(J of A Wife - Book 2) REDISCOVERING LOVE!

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

navi

i do want manyata and veer scenes so it becomes manveer😳

now veer is married

you did not know?

to manyata of devgarh

yes udayVEER is married to manyata

your o- . iam A-ve

see both are negative same pinch

the other sounds could be akash firing at udays car maybe to make sure uday gets killed that is if you hit the fuel pipe or somethin like that it would explode

iam not much sure about car mechanics

waiting for the next update😃

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Oh God navina these two chapters were the most puzzling updates of yours uptil now seriously i used to think till now iam a very good guesser but i was so so wrong... Both these chapters left be totally bewildered😕God now iam so confused not only me each one of your readers would be... U r seriously very evil😡 coming to chapter one:it was intense emotional and very heart wrenching ... Manyata suicide scene was written beautifully... She decided to suicide rather than getting married again...🥱But iam glad she survived n yay shex pregnent 😃Chapter two:well i didn't expected veer would enter so soon but it's good hex inn... Hmmm he looks exactly like uday that's something fishy...lol but hex tharkiii aisi haalat me bhi he liked manyata jadoo teri nazar😆 well this tharkipan shows he might be uday...now everyone is confused of weather hex uday or veer but i think hex not cox as in the promo when she hugs or kisses veer she see's uday... Ab agar tu koi aur raitaa beech me phela degii den humeh nahi pata. . are you seriously going away for a month or sab ki taang kheench rahi ho???

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: angelina6

happy new year navi my love

happy 2013 to u also Igra!
coming to update it was really fantastic and beautifully written
you are really good writer i love your writing

Thanks Dear 🤗 .
firstly beautiful update and i realy love unnati and manytas bonding there are just perfect bhabhi and nand

Uday's favourite girls😳😉.
i reaally like giriraj in this update in this update he is so concern and worry about manyta i am liking him in this update

U will continue liking him in future too!
and i really like that cute and funny scene of ultrasound room its really very well written

thanx.
and this ds and mahashaba only wants heir they didit have any concern about manyta i hate them they should atleast give her some time to overcome this shock and give her some time to think

Exactly - they are NOT giving her a chance to mourn😡!
and manveer are soulmate manyta is so confidence on uday being alive at its baby girl uday gets what he wants so sweet
and that nightmare part was really good
and this line of your promo of whole book is confusing me

Manyata buried her head into Veer's chest , she panted heavily. From the corner of her eye, she spotted Uday.

i really cant understand this line

Iqra Dear ... U know the answer to this - U mentioned it to me before! But in case u need a reminder ... the answer is in BOOK 1 (chapter 3.3)!!!!
and i think this shivani is going to be big trouble

Not if I can help it😈!
and i think when ds will force her to remarry her for heir
our stubborn manyta will not tell her that she is pregnant but will left the house and after leap as u stated in prolouge that she will written to india as some problem in devgard ans at that time she will meet veer for second time and that time she will had cleaned shave and well dressed as uday used to be and manyta will suspect him as uday and all story willt urn up like that only

WOW!!! Well done 👏👏👏 (99% - right)
and so sorry for my non stop chattering lol and long comment

No sorry necessary!!! I loved it 😳.
so update now 😆(kidding)

SUNDAY!!!
thanx for pm and love u for wonderful ff and update

Welcome for the PM ... love u Dear 🤗 !!!

Thank u so much for this awesome comment 🤗 ... it brought a huge smile to my face😃!!!

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

navi a very happy new year to you 😛, and thanks for the amazing update👏.

So Manyata is going to have a daughter and no one knows about her being pregnant, well her reason for not telling anyone about her child is understood, but as in the promos of the book , it looks like after 11 weeks of giving birth still no one knows about her child.

Especially when DS wants to get her married, even then she doesn't disclose her being pregnant, she could have told about the child and the coming waris for both the estates.

