|| Tumse meri lagan lagi ||SS Pt 17 updated pg 66 - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb chappy dea!!
bechaara uday😆...had 2 go 2 shopping!!
luvd manveer's mirror wala scene
felt sad for manyata...she must hav missed her mom a lot...
d church wedding was d best part..!!
thnx 4r d pm...nd plz continue soon!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Vibha, thanks for the pm. I read all the chapters in one go and it superb and shame poor uday had to go shopping and manyata must have really missed her mom but I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow vibha it was a very cool update
😃manyta was like a stubborn child when she wanted uday to go shopping with her
their church marriage was really cute
it was so beautifully written
cant wait for the traditional marrige😳
update soon and thaks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Part Vibha
Manyata is scared of escalators there not scary at all... so sweet of Uday he picked her up
Cont Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved It! Thanks 4 the pm n waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Fantastic update Vibha👏.

I loved the shopping scene ... and of-course , before that , the part at the escalator😳. That was beautifully done!
The wedding was PERFECT☺️. I enjoyed how Manyata got carried away in the kiss😉😆(WELL , Who could blame her😆).
It was a wonderful update ,
thanx 4 the PM😊.
PS ... I am unable to "LIKE" the update ...
everytime I tried doing so - I got a message saying:
ERROR IN POSTING YOUR REQUEST😭!
Sorry about that!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome but manyata kissing uday was funny
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsomeee...update vibha
update soon
thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

reswa!!!

unreswa
VIBHA
ME

"No, never'nahi matlab nahi'main tumhare saath wedding shopping par nahi jaa sakta" Uday protested. She coaxed, cajoled even sulked but he didn't pay heed.

typical ladke jaisa behaviour

"Tumhe manane ke mujhe sou (100) tareeke aate hai bachchu" she thought and sat on the sofa with her head bowed. Manyata decided to use the most powerful weapon given to womankind. She made sobbing sounds and started counting in mind one, two, three'

naughty girl... she is always like that

Before she could count upto ten, her cries had the desired effect on Uday and his heart melted like ice cream kept under the hot sun. He reached her and sat beside her. He placed a hand on her back and said "Pari, please stop crying'tumhe pata hai na main tumhare aankhon me aansu nahi dekh sakta, achcha tum rona band karo toh tum jahan kahogi main wahaan chaloonga tumhare saath"

aaawww...

She raised her head and gave him a mischieivious smile. There were absolutely no tears in her eyes, the devil' "Achcha toh yeh sab natak tha, jao im not coming with you" he turned his face aside in false anger.

lol

Uday looked in her direction she went and thought about the previous two months. He had changed so much in them. If any one had predicted before two months that in two months he would be going shopping of all things, that too with a girl, he would call them crazy. But he liked the changed 'Uday' and he had absoulutely no complaints with life. Maybe except one; who the hell created this shopping thing?

hahahaaa... who created shopping... and uday, ye pyaarka jadoo hain.

As they stepped on it Manyata held Uday's hand tightly and closed her eyes shut. Suddenly floor vanished from under her legs. She opened her eyes to see he had lifted her up in his hands! People stared at them and Manyata blushed beet root red. Their eyes met and Uday didn't realize when they got out of the escalator. A child's giggle brought him to senses and he lifted her to the ground.

hahahaaa... awww that was so genuine. and and and uday stopped like that holding her!!! funniest. thanx to the child

She looked around her room and felt her throat tightening with emotion. If only her mother were here. She picked up Komal's photo that was on table and said "I miss you mom" and hugged it to herself.

Sweet

Manyata's eyes were full of tears, tears of joy. They reached the groom and Giriraj placed Manyata's hand in Uday's. She couldn't believe all this was for real. The wedding was too fairy tail-ish and she was afraid to blink her eyes. It was time for wedding vows and they repeated after the minister.

Soon all the ceremonies were over and the minister declared. "I now pronounce you Man and wife, you may kiss the bride"

Manyata lowered her eyelids out of natural blush and Uday leaned towards her for the kiss. One look at her new husband and all her apprehensions were forgotten. It was just a peck on the lips but the touch of his mouth scorched her and she wanted more and more. She threw her arms around him forgetting the place, the people everything. Uday had to gently force her to let him out of the embrace.

MANYATA !!!! i actually shouted out. lol she is incredible

ok i had to make 3 attempts to get this chapter across

Tell me guys how did you find the chapter😃

Thank you all who liked and commented in previous chapter🤗

(i must admit i drew heavy inspiration frm 'Twilight-breaking dawn' here😳 us baat ke liye dande nahi maarna)

AAWWW!!!! it took u three tries!! never mind dear...
it was all great!!
cant wait for indain wedding
luv u loads!!



Haila😲 almost poora chapter quote kar diya😆
loved your comment dear
thank you so much🤗
and yes indian shaadi next update me hogi😉

Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

nice part waiting for manveers suhagrat😉



Thank you Rupali😃

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