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Originally posted by: Cotswolds

Too good panchaali. Not a romantic guy but i find this Shuddh manyata romance very cute and appealing. Liked her bro as well.

Do dil mil rahe hain. Magar chupke chupke...

Pls update soon.. U have a movie , serial material at hand.

Originally posted by: sanah12

Awesome update
Loved it loadss!!
Love manyata and unnati's part
The dialogues and the emotions were superb!!
I really loved manyata and uday's part
The last part was sweet and cute
Really love manveer
Waiting eagerly for the next update
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: panchaali

Originally posted by: annabh

Hey Payal jiji,
How and Where have you being all this while?

Got really busy with my office work..
so bad don't they know that you need to be here cause i am missin u

😭 I too miss you dear 😭

But she did not read my update yet
she comes online in the evening time

Okay 😊

Loved the way Manyata solved out everything
But feeling really bad for her?
What will happen when Uday leaves?
That I won't tell you now 😉
amboo ettu sa tell na

Story ends within few chappy, now no spoiler 😉

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Payel di, I'm soo glad that u updated! I didn't know my words had such a profound impact on you 😉.

mom of the forum demanded update on Mother's Day, how can I deny 😉😆 I had to overcome my block 😊
But seriously - I'm really happy that u overcame your writer's block ... because I was truly missing this story (It's one of my favourites, u know 😳). Thank u so much for the dedication😳 🤗 . The update was spectacular!!!

awwwn thankz sweety 🤗
King Shankara was a nice addition - Unnati got a wonderful partner! I enjoyed his poke at Uday for his dancing skills, and I liked Manyata being Uday's mouth-piece , as he was too embarrassed to talk 😆. Aah , Uday finally got a promotion in Manyata's eyes ... from STUDENT to FRIEND 😊. I'm just waiting for her to realise, he's way more than a FRIEND also.

That will happen soon coz only few chappys are remaining 😊
Well , the end was shocking ... can't believe Manyata asked to drink liquor😲. The next update should be REAL FUN to read 😉.

May be may be not 😉

Manyata is so distraught about her student leaving her ... MORE THAN what she should be for her best friend leaving her to be married. It's TRUE LOVE 😳 , I tell you 😆.

Yaap true, Vijay vai is confident 😉

Thoroughly enjoyed the update di,

loved it loads!

Do continue soon,

I'll definitely try 😊

thanks 4 the PM.

Welcome 😊

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

wow finally u r back!!
nd i really hope ull give regular updates.
ofcourse not daily ik thats not possible
but atleast not after months!!
now being a friend i can demand that cant i ;-)

Well I too did not want to update sooo late but my office work pressure increased so I forgot the story completely 😭 Then after Navina's demand slowly it came back 😃

well coming to update.
it was jus superb

Thankz 😳
i rely hope manyata realises her feelings soon!
and glad that unnatis gonna settle now!
loved it loads
and yeah pls pls update soon
u cant leave me tempting for long after giving such a delicious update!

I will try to update soon😊
loved it loads again
nd yeaj love ya 2...

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Manyata unnati scene was so beautifully written.Manveer scene at d end was cute