But I guess she chooses to give up devgadh and leave forever, as her own family is hell bent on trading her like an object just so that they have a heir 😡, I'm so not happy with DS here, had i been in Komals place, I would have fought with DS,I know she is a yuvrani but right after a month of her husbands death they want her to get married so that she can give a heir and devgadh can be safe is just ridiculous and so inhuman . This also might explain as to how the issue in Devghad reached till the point of whole village getting quarantined , because M was not there to look into the matter, and apart from M and Uday the Devgadh's have no one to look after the real well being of people and now with things getting worse, I think she decides to step in and help the Devgadh royals and save the assess of those Mahasabh people🤢.

Navi when Manveer get together I so want to see DS regretting for not supporting her own grand daughter .

I really loved M-Giriraj bonding, hopefully when her own family would put this ridiculous decision of remarrying her (remarrying is not a bad decision, but right one month after the husbands death and that too for the sake of a heir and not her happiness is ridiculous for me), giriraj supports M and stand for her with her decision 😊.

OK so now its clear as to why Dr Priya dint recognize Uday's look-alike and most importantly u r again giving us a hint as to Veer might be Uday with his fishy Mom, she is definitely hiding something.

OK so the kabbab mein haddi Shivi is introduced 😆, (This name reminds me of rishika from LMYAM and her chemistry with AK sucks🤢), lol I have a feeling that Shivi is gonna act like a stupid cupid for M-veer lol😆. I love her bro though 😆

Ok so veer gets this nightmares though they are not very clear, I have a feeling when Uday's car went down the cliff, a lot more happened there that we dont know yet😛, plus the other sounds I feel that he is somewhere also remembering his attack on jaigadh😕, But again Uday's nightmare and M's uneasiness at the same time again points that might be v-U are the same person .

It was an amazing update navi, at first why M hid her pregnancy from evryone , especially her Devgadh family was looking quite odd to me, but now everything is clear, and I'm so disappointed in DS and Komal most of all as a mother (she was one spineless character in teh serial, I so wanted her to fight and be with her daughter here but sigh..) that I feel its right that M kept them away from their heir

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Awesome update 😊

Your writing is heavenly and excellent ... You should try writing a novel 😉

And just one confusion ... Is Veer Uday or not ?

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: sweetshab
wonderful update navina

Loved it

Thanks Shab 🤗 .

Soo finally veer is UV :D

Really???
Heee love u for bringing him back frm the jaws of death

I did save him ... BUT HE'S NOT BACK YET!

...true love can bring back life
In UV's case his princess nd lil princess brought him backk!!

Loved it

Awww😳.

Aww DS already thinking of getting manyata remarried :(
For DS ... only the heir matters - NOTHING ELSE!!!

aww manyata nd her strong belief..and yed UV will be backk

Cont soon

I will - soon😉.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: safia25

that sound was i think like that "clink chank clank".. Good question.. Well navi three weeks would be like one month 😭 😛 ... And can i ask u that r u sudden going for a 3 weeks break?? 😕

Okay Safia - I'll make a deal with u. If u can answer that question I asked u - I will only take a 2 week break!!!

The break is for medical reasons.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: andy.a
navi
i do want manyata and veer scenes so it becomes manveer😳

now veer is married

you did not know?

to manyata of devgarh

yes udayVEER is married to manyata

your o- . iam A-ve

see both are negative same pinch

the other sounds could be akash firing at udays car maybe to make sure uday gets killed that is if you hit the fuel pipe or somethin like that it would explode

iam not much sure about car mechanics

waiting for the next update😃

Sorry Andy ... no romantic scenes just yet.

Nice deduction about the sounds - but it's WRONG! Do try again😆.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: catty2000
Awesome update 😊
Thanks Vidhi 🤗 .

Your writing is heavenly and excellent ... You should try writing a novel 😉

Me ... write a novel 🤣. Will u buy it?

And just one confusion ... Is Veer Uday or not ?

For that answer ... u will have to wait😉!!!