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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Awsomeee...update vibha
update soon
thanx for PM.



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Fantastic update Vibha👏.thanks Navina😳

I loved the shopping scene ... and of-course , before that , the part at the escalator😳. That was beautifully done!
glad you liked it😃
The wedding was PERFECT☺️. I enjoyed how Manyata got carried away in the kiss😉😆(WELL , Who could blame her😆).
ya any girl in her place would have done the same☺️
It was a wonderful update ,Thanks again
thanx 4 the PM😊. Welcome😃
PS ... I am unable to "LIKE" the update ...
everytime I tried doing so - I got a message saying:
ERROR IN POSTING YOUR REQUEST😭!
Sorry about that! i understand...don't worry..i guess you must be using chrome browser like i used to...it wouldn't let me 'like' a single thing😭 its alright🤗


Thank you for the nice comment 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a great update
the shopping thing was really funny
but I love to go shopping
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

that was a great update
the shopping thing was really funny
but I love to go shopping



Thanks Bhumika😃yep i love shopping too...but ladkon ko shopping achchi nahi lagti 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was soo sweet!!!!!! manyata and uday shopping,escaltr,bride dress wala scene and the wedding,everythng wa ssoo sweeet!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

it was soo sweet!!!!!! manyata and uday shopping,escaltr,bride dress wala scene and the wedding,everythng wa ssoo sweeet!!!!😊



Thanks Pia 😃
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago





Manyata's mind was in a daze and it all felt like something happening on TV. As the newly weds reached home, She was forced to let go her husband for sometime as she had to get ready for the second wedding. The aunts got her out of her gown and brought her 'Shaadi ka joda' (wedding dress) out. They left her alone to get dressed. She was crying so much today.it seemed tears would never stop. She missed her mother every second. Manyata looked at her 'mehendi' decorated hands and had a smile. Yesterday while applying mehndi, the Mehndi artist had told her that she had written Uday's name somewhere on Manyata's hand and Manyata had to challenge Uday to find it. She imagined him searching for it and got lost in her fantasies like ever.

Thinking about writing and her mom, she at once remembered that since the day of the unspeakable incident, she had not even looked at her mother's diary. She felt guilty about that and took the diary out once more. She randomly turned pages and a particular entry caught her attention. It was dated 14th April 1994. Komal had written:-

Dear diary,

As I write this entry, I think this might be my last one. I won't be here in this house any more. Sorry diary I have to leave you like this, but I have no choice. This house which was once the heaven descended on earth has now become a living hell for me. No it's not only my husband or Mona who is responsible for this state. I'm equally responsible. Kaash maine waqt rehte apne aap ko rok liya hota'.chota sa jhagda kab mahayudh ban gaya pata hi nahi chala, now I know for a marriage to be successful not only love is important, but mutual respect and trust are equally required. It's important to give your partner some space away from you. Maine apne Ego ko rishton se zyada ehmiyat di, aur Giriraj ne bhi aisa hi kiya'kaash! kaash waqt par main sambhal jaati"

Manyata turned the page and saw that, that was indeed the last entry. She had been given so many gifts today by friends, relatives and wellwishers for the wedding. But Manyata felt this was the best gift she had received today.

She could feel her mother's aura in the room and said aloud "thank you mom, aap ne mujhe sabse khubsurat tohfa diya hai, main aap se waada karti hoon ki aap se jo galatiyan huyi, main unse sabak seekhungi'Aur aap ki beti ek achchi patni aur ek achchi maa ban kar dikhayegi'I promise you mom" she touched the diary to her heart and wiped her tears.

Someone knocked on the door. "Manyata bete, baarat (wedding procession) ke aane ka waqt ho gaya, jaldi karo" some aunt said. The wedding was going to take place at the ranch itself.

The baraat consisted of Uday's relatives from his real parent's side. And they were staying in the old bungalow where Uday's parents use to live before their death. Uday was just a baby when he was handed over to Giriraj so he didn't remember them at all. The baarat set off from the bungalow with dance and fire works.

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Manyata looked at her reflection in the mirror and couldn't recognize herself. She was decked in the solah singar (16 items of make-up) that every Indian bride dresses herself for her groom. She wore a heavy red lehenga. Her hair was decorated with mogra (jasmine). She wore maang teeka on her forehead and the heavy nath (nose ring) adorned her nose. A necklace of pure gold with intricate designs that was the wedding gift from her father increased the beauty of her neck. She wore heavy red bangles on both her hands and her solah singar was complete with bichua (toe rings). Mehendi adorned her hands and feet.

Then some one loudly hollered "Baarat aagayi, baarat aagayi"

The huge Mandap was set up in the garden. Manyata drew her chunari (veil) over her head and was taken to the mandap for the 'Jai mala ceremony'. She hated the veil that prevented her from looking at the most Handsome-est being on earth, her Uday.

