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Posted: 12 years ago
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i hope u guys like it!
yuvraj drives car to home n suddenly car stop in mid of jungle then he try to start car but he could not do it then suddenly rain starts n girl voice come from jungle then he moves towards to jungle to find from where voice is coming from then he saw😲 a beautiful girl with wet hair running towards him n he memorized with her beauty n suddenly that girl comes n hold his hand said to run then he start running with her 😆 then he suddenly realized n said why we r running then she said sshhh run n take him to the some old hut of jungle then he also try to say that why we r like this then she takes her hand hold her mouth then a beautiful eye contact he looking to that girl n he see that girl is looking out of hut then also see out of hut then he 😲see a tiger he almost get scared to see that tiger then tiger move out from there after sometime then girl get relaxed to then she realized that her hand is on his mouth n she removes it n 😳 said "tum kitna boltey ho ufff agar mai hath nahi rakti tho wo tumhey kha jata pata hai tumhey" n yuvraj said" mujhey kese pata hota ki wo mere pichey hai " n then she said nothing then yuvraj asked " acha tumara naam kaya hai" then girl said rani or tumara" then yuvraj said "yuvraj" then girl " ohhh tho tumara naam yuvraj hai but tum yeh mat samjhna ki tumara naam yuvraj hai or rani tho humrey bich mai kuch ho sakta hai" then yuvraj " ohhh tum tho apney aap ko hur ki pari samjhti ho na" then gril " kuy nahi hu kaya" yuvraj said " itna gurur" rani " wo tho hai" then he remain silent n keep looking to her! to be continue...
i wrote that much if u guys like it then i will write it more😉

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deepsoul thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry guys i suddenly press enter so i have write like this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...it's good👍🏼
plz continue soon
thanx 4r d pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u soo much guys for ur support actually I m little bit nervous becoz there is soo much writer on if n i m not got writer so write it in short n guys like it that enough for n I will continue to it !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lol!
That was a cute start...i really liked it..!
Do continue...!
Will be waiting..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc dear 👍🏼
do cont and pm me whenever u update nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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second part!
so yuvraj seeing her n saying in his mind that " khey tho shai rahi hai kubsurat tho hai yeh" n suddenly break his eye view with rani voice! then rani say" ufff ho yeh barish kab rukey gi" then yuvraj saying in his mind " kash yeh yeh barish na rukey" then rani say" tum yaha jungle mai kaya kar rahey ho?" yuraj: " mai ghar jaa raha tha tho achanak ghar kharab ho gyee or tumari awaz suni tho mai tumarey pichey chala aya wase tum yaha jungle mai kaya kar rahi ho or yeh sher tumarey pichey kese?" rani: " actually mai yaha sikhar karney ayi thi or humney dekh ki refil mai ramsingh goli dalna bul gaya😡 yuraj: yeh ramsingh ko hai?" rani: ohh ho ya tho tum bol lo ya tho mai "yuraj:" 😕 nahi tum hi bolo " rani wase tumney pucha hai tho bata du ramsingh humara servant hai ek bar ghar janey do fir us ramsingh ko tho mai dekh lu gi" yuvraj: ( in mind) ab tho us ramsingh ki kher nahi" rani: kaya tumney kuch bola?" yuvraj: " nahi tumney kuch suna" rani: nahi" yuvraj: fir kaya hua?" rani: fir kaya humhey bagna pada or tum mil gaye agar ramsingh ney goli dali hoti na tho hum yaha nahi fasttey" yuvraj: (in mind) yaha ramsinghji kaya setting ki hai agar aap ki tasveer mil gye na tho mai us pe har chada key roz puja karuga" rani: " kaya" yuvraj: " kaya kaya kuch nahi acha tum kha se ho? rani: " hum hai princess rani from devgragh or tum kha se ho?" then yuvraj get schoked😲 n remain silent!
to continue...
this my next part i hope u guys like it!😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb deepx bhai
plz..update soon thanx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both parts are Awesome:) thanx for the PM:)waiting for the next chappy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update... 👏 ...cont soon...thanks for the PM... 🤗

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