my frist attempt - Page 2

Thanks guys but roze bhai saying to me that I have to give character sketch n to develop full professional writer so I have to say that I m not professional writer n honestly speaking I have my personal problem! So if u want to write like this?

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third part! Yuvraj remain silent then rani said : kaya hua essa tho nahi ki tum apna naam hi bul gaye ho???? Then Yuvraj(in mind) agar is bata diya ki mai ek normal family se belong karta hu tho yeh mujhey se kabhi Dosti nahi karey gi nahi mai esa nahi kar sakta hu then say to rani " hai tho hum bhi kisi normal family se thodi hai mai bhi raj gharaney se belong karta hu " then rani:"lagtey tho nahi ho" Yuvraj in shocked look to kaya rajkumaro key pankh hotey hai kaya???? Tumhey tho mere naam se hi samjh lena chey ki mai ek rajgharaney se hu" then rani : han tho thik hai na tum itney gabra kuy rahey ho" then Yuvraj goes to a corner n said " nahi mai kha gabra raha hu" then rani :" acha thik hai Wase kha key rajkumar ho???? Then Yuvraj get very tensed said in mind control agar abhi se gabra gaya tho kese kam chalega yeh tho tujhey pakad hi legi then he give naughty smile n say kuy puch rahi ho khai esa tho nahi tum mujhey mai interest lene lagi ho???? Then rani : "what rubbish log hum mai interest letey hai hum logo mai nahi samjhey hum tho esey puch rahey they" then Yuvraj: " acha thik mai jaigradh ka prince Yuvraj hu" rani :" acha tum jaigradh key Yuvraj ho" with smile Yuvraj "kuy tum janti ho kaya " rani : "han janti hu " Yuvraj in shocked look kaya tum janti ho???? Rani:" han kuyki humrey pita jaigradh key Yuvraj se humari rishtey ki bat Chala rahey hai" Yuvraj again in shocked : "kaya " Rani:" kaya hua tumhey acha nahi laga kaya" Yuvraj in mind acha tho tab lagtna na jab mai rajkumar hota then said :"nahi esa nahi hai humra matlab hai humhey is barey kuch pata nahi hai dad se puchna padega" rani: "dekho na kesa ajeeb iteyfak hai humrey pita ji humra rishta jis key sath jodna chatey hai wo humhey es traha mileyga " n get blushed n see with him romantic eye then Yuvraj get fursted n said : "kaya tum apney pitaji keney se shadi karogi kaya" then Rani:"han kuy tum esa kuy puch rahey ho???? "Yuvraj : " mujhey tho laga tha ki tum apni marzi se shadi karna pasand karo gi " rani : " han hum jantey ki tumhey esa kuy lag raha hai kuyki hum thodey azad khayal key hai na par humhey bacpan se sikhaya gaya hai ki shadi Humesha barabar mai honi chey n feel sad n said phele hum dartey they ki wo insaan kesa hoga jis se humari shadi hogi par hum kush hai ki humari shadi ek achey insaan se honey ja rahi hai " Yuvraj in angry look " tumhey kese pata ki mai acha hu " rani : "dekho na hum tumarey sath kitney wqat key sath hai other tumney humra galt fiada bilkul nahi uthaya" Yuvraj : " dekho ese kisi par bhi wishwas nahi kartey hai" rani :" tum esa kuy khey rahey ho???? Yuvraj :" kuyki mai kisi or se payar karta hu or usi se shadi karuga " rani get shocked ! To be continue ... I hope u guys liking it! ;)

read both d parts!!

Hi 😊. I just read all 3 parts of your story and it's really nice.

A nice story should go with a nice name. Why don't u give it a title? Do continue soon!

Fantastic job 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi . I just read all 3 parts of your story and it's really nice. A nice story should go with a nice name. Why don't u give it a title? Do continue soon!

good suggestion Thanks!

Originally posted by: catty2000

Fantastic job Continue soon ... Do PM me

thanks actually I m from mobile so I get problem with my pm box so I don't pm but next time I sure pm!

Thanks for supporting ! so I decided my title for my story so title is love always finds a way! ( payar apna rasta dundh hi leta) so like it!

Originally posted by: deepanti_2007

Thanks for supporting ! so I decided my title for my story so title is love always finds a way! ( payar apna rasta dundh hi leta) so like it!