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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
great chapter, loved it just love the way u write!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg awesum blossom gr8 loved it loads plz update soon and do pm me...
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CHAPTER 6
uday did not keep her waiting for a long time ,he returned within an hour , but to find his lady love peacefully sleeping on the bed ,his eyes were hooked on her beautiful body posture ,she looked like a sleeping water baby as the light emerging from the pink sky of the dusk reflected on her white milk washed skin .it was hard for him to resist her beauty ,she was like a drug to him so unknowingly to his heart desire he placed his hard manly lips on her dedicate soft forehead ,it gave him a heavenly feeling ,his heart pounded and his stomach was filled in with an unknown excitement .his desire grew even much more stronger ,he wanted to kiss every part of her body ,he wanted to make her his forever .but his feeling was short lived he departed his lips from her forehead ,and he stood ther efor sometime drinking her beauty. after 15 minutes when finally his stairing session was over he took his towel and went to the washroom ,he gave himself a quick wash before Unnati 's mehendi rasaam ,on coming out he found mannyata hunting for something in her luggage
UDAY:what are you searching for?
she turned to speak but was awestruck he looked like a greek god with those fine muscularine body which was undecently covered by a red serwani ,it was next to impossible for her to take her eyes off him but an evil smirk which plasstered his face bought her back to her sences ,she did not know how to react ,she felt her knees shaking ,she felt her cheeks going betroot as she managed to look blankly at the floor and stammer
MANYATA:i ...ummm...need a suitable dress for mehendi and ...taiji said me to wear a sarii but i do ...not have one
she sweat and froozed in her situation
UDAY:ok so even my wifey wants to wear a sarii
manyata blushed at his cute accent and looked up to find uday just a few inches away from her ,his presence made her body shiver as a spine ran down her nerve ,he decided to tease her he brought his lips close to her neck and breathed heavily then rubbed his nose against her eyes and finally said in a husky voice
UDAY:DO not worry dear i am getting you one of my ma sarrii and i guess the blouse is just your size
she felt herself mlting ,she felt her falling on her knees but soon came back to her sences as a sarrii came flying in her direction she caught it ,the sarri was a crimson red in colour with a deep back cut blouse with just a golden string holding the two ends ,her excitement was uncountrolable ,she raced to the washroom ,she handled the sari with care and the sari did wonder to her body ,the colour glowed her skin even more ,she had a sparkling beauty as she came out of the washroom uday 's eyes were hooked on her she somehow managed to steal his intence glare and look away
UDAY:shall we leave wifey
she nodded her head in a yes as manveer made their way down to the party everyone eyes were glued on them they were jut like a match made in heaven manyata was driving the guest crazy by her sexy avator uday on taking it as a high alaert warning wrapped his arms around her bare waist with a look saying "this is my girl" but soon manyata was pulled away by a crowd of ladies and uday got indulge talking to mens in the party ,everybody was appling mehendi and it was manyata turn she patienly sat and blushed furiously as the lady wrote uday 's name in her hand .udya did notice the change in her expression and passed a sweet smile to her ,the party took a long time to get over finally it was dinner time manyata and all the other ladies had there dinner while the mens including uday stayed back for some drinks .after dinner manyata went to the room while uday was forcefully kept back for drinks .hours passed by it was now a quarter after one and the drinks were high on him somehow he managed to make it to his room ,by then manyata had changed into a black short nightie and was waiting for uday but by seeing his such condition she was shocked she held him strong by his arms and made him lie on the bed ,she was horrified and tensed by his condition
MANYATA:DO you need something uday
UDAY:i need you baby i need your love manyata you are the best girl i ever met and i have been so bad to you i am so sorry baby you are so good so beautiful so understanding and sooo caring i have been so harsh ,mean but believe me i do have a reason for my such behavior i am a good person
manyata sat by his side took his heads in her lap ran her fingure through his hair it was the best way to pacify a drunken guy as uday continued with few tears drop
UDAY:i was five when ma left us i was returning from my school that day she had come to take me to home she was crossing the road when suddenly a truck hit her i saw her bleeding to dead my ma my ma
saying this he started to cry like a kid of five ,manyata understood his condition and her heart ached by seeing him cry
MANYATA:uday do not cry please its ok please
UDAY:do not leave me manyata ever please do not leave me i love you
UDAY:i love you
this was the last word that escaped from his lips before he fell uncouncious on her lap ,the last sentence echoed in her ears she felt an unknown happiness was she in love with him ,then why was she happy with his confession a zillion question ran inside her mind to which finally only one answer came
I LOVE MAJOR UDAY VEER SINGH
she sat there admiring his cuteness as he got a bit more curdle in her lap suddenly her phone rang on the first call she picked it up and after something she whisphered
MANYATA:i can't believe jai you are alive
she placed uday swifty on the pillow covered him with a blanket and tipped towed out of the room and then out of the home
uday frowned as he was having a night mare
UDAY NIGHTMARE
manveer was standing in the edge of some unknown cliff as uday his hands closed over her waist pulling her close to his chest and her protest was silenced by a pair of determined lips and for the first time manveer lips meet ,his lips pressed intensly againts her but soon she tore her lips away from his mouth and said angrily'

MANYATA:uday i will never forgive you for what you did?
UDAY:but i have rights on you
MANYATA:what freaking rights sre you talking about i do not love you i can never ok i love someone else
saying this she lost her balance and slipped off the cliff he was not fast enough and saw her falling off the cliff infront of his eyes with a scream of pain he got up
NIGHTMARE OVER
on getting up he looked around ,he was sweating and by now it was nine in the morning .after sometime his eyes searched for manyata but on not finding her in the room he rushed down stairs but his father 's voice caught his attention he frooze as giriraaj said to unnati
GIRIRAAJ;

:it was from police station beta manyata met with an accident the last night they local people took her to hospital but the police could not save her she is no more
uday could just mummer
"thsi cannot happen you cannot leave me i got you just now no you cannot die nooo"


uff done wid this chappy
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i hope i did not bore u all i hav decided to end this story soon after
a few chappy



Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
welcom back waiting for ur updat
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
awww the chapter was too awesome.👏
Uday hayy he is so madly in love with her..😳😳😳
...but then why did u wrote that end annesha...M dies i know its not true but why did u mark an end there..now will have to wait till next update..
update soon will be waiting
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: roopali15

welcom back waiting for ur updat


thx dear for the warm welcome i was missin u all soo much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Welcomeee back aneshaaa and awsssmmm chapiii
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: huma12.

Welcomeee back aneshaaa and awsssmmm chapiii


thank you so much begunaah will be updated tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
It was a wonderful update. Really loved it. Im so happy uday confessed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a wonderful update. Really loved it. Im so happy uday confessed. Manyata is no more! im sure she will come back. Eagerly waiting 4 the next update so do continue soon and thanks 4 the pm!:-)

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