Fnmade Epi 55:Ego, the more, the bitter

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Uday Lovie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesum awesum awesum ..

i mean great work do write soon nd pm me ...

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

oh god ye to aur bhi complicated ho gaya sab kuch!!!!!! galti dono ki hi hai,manyta should have said dat uday has only lust for her not love,manyata is clearly overreacting very much,bt then uday ne jo halkat ki,dat was also veryy veyry bad,he should have cntrlled his anger,agn manyata shouldnt have behved so cheap,agn uday is at fault,he shouldnt have kissed a random girl jst to teach manyata,so bth r at equal fault,i jst hope they make up soon!!!!! abd u have dcrbed gr8!!!!! suprb wrk!!!!!

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@.maleficent.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

yeh kya hogaya
my manveer they are fighting
and uday forcefully do that to manyta but manyta is also pagal she wears that type of cloth and make uday jealouse but i like that y everytime manyta become jealouse
nice plot cc teame
lovely update iknow you have something hidden in youe mind to glue us to your updates
really very well written and love this epi

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nahi mujhe mera sweet uday wapis chahiye 😭😭

i dnt like dis behaviuor of uday 😒

i mean hw can he do dis 2 manyata😲

bt cnt be angry on uday...😉

nice epi

do cont soon

n thnks 4 d pm.

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hey beautifully written.. loved the episode😊

omg wat uday did was marital rape.. i wudnt expect this from him even how much ever pissed of he is coz manyata's behaviour😭
i agree manyata was being extremely stubborn and even i was irritated by her cold behaviour towards uday.. i felt bad for uday..
but this was until uday's anger took over and wat he did during the night..

manyata is the one who started this. but she definitely doesnt deserve this treatment by uday..
yes she was being rude n showin cold shoulder towards him unnecessarily..

i dont blame him for smooching another gal coz even manyata was trying to do the same by dancing with guys.. d only thing i am angry at uday is for behavin literally like an animal😡

hmmm at least jay n jagat r enjoyin their honeymoon..
poor ppl even their trip is being kind of spoiled bcoz of this tension between manveer..

hope things sort out soon... n ego is replaced by understanding and affection..😳

Edited by Sunshinegirll - 12 years ago

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shana0127
Sorry i have not been able to comment for past few days

as i have been really busy

Really Gargi u and Saira are doing great job together

Keep it up 👍🏼

But then wanna say one thing dont make UV a s**t pls, a real Man never forces himself to an extent that he rapes somebody he loves , whatsoever bitch that woman turns out to be .

I know Shana..Uday went too much ahead...BUt everything will be fine in the next chappy...m sure things will improve and both will realise their mistakes😊...

and thanks for the credit. Sairah said u are a bit busy so didn't disturb you😊

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Zina-
WHAT!!!!😭
ye kia ho raha hai this episode was a dhamaka ...instead of lessening the misunderstandings they have come to an extent...🤢 i did not like uday's stupid behaviour...for his freaking right he misbehaved with his own wife...that's terrible 😡 he would have taken the matter with peace, nahi usko to bus sex krna tha...or ye manyata bhi aik number ki pagal hai...dono brabar pagal hain 😡😡 what kind of a king and queen are they, who cant even handle their marital life...now i don't see any way of their relation getting as fine as before...the situation has become worse😭😭...! come on CC team after the bomb shell of VB, u have attacked us...now make it fit and fine as before, and who is anamika i guess a new vilan 😕...
coming out of fiction 🤣 i would like to tell the writer that the story was written very beautifully..👏 u are a great writer!!
update soon!

Calm down Zina...Uday is super hurt as Manyata is constantly insulting him for a small thing. Ya both are mad but in coming chapters things will improve dear...

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Nice update gargi 👏👏, only u could pull something like this 😳😳, loved the way u have portrayed both the characters. But seriously a girl who is raped by her own husband would never like to have any men around her be it her husband himself, si M dancing on the club with boys is a bit hard to digest. Their relation have gone from bad to worse. Lets see how it shapes further

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awesome gargi.

Very well written

Loved that you gave us an insight 2 paris.

Did not like uday in raping mode ...sorry.

And manyata dressing and behaving like a ...t, lol

Really their small fight has escalated out of control.

And u wrote it beautifully.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Hi Gargi 😊. First things first :

... for posting the episode so early. I read it on my phone at 12 o'clock ( SOUTH AFRICAN TIME). Then ,I immediately started sketching out tomorrows episode. I'm very grateful to u for this!!! Secondly ... Very SORRY for the late comment!!! Thirdly ... MIND-BLOWING job on the episode Dear👏 .

It was fantastic . Manyata provoked Uday to such an extent that he blew up in the worst possible way. U have written that scene so perfectly👍🏼.

Loved the update Gargi😳,

... thankx for the PM😊.