deserved to die
Ver well written
⭐️
I also request book 2 n not a sad ending
😊
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: annesha18

i am glad you liked it jiji
yea sad ending because mostly detective stories that i read have sad ending soo but if i write book two it will surely have a happy one

Originally posted by: snowdream

then why don't u write it anni..this story deserves it...All happened for no reason...Manyata had a devil death and so do her parents..This is wrong..I know u did gave a loop hole of keeping M alive.. it can or cannot be M as per that point..please write book 2 anni😊

Originally posted by: jhinuk_ashish

good..a different type of ending..

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awww that was a sad ending...
awesomly written...
loved the whole...
plz plz annesha do write bk 2