She had a sneek peek at him from under the veil and was astounded by his sheer good looks. At last she was taken before him and she put the 'Varmala'(Garland) into his neck and he did the same. The holy smoke from the 'yagya' was purifying the air and the Pandit read out the wedding Mantra's. Giriraj did her 'Kanyadan'(giving away the bride) by placing her hand in Uday's mighty hands. Then Uday filled her hair parting with 'Sindoor' and tied 'Mangal sutra' into her neck. After that they stood up for the final ritual that was the most essential of all. The 7 pheras. The bond that united them for seven lives. Seven Promises. Seven rules that married couple have to follow.

Manyata promised him that her husband was her Primary god from today onwards and he promised her love, Protection and care in all 7 lives. She took an oath that she will be the keeper of his home and hearth while he promised he would give utmost importance to their home and the children.

During the 4th circle they changed position and Manyata moved to the front signifying that if during anytime of their married life, a hurdle or difficulty comes up she will face it before her husband. Uday made her a promise that he will fulfill her every wish no matter how small or big.

Together they promised that they will always be faithful to their spouses and will always be together no matter what.

At last the seven holy circles around the divine fire were complete and they were a married couple in every sense. All this seemed very surreal and in a state of haze they took blessings from the elders.

After a sumptuous wedding feast and receieving congratulations from guests, the final ritual of bidai (farewell) of the bride started.

This is the most emotional moment of all for a bride during the wedding. Manyata picked a bowl of rice and threw it over her head three times. Meaning to imply that her maternal home be always filled with prosperity.

She hugged Daima first and then Giriraj. All were sobbing uncontrollably. Uday decided to lighten the mood and said "Pari, tum kyon ro rahi ho? Tumhe bida ho kar koun sa videsh jaana hai? Yahi isi ghar me toh rehna hai'rona toh mujhe chahiye'apne haathon se phansi ka phanda gale me latka liya maine" he winked at her and she elbowed him.

"Tum mujhe akele me milo toh sahi, main tumhara kya haal karti hoon dekhlo" Manyata whispered so that only Uday could hear. "Achcha kya haal karogi Pari?" he said loudly embarrassing her and drawing an amusing glare from the other people.

At last they were ready to leave and as the newly weds sat in the decorated car everyone waved them good byes. After some 10 minutes, Manyata noticed they were going in the opposite direction from the Ranch.

"Hum kahaan ja rahe hai Uday?" she asked but got no answer.

During the same time, in a faraway Jail, Agastya commited suicide. He was convicted of two killings and was sentenced to death by hanging. He didn't want the disgrace of hanging unto death. He slashed his wrists with a blade secured from somewhere and killed himself. The last of trouble makers in Manveer's life was dead and they sped away without being aware of Agastya's death.


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"Uday yeh aage toh Ghana jungle nazar aaraha hai, lagta hai hum raasta bhatak gaye! raat ke is andhere me ab hum wapas kaise jaayenge?" Cried out Manyata.

"Pari, hum wapas nahi jaayenge'" Uday said suddenly stunning her. Don't know why but her hair stood on end hearing him and a chill ran down her spine. As she backed off, he came near, very near'so near she could feel his hot breath on her face.





Ok guys here ends chapter sixteen...unfortunately aap ko ek aakhri chapter jhelna padega there's one more part😆

Thank you to all who commented and liked the previous parts 🤗

(P.S : a prominent writer of our forum recently gave a warning to her readers about number of likes, that i too wish to give😉
agar aap logone mujhe 25 'L
ikes' nahi diye toh next chapter update nahi hoga 😈 and the new SS will be abandoned too..🤣
i send about 60 PM's..so i deserve atleast that much...am i asking too much guys? 😊)

note to 2 of my favorite readers : Anushruthi and Sonia i notice you haven't commented in last 2 chapters 😭 was it that bad guys?
but its ok if you have been busy, ignore my note if that's the case😆

Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ye kya sixteenth chap n no pms????
haawww...
reswa.
jyada bhav khane lagi hain tu after becoming a dazzler
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

ye kya sixteenth chap n no pms????
haawww...
reswa.
jyada bhav khane lagi hain tu after becoming a dazzler



haww abhi abhi toh update kiya hai. itni jaldi kaise PM bheju?😲abhi PM bhej hi rahi thi tera comment dekha aur answer karne aayi...im sending PM's now😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaayyy!!!!
FIRST TO CMNT.
FINALLY MANVEER WEDDING!Z
AUR SONE PE SUHAGA!!
AGASTYA BHI MAR GAYA.
AB MANVEER KE BEECH ME SACCHI ME KUCH NAI, AISA MUJHE LAG RAHA THA, JB TAK MAINE PRECAP NAI PADHA.
KYA THA WO??
AGR HAPPY ENDING KO TUNE SAD KIYA NA, TO TU DEKH. SB KUCH FAIRY TALE JAISE KIYA AUR AB YE KYA??
IRADA KYA HAIN TERA??
DAAL ME KUCH KAALA HAIN, YA PURI KI PURI DAALHI KAALI HAIN??
ACCHA CHAL THIK HAIN, SORRY SORRY, PM KE BAARE ME MAINE KUCH OVER REACT KIYA
BIG COMNT, AFTER 1

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