Manveer OS - FORBIDDEN LOVE -VIEWBIE'S MESSAGE-p31 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Navi darling this was again a very beautiful OS👏...Loved it..But I have only 1 complain..Next time story should have a happy ending.😭...your last story where UV was a soldier was also a sad one and I could not have my mind out of it😭..plz don't do that again

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

another amazing OS navina 👏👏, it was sweet with cute young manveer college memories😉, it was hot with the sizzling romance and love making of Yuvraj Udayveer and Sister Manyata 😳, and it was gritty with their final act of dying for each other with each other 😊

Thanx Chitra 🤗 . Their love grew from sweet & innocent to intense & passionate. For a love like theirs ... 1 which has no future - it can only culminate in 1 way. Your analysis is spot-on Chitra 👍🏼.

Originally posted by: angelina6

hey navi its unintetionally u hurt there feeling you apolozies it thats great and apologies in public its really brave you accept your mistake thats good but its not your fault and its mistake u undo it

Thanks for saying that IQRA😳.

so we will keep on waiting for part u deleted and i hope that cristian member will forgive u

I'll update it on Thursday.

Yes - both girls have forgiven me ... and we are friends now😃.

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Superb OS navi

Thanks Sweta 🤗 .
OMG...manyata's loveletter was soo..sweet...

... and extremely short😉.
OMG...manveer toh mar gaye...
Afsos ki baath 😔.

Thanx for PM.

Welcome😊.
Sweta

Originally posted by: Roze12

wow...awesum&amazing...OS... 👏 ..manveer scene hayeee super hot... 😳 ...loved it...great concept darling... 👍🏼 ...but ending... 😭 thanks for the PM... 🤗

Thanx Roze 🤗 . Glad u loved it. Wecome 4 the PM😊.

Originally posted by: -Zina-

omg! That was so touchy...abi k liye res ronay k bad comment kru gi... 😭

Originally posted by: A-broken-heart

Awesome os navina dear.loved it.

Originally posted by: Shahista01

As always Navi, beautiful and very well written.

Thanx Shahi 🤗 .

The emotions both uday and manyata went through

From early love, the letter, udays forced marriage

And their sensuous union and ever so tragic ending.

We shared in their love-story ...

From sweet & innocent 😳 ... to , intense & tragic !!!

Next Os should be a happy ending please... all the sadness making me sad.

Okay - DONE 👍🏼.

Muuaahh but loved it. well done navi...

Originally posted by: anushruthi

AMAZING os Navi

Thank u ANU 🤗 .

loved it very very nice

... thanx.

the ending was fitting i suppose it cudnt have UV-M 2gthr

Exactly!!!

married or sumthing as a prince married to a nun vud 1ly tarnish

their love

Such a union would not be accepted.

but still d ending was sad

Yeah it was ... but no worries - I WILL BE REWRITING THE SECOND HALF AGAIN.

Very well written Navi dear 👏

looking forward to more os from u in de future 😊

Well Dear - there's 1 coming on Monday😉.